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emcee squared · 10-07-2022, 11:54 PM

I’m an emcee that’s as ill as can-be.
Why would you battle-me?
u know you’ll never rattle me
Donno why you’re after me
’s tantamount to blasphemy
Holding six but only blasting 3!
IS the way it has-to-be
I know who all the rappers be!
Everything from Master P to Apathy we know jus’ how the TrackShouldBE
Actually, the audio is a catastrophe and by that-I-mean it’s masculine and put people in the ground like where a Casket-be
Factually, the Snow Goons combined with a pirated program similar to Pro Tunes we can skEwel these Old Fools in how an old dude could rap better than the
new school Told You that I could do things to Fold You ‘til your loved ones Hold You and your skin gets Colder
This is the Order of the celebrated, 607 ELEVATED MIX FROM HEAVEN
C’n Tell-we-made-it
Fated to be the 1-of-the-greatest
2023 we doin’ shit that’s never been created
I don’t even have to say it, I don’t have to grab the mac & spray it, or grab the mic and hand it to anyone who knows how to deliver it literally individually. critically!!!!
Pray I never land, at your location
I don’t need a standing Ovation if I enjoy my, Vocation
Oration is nothing more than finding a beat for motivation and then being sort of patient
never-assume-you’ll make it, but never fake it
if you lose it; better take it
back,
&we out

JustRap · 10-08-2022, 03:19 PM

I'm not sure what to make of this. It's obviously not off the top
Of the dome cause it's written, so more like a key style
I'm gonna guess a kind of low effort piece...
The rhymes are alright and it does flow but
The lines are super long, which I don't like, personally
So for a text drop I think it could have been more presentable
Nothing super noteworthy to mention in the piece
It's kinda just there....idk, to me this could have been
Dropped in the O.M. cypher section or something...
What does one critique here? All I can say is it's obvious
You can spit a little bit but having never read from you before
I'm not sure to what extent that is, would like to see
A more fleshed out and polished piece from you

emcee squared · 11-11-2022, 03:08 AM

You've sugarcoated it, but you're absolutely right.
This kinda sucks as it goes on, and could belong on a cypher. @Mr. J if you wanna put it there.
I was just likely just fucked up and rapping and posting it

10-07-2022, 11:54 PM	#1
emcee squared Banned Join Date: Aug 2015 Posts: 430 Rep Power: 0	new free I’m an emcee that’s as ill as can-be. Why would you battle-me? u know you’ll never rattle me Donno why you’re after me ’s tantamount to blasphemy Holding six but only blasting 3! IS the way it has-to-be I know who all the rappers be! Everything from Master P to Apathy we know jus’ how the TrackShouldBE Actually, the audio is a catastrophe and by that-I-mean it’s masculine and put people in the ground like where a Casket-be Factually, the Snow Goons combined with a pirated program similar to Pro Tunes we can skEwel these Old Fools in how an old dude could rap better than the new school Told You that I could do things to Fold You ‘til your loved ones Hold You and your skin gets Colder This is the Order of the celebrated, 607 ELEVATED MIX FROM HEAVEN C’n Tell-we-made-it Fated to be the 1-of-the-greatest 2023 we doin’ shit that’s never been created I don’t even have to say it, I don’t have to grab the mac & spray it, or grab the mic and hand it to anyone who knows how to deliver it literally individually. critically!!!! Pray I never land, at your location I don’t need a standing Ovation if I enjoy my, Vocation Oration is nothing more than finding a beat for motivation and then being sort of patient never-assume-you’ll make it, but never fake it if you lose it; better take it back, &we out Last edited by emcee squared; 10-07-2022 at 11:56 PM.

10-08-2022, 03:19 PM	#2
JustRap Member Join Date: Jul 2022 Posts: 54 Rep Power: 0	I'm not sure what to make of this. It's obviously not off the top Of the dome cause it's written, so more like a key style I'm gonna guess a kind of low effort piece... The rhymes are alright and it does flow but The lines are super long, which I don't like, personally So for a text drop I think it could have been more presentable Nothing super noteworthy to mention in the piece It's kinda just there....idk, to me this could have been Dropped in the O.M. cypher section or something... What does one critique here? All I can say is it's obvious You can spit a little bit but having never read from you before I'm not sure to what extent that is, would like to see A more fleshed out and polished piece from you

11-11-2022, 03:08 AM	#3
emcee squared Banned Join Date: Aug 2015 Posts: 430 Rep Power: 0	You've sugarcoated it, but you're absolutely right. This kinda sucks as it goes on, and could belong on a cypher. @Mr. J if you wanna put it there. I was just likely just fucked up and rapping and posting it