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Old 07-25-2022, 09:20 PM   #1
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Bring the G19 where you live, pussy. I’m taking alllll your cash
Fuck ur environment. I’ll pull the plastic out & separate the paper from some trash
Plenty bullets, Ima shoot those - let a few go if you don’t act right
Quit the tough talk Res… you let a Phew go whenever you pass a black guy
And the way you look at a Labrador? I could never trust you for real
Whether it’s cooking or fights w/ your wife – you got an Old Yeller up in your grill
Can’t even guess what she weighs. She never spent a day in gymnasiums
Impossible to give a ballpark figure when she’s the shape of Yankee Stadium
She gotta lap dance to pay ur gambling debts cuz you fucking suck at poker
Irony 101… she’s Grinding Bones for Bread and looks like a fucking Ogre
I’ll haggle on price w/ my shooters, but they bringing the 4 for you dummy
Roulette wheel: you dropped the ball..
& when a number gets settled on you losing more than your money
Okayyyy you champed last season but all you hearing now is hell nahs
Wasn’t ur first rodeo. But you could only hold on so long before you fell off
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Old 07-30-2022, 01:44 AM   #6
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Hello, mate.

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Aiyyo
Ayy this dude is my target?
See this feud end in carnage..
I’ll STILL win with writers block. It’s the truth let’s be honest.
cuz even a Flux Capacitor struggles to be fueled by YOUR garbage. /
Punch you so damnn hard. Yeah this scrub will blunder..
Tumble, up and under. Face Rockeddd: Now u resemble Korg in Thor Love & Thunder./
Yes I’m an Asian that can’t see for shit. Bet that produces laughter right..
Get smacked tonight..
Mines small.. but YOUR quarter eyes will pay for the river ride to the afterlife. /
It’s unfinished business.. this Aussie is tiny.. he skimming bitches..
Nirvana cover. Any pussy you get that baby dick will be swimming in it. /
This teacher aint in my tier. You know Res going through losers..
I’m in a different class, bro.. & it turns out yours is locked in with a school shooter. /
Bruise this bitch.. we already know you gonna lose this kid..
cuz when it Boils down to it.. this mahfucka shoulda just signed out like User did. /
You aint come strapped, teach.. don’t make me smack you fast..
When he say a 9 dumpinnn.. quickkk, better get that 3rd grader a bathroom passsss./
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Bring the G19 where you live, pussy. I’m taking alllll your cash
Fuck ur environment. I’ll pull the plastic out & separate the paper from some trash

Decent...


Plenty bullets, Ima shoot those - let a few go if you don’t act right
Quit the tough talk Res… you let a Phew go whenever you pass a black guy

Raw...dope...


And the way you look at a Labrador? I could never trust you for real
Whether it’s cooking or fights w/ your wife – you got an Old Yeller up in your grill

Nah...


Can’t even guess what she weighs. She never spent a day in gymnasiums
Impossible to give a ballpark figure when she’s the shape of Yankee Stadium

Lmaooo.


She gotta lap dance to pay ur gambling debts cuz you fucking suck at poker
Irony 101… she’s Grinding Bones for Bread and looks like a fucking Ogre

Lmso


I’ll haggle on price w/ my shooters, but they bringing the 4 for you dummy
Roulette wheel: you dropped the ball..
& when a number gets settled on you losing more than your money

Ok


Okayyyy you champed last season but all you hearing now is hell nahs
Wasn’t ur first rodeo. But you could only hold on so long before you fell off

Ok...

Pretty good, some dope lines, few misses....the phew line was the highlight to me....all in all dope verse...



Ayy this dude is my target?
See this feud end in carnage..
I’ll STILL win with writers block. It’s the truth let’s be honest.
cuz even a Flux Capacitor struggles to be fueled by YOUR garbage. /

Aight


Punch you so damnn hard. Yeah this scrub will blunder..
Tumble, up and under. Face Rockeddd: Now u resemble Korg in Thor Love & Thunder./

Lmao


Yes I’m an Asian that can’t see for shit. Bet that produces laughter right..
Get smacked tonight..
Mines small.. but YOUR quarter eyes will pay for the river ride to the afterlife. /

Dope


It’s unfinished business.. this Aussie is tiny.. he skimming bitches..
Nirvana cover. Any pussy you get that baby dick will be swimming in it. /

Lmaooo I loved this


This teacher aint in my tier. You know Res going through losers..
I’m in a different class, bro.. & it turns out yours is locked in with a school shooter. /

Ok


Bruise this bitch.. we already know you gonna lose this kid..
cuz when it Boils down to it.. this mahfucka shoulda just signed out like User did. /

Ehh didn't smack that hard


You aint come strapped, teach.. don’t make me smack you fast..
When he say a 9 dumpinnn.. quickkk, better get that 3rd grader a bathroom passsss

Lmaooo


Good verse, highligyt was baby dick line, best bar of battle, this was a dope verse, I fuck with it.



Both were good, really good battle guys, I feel Dom had to few more misses than res, and res came better overall

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Aiyyo
Ayy this dude is my target?
See this feud end in carnage..
I’ll STILL win with writers block. It’s the truth let’s be honest.
cuz even a Flux Capacitor struggles to be fueled by YOUR garbage. /
^ cool. good reference
Punch you so damnn hard. Yeah this scrub will blunder..
Tumble, up and under. Face Rockeddd: Now u resemble Korg in Thor Love & Thunder./
^ like the connection between Korg and face rocked but this didn’t work for me

Yes I’m an Asian that can’t see for shit. Bet that produces laughter right..
Get smacked tonight..
Mines small.. but YOUR quarter eyes will pay for the river ride to the afterlife. /
^ dope, this was cool

It’s unfinished business.. this Aussie is tiny.. he skimming bitches..
Nirvana cover. Any pussy you get that baby dick will be swimming in it. /
^ lol okay

This teacher aint in my tier. You know Res going through losers..
I’m in a different class, bro.. & it turns out yours is locked in with a school shooter. /
^ decent concept could have used some retweaking

Bruise this bitch.. we already know you gonna lose this kid..
cuz when it Boils down to it.. this mahfucka shoulda just signed out like User did. /
^ filler

You aint come strapped, teach.. don’t make me smack you fast..
When he say a 9 dumpinnn.. quickkk, better get that 3rd grader a bathroom passsss./
Mahfucka.
^ I’ve heard this kind of concept used before, cool connection to him being a teacher though

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Bring the G19 where you live, pussy. I’m taking alllll your cash
Fuck ur environment. I’ll pull the plastic out & separate the paper from some trash
^ decent. Like how both openers are trash bars lol

Plenty bullets, Ima shoot those - let a few go if you don’t act right
Quit the tough talk Res… you let a Phew go whenever you pass a black guy
^ this is dope and funny lol

And the way you look at a Labrador? I could never trust you for real
Whether it’s cooking or fights w/ your wife – you got an Old Yeller up in your grill
^ ehh decent I guess, alright flip on the Asian eats dog thing

Can’t even guess what she weighs. She never spent a day in gymnasiums
Impossible to give a ballpark figure when she’s the shape of Yankee Stadium
^ lol alright

She gotta lap dance to pay ur gambling debts cuz you fucking suck at poker
Irony 101… she’s Grinding Bones for Bread and looks like a fucking Ogre
^ hahaha cool

I’ll haggle on price w/ my shooters, but they bringing the 4 for you dummy
Roulette wheel: you dropped the ball..
& when a number gets settled on you losing more than your money
^ this is aight way to keep the gambling connection going

Okayyyy you champed last season but all you hearing now is hell nahs
Wasn’t ur first rodeo. But you could only hold on so long before you fell off
^ this was filler to me.

Res mentioned the fact he had writer’s block and man you could feel it throughout. Wording was off and concepts were hard to come by. I think he gave it his best but I’ve got Dominate being the more consistent battler here

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Bring the G19 where you live, pussy. I’m taking alllll your cash
Fuck ur environment. I’ll pull the plastic out & separate the paper from some trash
Took my hungover brain too long to understand this but I like it
Plenty bullets, Ima shoot those - let a few go if you don’t act right
Quit the tough talk Res… you let a Phew go whenever you pass a black guy
Nice. Can’t believe I haven’t seen this done before
And the way you look at a Labrador? I could never trust you for real
Whether it’s cooking or fights w/ your wife – you got an Old Yeller up in your grill
Lol
Can’t even guess what she weighs. She never spent a day in gymnasiums
Impossible to give a ballpark figure when she’s the shape of Yankee Stadium
I did this once but yours is written better tbh
She gotta lap dance to pay ur gambling debts cuz you fucking suck at poker
Irony 101… she’s Grinding Bones for Bread and looks like a fucking Ogre
Nice
I’ll haggle on price w/ my shooters, but they bringing the 4 for you dummy
Roulette wheel: you dropped the ball..
& when a number gets settled on you losing more than your money
Ok
Okayyyy you champed last season but all you hearing now is hell nahs
Wasn’t ur first rodeo. But you could only hold on so long before you fell off
Think I’m missing something here


Aiyyo
Ayy this dude is my target?
See this feud end in carnage..
I’ll STILL win with writers block. It’s the truth let’s be honest.
cuz even a Flux Capacitor struggles to be fueled by YOUR garbage. /
Worded nicely for synchs a long bar concept is decent
Punch you so damnn hard. Yeah this scrub will blunder..
Tumble, up and under. Face Rockeddd: Now u resemble Korg in Thor Love & Thunder./
Cool
Yes I’m an Asian that can’t see for shit. Bet that produces laughter right..
Get smacked tonight..
Mines small.. but YOUR quarter eyes will pay for the river ride to the afterlife. /
Ok
It’s unfinished business.. this Aussie is tiny.. he skimming bitches..
Nirvana cover. Any pussy you get that baby dick will be swimming in it. /
this is Better
This teacher aint in my tier. You know Res going through losers..
I’m in a different class, bro.. & it turns out yours is locked in with a school shooter. /
Nice
Bruise this bitch.. we already know you gonna lose this kid..
cuz when it Boils down to it.. this mahfucka shoulda just signed out like User did. /
Lol
You aint come strapped, teach.. don’t make me smack you fast..
When he say a 9 dumpinnn.. quickkk, better get that 3rd grader a bathroom passsss./
Mahfucka.
Lol nice closer


Good from both. Dom kinda fell away with his last two but he had better high points. Resin read smooth af but the angles just weren’t quite as clever for me.

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Bring the G19 where you live, pussy. I’m taking alllll your cash
Fuck ur environment. I’ll pull the plastic out & separate the paper from some trash
Neigh wrote this lol.. liked it tbh

Plenty bullets, Ima shoot those - let a few go if you don’t act right
Quit the tough talk Res… you let a Phew go whenever you pass a black guy
Simple well executed

And the way you look at a Labrador? I could never trust you for real
Whether it’s cooking or fights w/ your wife – you got an Old Yeller up in your grill
This was OK, reminds me of a line I heard in live battle vs Asian person

Can’t even guess what she weighs. She never spent a day in gymnasiums
Impossible to give a ballpark figure when she’s the shape of Yankee Stadium
Well worded but ballpark is played to me

She gotta lap dance to pay ur gambling debts cuz you fucking suck at poker
Irony 101… she’s Grinding Bones for Bread and looks like a fucking Ogre
Cool, hit

I’ll haggle on price w/ my shooters, but they bringing the 4 for you dummy
Roulette wheel: you dropped the ball..
& when a number gets settled on you losing more than your money
Okayyyy you champed last season but all you hearing now is hell nahs
Wasn’t ur first rodeo. But you could only hold on so long before you fell off
Roulette was coo..Iked the different parts. rodeo felt well as a closer but familiar

Aiyyo
Ayy this dude is my target?
See this feud end in carnage..
I’ll STILL win with writers block. It’s the truth let’s be honest.
cuz even a Flux Capacitor struggles to be fueled by YOUR garbage.
Liked the b2tf reference & executing this one.

Punch you so damnn hard. Yeah this scrub will blunder..
Tumble, up and under. Face Rockeddd: Now u resemble Korg in Thor Love & Thunder./
Alright, had swag..

Yes I’m an Asian that can’t see for shit. Bet that produces laughter right..
Get smacked tonight..
Mines small.. but YOUR quarter eyes will pay for the river ride to the afterlife. /
Nice, I liked the concept & relatated personal

It’s unfinished business.. this Aussie is tiny.. he skimming bitches..
Nirvana cover. Any pussy you get that baby dick will be swimming in it. /
Original.. liked it

This teacher aint in my tier. You know Res going through losers..
I’m in a different class, bro.. & it turns out yours is locked in with a school shooter. /
Decent personal

Bruise this bitch.. we already know you gonna lose this kid..
cuz when it Boils down to it.. this mahfucka shoulda just signed out like User did. /
Aight

You aint come strapped, teach.. don’t make me smack you fast..
When he say a 9 dumpinnn.. quickkk, better get that 3rd grader a bathroom passsss./
Mahfucka.
Lol closer

Vote Res. This was close... great consistent battle prolly best so far but he got the nod to me..
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Bring the G19 where you live, pussy. I’m taking alllll your cash
Fuck ur environment. I’ll pull the plastic out & separate the paper from some trash
dope
Plenty bullets, Ima shoot those - let a few go if you don’t act right
Quit the tough talk Res… you let a Phew go whenever you pass a black guy
gonee
And the way you look at a Labrador? I could never trust you for real
Whether it’s cooking or fights w/ your wife – you got an Old Yeller up in your grill
funny but nothing crazy
Can’t even guess what she weighs. She never spent a day in gymnasiums
Impossible to give a ballpark figure when she’s the shape of Yankee Stadium
nice
She gotta lap dance to pay ur gambling debts cuz you fucking suck at poker
Irony 101… she’s Grinding Bones for Bread and looks like a fucking Ogre
cool
I’ll haggle on price w/ my shooters, but they bringing the 4 for you dummy
Roulette wheel: you dropped the ball..
& when a number gets settled on you losing more than your money
okay
Okayyyy you champed last season but all you hearing now is hell nahs
Wasn’t ur first rodeo. But you could only hold on so long before you fell off
I get it but I'm not feeling it as much as the other bars



Aiyyo
Ayy this dude is my target?
See this feud end in carnage..
I’ll STILL win with writers block. It’s the truth let’s be honest.
cuz even a Flux Capacitor struggles to be fueled by YOUR garbage. /
dope
Punch you so damnn hard. Yeah this scrub will blunder..
Tumble, up and under. Face Rockeddd: Now u resemble Korg in Thor Love & Thunder./
okay
Yes I’m an Asian that can’t see for shit. Bet that produces laughter right..
Get smacked tonight..
Mines small.. but YOUR quarter eyes will pay for the river ride to the afterlife. /
really creative. I fw it a lot after seeing Doms Asian bar
It’s unfinished business.. this Aussie is tiny.. he skimming bitches..
Nirvana cover. Any pussy you get that baby dick will be swimming in it. /
I have mixed feelings about this one lol. Still good
This teacher aint in my tier. You know Res going through losers..
I’m in a different class, bro.. & it turns out yours is locked in with a school shooter. /
okay
Bruise this bitch.. we already know you gonna lose this kid..
cuz when it Boils down to it.. this mahfucka shoulda just signed out like User did. /
I don't think it was a boil but still works
You aint come strapped, teach.. don’t make me smack you fast..
When he say a 9 dumpinnn.. quickkk, better get that 3rd grader a bathroom passsss./
lmao
Mahfucka.
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Fuck this is close. Best battle I've read in a while. Easily best of the season.

I'm going back and forth a few times because it's about the same number of bars I thought were bangers. I think Dom's let a phew go was my favorite bar but Resin was more consistent. Wildly close and it's tough because it's going to come down to voter preference I think.

I'LL REREAD LATER AND VOTE


I reread. It's crazy close. I think Resin's consistency edges it for him with one more bar that I liked. It could go either way. Great job, guys

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Bring the G19 where you live, pussy. I’m taking alllll your cash
Fuck ur environment. I’ll pull the plastic out & separate the paper from some trash
Hehe.. I didn't like the "from some trash" part... "from trash" would've been cleaner but this was cool
Plenty bullets, Ima shoot those - let a few go if you don’t act right
Quit the tough talk Res… you let a Phew go whenever you pass a black guy
Good grief I wish I would've used this against Frac.. Fuego
And the way you look at a Labrador? I could never trust you for real
Whether it’s cooking or fights w/ your wife – you got an Old Yeller up in your grill
Alright, calling his wife an old yeller not as hard though..
Can’t even guess what she weighs. She never spent a day in gymnasiums
Impossible to give a ballpark figure when she’s the shape of Yankee Stadium
LOL.. aight.. didnt like this at first but reading it now I like it
She gotta lap dance to pay ur gambling debts cuz you fucking suck at poker
Irony 101… she’s Grinding Bones for Bread and looks like a fucking Ogre
alright
I’ll haggle on price w/ my shooters, but they bringing the 4 for you dummy
Roulette wheel: you dropped the ball..
& when a number gets settled on you losing more than your money
Standard
Okayyyy you champed last season but all you hearing now is hell nahs
Wasn’t ur first rodeo. But you could only hold on so long before you fell off
seems fillerish

Nice verse. Thing about your verses is they will always be technically sound so you can read it days later and a bar I didn't care for I can look at and be like, you know what that's actually pretty good


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Aiyyo
Ayy this dude is my target?
See this feud end in carnage..
I’ll STILL win with writers block. It’s the truth let’s be honest.
cuz even a Flux Capacitor struggles to be fueled by YOUR garbage. /
I like the word flux capacitator.. made this bar even better
Punch you so damnn hard. Yeah this scrub will blunder..
Tumble, up and under. Face Rockeddd: Now u resemble Korg in Thor Love & Thunder./
more of a simple concept with a nice delivery
Yes I’m an Asian that can’t see for shit. Bet that produces laughter right..
Get smacked tonight..
Mines small.. but YOUR quarter eyes will pay for the river ride to the afterlife. /
quarter eyes like your eyes only open up a quarter of the way.. I liked this bar.. its harsh, has imagery, creative
It’s unfinished business.. this Aussie is tiny.. he skimming bitches..
Nirvana cover. Any pussy you get that baby dick will be swimming in it. /
Alright, at this point you've overdone it on references. punch is alright, Googled the cover and saw a baby dick so thanks for that smh
This teacher aint in my tier. You know Res going through losers..
I’m in a different class, bro.. & it turns out yours is locked in with a school shooter. /
I like the idea, a better setup would've made this hit harder
Bruise this bitch.. we already know you gonna lose this kid..
cuz when it Boils down to it.. this mahfucka shoulda just signed out like User did. /
LOL this was nice esp if you know how disgustin User's situation is.
You aint come strapped, teach.. don’t make me smack you fast..
When he say a 9 dumpinnn.. quickkk, better get that 3rd grader a bathroom passsss
haha coolish, also kinda silly cuz no one says a nine is dumping in reference to a kid

Your delivery really aids in your punches, sometimes the setups could be more thought out



Okay so on first read I had Resin winning this so I was like I'm not going to vote on this battle because I don't vote on Dom battles where I don't think he's won. On 2nd read I started liking Dom's lines a bit more. The phew line from Dom was bonkers and the river line from Res was Nice too. For me what seperates the two verses is probably the User line. That made go lol, alright... I've got Resin winning this but I'm going to put fear in his heart by putting the word Dom at the bottom. That way I know if you guys actually read. My best friends on the internets are Blue and





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Was meant to vote on this sooner… my sincerest apologies

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You had quarter eyes - dope
Flux capacitor was cool
Nirvana cover was cool (seen nirvana cover bars before but this was a unique take)
School shooter was good
Rest we’re ok and the closer was a miss for me

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Opener’s been done before
Phew was one of those simple ideas I can’t believe hasn’t been done before yet still fire
Old yeller made me LOL. Tad light
Ballpark figure is clever wordplay but honestly, feel like I’ve seen this before
Ogre was great
Roulette wheel ok
Rodeo was cool

This is a tricky one. Both of you are dope writers. Dom, your execution was on point and Res, you always come really creative . Standouts we’re quarter eyes and nirvana cover vs phew and ogre. Can’t decide the winner from that so it comes down to the rest of the verse. I think Res had the worst miss with that 9 dumpin so I gotta give this to Dom by a hair

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Quit the tough talk Res… you let a Phew go whenever you pass a black guy
Can’t even guess what she weighs. She never spent a day in gymnasiums
Impossible to give a ballpark figure when she’s the shape of Yankee Stadium
She gotta lap dance to pay ur gambling debts cuz you fucking suck at poker
Irony 101… she’s Grinding Bones for Bread and looks like a fucking Ogre

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Get smacked tonight..
Mines small.. but YOUR quarter eyes will pay for the river ride to the afterlife. /
This teacher aint in my tier. You know Res going through losers..
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This was a dope read I had 3 vs 2 highlight bars I jus was fuckin with one’s approach Alil more, the dumpin 9 was like a bar that helped me go the other way … v/DOM
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