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Old 09-01-2022, 06:14 PM   #3261
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found myself venturing on a mind-blowing journey
straight into a damned fire glowing furnace
that fiery lake eternal known as the inferno
I saw them burn slow, sinners with crooked eyes
never to be found in the book of life
seeing legions of demons, can't breathe in this region
contemplated my reasons for being a heathen
insolently laughing at priests when asked to believe
now I'm trapped in disbelief - gnashing my teeth
what the hell happened to me? my soul is pissed
the love of God knocked on my door, supposedly
hopelessly, I never had the heart to open it
focusing on past traditions I was sad to witness
they said the Son of God was the path to wisdom
lacking vision I declared it a bastards religion
got facts twisted and felt the wrath of christians
the sacrilegious do time in everlasting prisons
damnit, I should have listened..
wait damn a minute...
me accepting this ordeal is unthinkable
my fate may be perpetually sealed as misarable
still, I refuse to yield on my principles
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Old 09-01-2022, 06:56 PM   #3262
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Hey, hey look what the pen did to you.
All the trips to the other realms & metaphysical...
Took their toll..its slowly digging into you.
Each psychotic episode is mere ritual.
It's all up "here" and depends on what you listen to.
Ready? Set. Engage with every thought political.
Every swift change in life taken too literal.
Shades of grey & hues of white begin to glisten through.
You set the standard now, wow, you did it dude!
Shit, you aren't even proud of how you did it too...
Look at the scope and examine what you living through.
Post grad lad scraping by as living proof.
That's twice as much needed to guide the skeptical.
Shit that might be forgettable, high off edible.
Type of rhyme that blindside's the blessings.
Views from the highrise got me feeling so intentional.
I feel like I just might die off medical....
But that recreational side got me on so much greens...
I think I've turned into a vegetable
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Smooth as the harmonica in the intro of piano man
Hard pressed to press you bitches like a mammogram
ONE for the victims when I pull up and let the ammo blam
TWO for me finishing the job, pulling up beside the ambulance
Hell yeah the kid’s cocky, this swagger shit my steez
You biters always droppin someone else’s shit like disc jockeys
I don’t have to tap into the Aesop Rock plain of my rhyming ability
Genetically predisposed to be better then whoever say they killin me
Illustrate the illest traits, making a buzz like distilleries
You make a Buzz like Lightyear, all it takes a couple faggots to kill your dreams
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Old 09-05-2022, 11:27 AM   #3265
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Yo Adverse never been a dude getting hella chickadees
Honestly Frank is on my dick more than the bitches be
Crying corruption and faggotry is part the reason I hate runnin leagues
So hard to stay sucker free though I earned stripes like a bumblebee
Still resting in a higher plain, higher than you bums can see
Finals MVP and y’all the weakest link in the summer league
My pen is the sword, lately feeling like Pendleton Ward
Creating mad universes so that I never get bored
Ready for war, bring to any big headed residents of boards
Better than before it ain’t nothing to leave em effortlessly tore
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Old 09-07-2022, 08:06 PM   #3267
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I'll kick up the dirt, dust your windpipe till it hurts
punch the bags in your chest tills it burst
from the hook, I'll disperse and capture the big fish that swallows you little squirts
soaked cold quivering from the cryogenic fumes dripping off my verse
staved in, understand this my haven, I'll imprison you wack rappers and leave y'all permanently caved-in
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Old 09-08-2022, 02:12 AM   #3268
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Balls? Humongous. Dick? Big chungus. No way she bearing it all
RIP to Gorbachev, I’m with somebody’s girl tearing up walls
Master Rock is the proprietor of classic drops…that cat is hot
Meanwhile my mind houses more shady characters than Castle Rock
All the residents evil, tempted people win my head are deceitful
Jason Voorhees, if I ain’t got em yet BELIEVE they’ll be dead in the sequel
I’m shedding my skin revealing an anthropomorphic porpoise
Take one look in the oracle, future more morbid than the discord is
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Old 09-10-2022, 01:21 PM   #3269
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sick blips the script is flipped to slit the wires and expire
gripless chipsets as the analog empires required to retire
digimental mindframe, restrained brains within card bricks
tellin motherboards and other cores to erode on hard disks
old engines equals junkzones junctioned to system malfunction
recycled items crawls outdone in dusty, grey-walled dungeons
terminated terminals string-reaching post mortem beacons
decoding nodes to death-by-default as the modem weakens
re-control console protocols, end-process the lesser souls
reboot, mute, refuse to compute as these droids gets old
what is sacred? the matrix got our fate fixed as seasonal tech
no logical inputs, bits per sec outputs by emotional wrecks
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Old 09-14-2022, 02:32 PM   #3270
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No lie, society tripping on how I live off less
Got game y'all call foul that can piss off refs.
Insecure about blemishes, so I pick off heads.
How I manage the new world order...?
I'll get your bitch off next.
A game of pick up sticks, high five, big up kids.
Great job getting it the way you wish you lived.
Soulless hook, I hit the road and cook.
Treat rhyme how your life an open book.
I coast on rooks, sidestep, broke their style.
Embarrassing any weird looking anglophile
I boast, I rile, I haven't felt such woe in awhile...
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These bitches that lie to me should know I can be
Thrown into a violent spree, this demon inside of me
Is inspiring homicidal assignment dreams, I believe
In silencing your vitals see, hand on the bible I'm expiring
You for trifling by deceit, at first you seemed kinda sweet
Now I'm snapping spines by the sea, cry for me try to sleep
You'll be intertwined in my evil deeds, I'm smeagal
Free'd to feed on the feable at this I exceed, it has a ring
My precious to me you will bring, your deathwish
I will scheme, the message may be obscene but
My breath is fresh like it was spring....
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Old 09-18-2022, 07:47 AM   #3272
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Arithmetic triumphs in the spoils
starving child frying chicken thighs in vials of oil
while living a lie your lying under freshly covered soil
we abduct adults and eat the hearts of the disloyal
when the temperature hits broil one of us gotta die just to destroy you
in the eyes of god we just put you back together and explore you.

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Old 09-20-2022, 11:10 PM   #3273
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Living limericks flying out the mouth of this lyricist
When I’m finished they gon put my book next to Leviticus
Compare and contrast if you don’t see what the difference is
My shit is omnipotent, your shit plain impotent
Skewering limbs n building effigies out whoever testin me
Whether it be hell beast, levithian or demonic entities
May they Rest In Peace…no shoulder throws the bows gon fly
Run up and your whole dojo die, this is literally Cobra Kai
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the brain is 80% water thats why this god is a step ahead
using pencil utensils as ammunition when shot check the lead
hitting spots often as fat bitchs with cakes plugging clots
budging not, shine making the sun look like a megawatt
beating me, more likey to cross a black cat and win the megapot
you suck alot, I'm making you kick asteroids fuck kicking rocks
ya niggas trying to lynch, I'm sending ya back picking cot
most of yall "front" im leaving yall on the handicap side of the parking lot
your plot falls when fought, trying to jot shakespeaure but your farcing thoughts
can't "run" with me ill kidnap mothernature to burn your forrest flames make it hot
wanna Jouce? use a sword ill use your blood as ink to penetrate (penatrait)
an eternal vampire sucking blood couldn't take me down with 7 stakes
eat my heart show up at heavens gate not safe even heavens sake
noah's ark forgot this snake slightering in the grass biting a reverands face
venemous with a blade in his mouth sharp spitting fangs
your talentless crew get cut use a angels harp slitting gangs
melodies off note, so stick to being a thug packing totes
your jelling me can't cope, leave ya wit stiff throat, never rapping quotes
your feeling hope? thats like a alcopone not feeling dope
so these jabs make ya hit the ropes, mic tyson of this shit thats all he wrote

I'm converging with self emerging thoughts of earning a daily living
with rhythms given to me as a gift but as the world is turning
my mental's burning and no one is concerning that CREAM I'm yurning
my excursions is urging, so through the streets im learning
that selling coke and imported smokes is the way you control the rope
of this everlasting tug of war with life, to strive we got to pull and cope
but even then i'm sleeping on a flower bed at times
should I pump the lead to get the sour bread or rhyme?
if it comes to a solution, either one I'm fine
praying to God, but sometimes i wanna resign my mind
physical and soul to Lucifer through that have I crossed the line?
choosing a yellow road I have no control will I ever exhaust the bind?
that has kept me blind from advantages hope it breaks and vanishes
and causes no more damages to my cerebral management
and get my mentality straight to earn a decent salary
because in reality I navigate to get my high horse on a cavalry
but everything life pushes towards me is like a cinder block
trying to push with arthritis will make the sender pop
and drop, lose all of his confidence in his Individuality
the only who's mad at me is me and that be my fatality
so is it time to cause casualties through the right hand of my faculty
or sail the violent sea, I wonder where the facts will lead
I'm passed grief, right now I can barley afford to breath
I'll pick it randomly out of a hat which goal will my sword achieve?

Rip your bones from your cartilage, my brain I'm hardly with
I'm insane with Marley's gift, break you with a cane till your partly stiff
Your head I'm marking it for target practice no olympic matches
hit your balls with rackets leave you fucked and backless like im pimping Atlas
Crafted from God's design so I split rhymes like 9 nines
f**k fine women, yours a nickel mines a fly dime
till i dipped her in liquid nitrogen and scraped her face off with 5 knives
never see her face again, till I rape and do the same to my 5 wives
I stay vibed with Nitric acids to desenigrate
skin from muscle, and steal breaths like to hyperventilate
your intestines and heart sure look good on my dinner plate
and the swine arent smart to f**k with a sinners hate
I take the whole NYPD and make them choke on 20 keys
free rikers isle now the streets are full of unfriendly G's
we kill all the fake MC's running around causing a mockery
give them a box of fees for talking hypocrisy
but I'm a living monarchy, and yall niggas are phillistines
and my art is creating killing schenes made from the guoillotines
a evil elohim, fuck it I got a basement full of med evil torture devices
and when i take your girl and torch her at the stake your face is priceless
hit all the old rappers with spiked bats and put them in a mid life crisis
Im just the nicest, creating pain is my strife of enlightment
cold as a winter fleece, as you can see im not a curtious beast
ill skin you from your head to you feet im literally a muderous MC
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Can’t tell if Sinacog actually spitting now or this is just a fever dream?
Wait…is anything real? I don’t even believe in me…
Only thing that I know is you cannot kill Timmy bro
And y’all some bitches tryna run with the Boys like Kimiko
So I let the semis go…but I’m after a champion berth
But I’m crashing to earth like Kakarots pod did at birth
Or maybe I was dead on arrival, ahead of my rivals
I’d rather burn down the whole fucking game then let ‘em be my clones
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Bathe in the floods of rain wash away the mud from my bones
something is strange how that man roams the trains stuck and alone
until a passenger came by and said Hey wake up!
you finicky fucking puppet you clone
designed to ruin man and everything that matters the most
helping hands stay healthy clapping for those demanding parasite host
no one that self absorbed enjoys such a cheap vanity stroke
microscope in my hand pissing in the magistrates moat
im observing the bacteria expand checking for any faggotry growth
tapped into time triggering/oilers tight gripping triple grinning peasants
spun the triple sentence inhale these air codes
carrying the thoughts of one billion infants
far lessons does the eye only see what the lights bending
o heavens me , the sea of Galilee cant mind there business
eating pancakes in the bathtub with the water running over the edges
adventures of the three headed man singing infront of spencers.

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Creativity running dry, artistry barely alive
Site overrun by worms, perfect host for a parasite
Every song a gaslight anthem, I’m listening to “Mullohand Drive”
Everyone knows I’m a fucking creep no one sees the poetic side
Just a pathetic guy spewing prophetic lies on burner Twitter accounts
A waste of time like every word I’ve spit from my mouth
Glad I got fired Sunday, I’m no longer working assembly lines
But putting myself back together has turned into a full time
I’m Tiny moving parts attached to broken limbs, Soak it in
I’m broke as fuck and sober again, they tell me to hold my chin
And soldier on but I’m a hopeless pawn in a game I can never win
It’s so fucking evident..
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Try to get on my level, die to me I'm a rebel
Pride is the devil I'll never settle for second
Bitch my words are a weapon that's wrecken
Sick as a detection of infection don't step in
My direction I'll break your complexion flexing
In sessions compress them into peasants impressive
With my presence the eloquence is my essence
The consequence with no discretion,my consciousness
Is compentent to detest em, my common sense will conquer
And digest them,
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Filled my head with regret want ya dead see the red
At the end of this stress Im collecting your debts
For your sins, locked the den, hold you in, to confess
How you went and progressed to just love me to death
Hug me, choke me, compress my wind pipe, caress
Then give the big knife a test your self loathing protests
How you don't know me but you owe me you phoney
Bitch you can blow me cause I'm growing depressed
Just let me leave you that was my only request
Had these thoughts of suicide I had to suppress
Anxiety, check, there's no sobriety left
Guess my life's always a mess, I'm hallow inside
Being with you was like an damn swallow of pride
At home all alone I would just wallow and cry
Yearning for change so I could go follow my drive
My passion for music, but our interactions
were putrid, you had me just battling myself
Straddling the arrow of cupid, narrow with health, I've come to the conclusion for you I'm too good
Class dismissed no more damn academy of hell
Our love died the moment your humanity fell
Tried to take my life and then you landed in jail
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I’m a ghost caged in this cypher
As heavy rains pans out you hear the disdain of a writer
Whose creative spark is waning like the flame of a lighter
Running lower on hope than gasoline shards of the shattered dreams
Scattered across the pavement, picking glass from my feet
Sadness seems to be the only emotion I can feel
Unsure if I should turn to therapy sessions not opioid pills
In my younger days I was always looking for a poem to kill
But I think it’s time to admit I plateaued, I’m over the hill
Still a whole lot of skill but missing a soul you couldn’t replicate
Finger in my pin until I pull, now watch me detonate
And decimate any positive emotion I ever had for this shit
Been here 27 years…and fuck it I quit
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