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11-26-2022, 12:40 AM
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XI WK 1: Sinacog (0-0) vs. Cereal (0-0) (CEREAL WINS)
 Season 11 XI VERSES: Thursday, December, 1st, 11:59 P.M. Western / 2:59 A.M. Eastern / 7:59 A.M. UK. 24 Hour Ext: Mod/Opponent Discretion VOTES: Sunday, December, 4th, 11:59 P.M. Western / 2:59 A.M. Eastern / 7:59 A.M. UK. 3 Vote Requirement Enforced/Penalty MAXIMUM: 48 Lines: 64 IF AGREED UPON! TOPIC: 
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11-26-2022, 01:57 AM
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A-double scribble - A 19 th century euphemism for ass Last edited by Cereal; 12-02-2022 at 08:32 AM. |
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11-26-2022, 04:16 AM
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THE PRINCE OF EGYPT INcoherent as thieves in the night -- shinning bright ALABASTER STONE THE CHROME THIEF AZONE THIEF I am moses -- baby first born were slaughtered with the serpent THE SERPENT OF EDEN -- ascursed as demon I am nothing but bone and flesh -- mahagony wood SOLEMN AND GOOD -- the hook of what could I play with snakes and serpents in the area of slaves DARE YOU TO BE BRAVE when the pharoah has waved I am the secod coming of christ -- not RAMSES DAM THIEF -- I come from the sphinx shattered nose BATTLE PROSE AD LIHGTING -- ENTICIG Battlig demi-gods and ghosts -- battling goes I am the night/knight in shinning armor -- battling karma BATTLING STRONGER -- cattle and armor I am the ECHELON THIEF -- ESSENCE STRONG SERENE THE BATTLE DRAGON KILLING SERPENTS IN THE DESSERT -- I am ORGAIZED KONFUSION -- MORTIFIED ILLUSION -- I AM THE DENSE GOD -- INTENSE FOG FOR WHO AM I but -- MOSES THE PRINCE OF EGYPT A HEBREW GOD!?? SEA THROUGH FOG I MURDERED RAMSES WITH FIRE AND BRIMESTOE!?? WATER WATER WILL SLAUGHTER THE BLACK BOOK OF AQUA.. |
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11-26-2022, 02:19 PM
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the hip hop jungle bunny
.. One step to the right and one jump to the left The pride lands divide in the silence of its breath Two friends now foes exchange blows for their own rep Exposed the bi stander hops to their safety net To stay or go, once they home with coverage Dusting off the shrubage like lovers By the watering hole they ponder all things Who will survivor this twisted battle in which springs Brings.. brrring.. the water ripples - the rock still shrieks Natures call as the olympians break for a feast its a story as old as tyme.. A copper coin worth the lyme disease verses props ducking the true meaning of life to proove who is more dominant in the nigger field - made of men and mice the fighters subsides one dies the day is long but it goes on.. as an unsung song of valor the nights sun sung the peanut palor clamers sports in general is a spectacle for the oysters and no more - and should be watch from afar as it eats my last jaffar - thinking why did i do it to myself - im such a silly gallah
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A-double scribble - A 19 th century euphemism for ass Last edited by Cereal; 11-26-2022 at 02:24 PM. |
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12-04-2022, 05:10 PM
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Vote - Cereal
Both were horrible pretty underwhelming. The only thing I can honestly give credit for is that Cereal stayed on topic for the first few lines. In that sense, he was less bad? |
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12-05-2022, 11:00 AM
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Cereal for obviously reasons Sinacog went on another tangent of irrelevancy to the topic. Candy opened up straight on the topic making the visuals come alive. This was an easy win he didn't even need to try. Sin I hope you step up your game and quit with the nonsense. I know you just want to write but at least try to write to the topic in some kind of way that at least resonates or connects to the topic somehow.
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12-05-2022, 11:39 AM
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Both vs need work
Both vs not strong enough Vote- Cereal |
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12-05-2022, 08:13 PM
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THE SERPENT OF EDEN -- ascursed as demon
I am nothing but bone and flesh -- mahagony wood SOLEMN AND GOOD -- the hook of what could I play with snakes and serpents in the area of slaves vs its a story as old as tyme.. A copper coin worth the lyme disease verses props ducking the true meaning of life to proove who is more dominant in the nigger field i consider these entity's as equals.. they both got skills sometimes i think they are the same person'' sinacog cereal and candy'' they are like a brain a form of ''krang'' that being said even tho many readers get frustrated by there lack of coherence to a story driven narrative///both these writers are dope-- i call a TIE but since a vote is necessary - CereAL GOT IT cause he brought more imagery in terms of conceptual tie-in to the picture mvgt- cereal Last edited by brokenhal0; 12-05-2022 at 08:16 PM. |
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