Round 2 - Lotto Smirk vs. Tic - {Tic wins}

[Meth]

The Fall Brawl

Line Limits - 10 Min / 20 Max
If not agreed upon in check ins, you must match the first drop.
All other rules apply (biting/feeding/recycling/yadayada)

Any and all swaying will be promptly deleted, and you will lose 3 votes for every offence. You have ONE second chance to stop being a bitch, then you're banned from every tourney I run from here on out. You'll also lose your spot in this one.

DUE DATE IS 10/28/15 @ 11:59 PCT / 2:59 EST

Need anything, let me know.

@Lotto Smirk @Tic

[Lotto Smirk]

In match whoever drops first

[Tic]

Here.

[Lotto Smirk]

Just a filthy addict, not getting girls even if you wined & dined
Pussy? Tixelix nothing unless it's the rim of that bottle tryna find a high
#1 in NBL wen it sucked,big dogs come out n ya couldn't even play
cus it had no bodies n ironically every match u won could of gone either way
U ain't popular at all.. always got bullied at school dances & class
so if he's an Outsider, it's at parties when this nerd's camped on the grass
I could drop wayyy wack still beat u it's straight facts, votes are all mine b
i'll could be frank w/ u n u still wouldn't get the point to advance to round 3
no threat to me I'm better g u ain't important u queer
tic'll cause me no problem here like I've been dealing w/ the disorder for years

Meh

[Tic]

First off, look at that record. That many losses is absurd in this context
The 33 is a survival story. Yours is a death sentence for wording & concepts
You’re killin yaself w/ those wack plays. Now it’s do or die fool
It’s like making picks for the draft. & this battles the result of the suicide pool
I’m an avid Golfer, so keep it up fgt & you’ll get a club to the face
Aldila RIP blow to Smirk, while you ride more shafts than that company makes
Plus this dude isn’t reckless. Hot verses? I’ll drop 2 in succession
This one’ll bring you to ya knees. AKA the ONLY thing this fgt drops to in succession
Learn to write, cuz ya punches keep missin dweeb
Cuz ya wording leaves a Lot to be desired - As top seed in the gimmick league

[Meth]

Originally Posted by Lotto Smirk

Just a filthy addict, not getting girls even if you wined & dined
Pussy? Tixelix nothing unless it's the rim of that bottle tryna find a high
--u had a dope wordplay here but ur angle was lazy ok line
#1 in NBL wen it sucked,big dogs come out n ya couldn't even play
cus it had no bodies n ironically every match u won could of gone either way
--nah bro
U ain't popular at all.. always got bullied at school dances & class
so if he's an Outsider, it's at parties when this nerd's camped on the grass
--concept needed to grow a little more u were too short with it/ and i dont mean lenght of the concept btw i mean substance of the concept
I could drop wayyy wack still beat u it's straight facts, votes are all mine b
i'll could be frank w/ u n u still wouldn't get the point to advance to round 3
--decent concept wording hurt
no threat to me I'm better g u ain't important u queer
tic'll cause me no problem here like I've been dealing w/ the disorder for years
--nah played wordplay and the angle wasnt creative enough to justify it

Meh

Originally Posted by Tic

First off, look at that record. That many losses is absurd in this context
The 33 is a survival story. Yours is a death sentence for wording & concepts
--word. this hits even harder since i read his verse and not letting his concepts develop more hurt him.
You’re killin yaself w/ those wack plays. Now it’s do or die fool
It’s like making picks for the draft. & this battles the result of the suicide pool
--this is okish
I’m an avid Golfer, so keep it up fgt & you’ll get a club to the face
Aldila RIP blow to Smirk, while you ride more shafts than that company makes
--i follow golf and ive never heard of that company lol but ill give u the benefit of the doubt here. good line.
Plus this dude isn’t reckless. Hot verses? I’ll drop 2 in succession
This one’ll bring you to ya knees. AKA the ONLY thing this fgt drops to in succession
--ik its a wp but rhyming succession w/ succession is wack lol.
Learn to write, cuz ya punches keep missin dweeb
Cuz ya wording leaves a Lot to be desired - As top seed in the gimmick league
--ok

gal had opener which was lotb

that was enough to win here

lottos concepts need more substance, his angles are always straight forward it seems

plus his wording was pretty iffy.

gal got it cool read

v/ tic

[Swerve]

Just a filthy addict, not getting girls even if you wined & dined
Pussy? Tixelix nothing unless it's the rim of that bottle tryna find a high

vs.

First off, look at that record. That many losses is absurd in this context
The 33 is a survival story. Yours is a death sentence for wording & concepts
Plus this dude isn’t reckless. Hot verses? I’ll drop 2 in succession
This one’ll bring you to ya knees. AKA the ONLY thing this fgt drops to in succession



Lotto's execution of the opener was off. Could have done so much with the concept, but it ended up only alright. Nobodies has been done a lot, didnt do anything with outsider, frank lines been done too and flip on tickle wasn't doing it for me. Tic's opener was strong, suicide pool was eh, aldila line had a lot going on and googling didn't really make it work as I didn't know what a rip blow was....I dont think you even needed the word rip in there and it threw it off a little. Idea was good, but it ruined it a bit. Succession was solid, closer was okay. Tic got this pretty convincingly.


V/ Tic

[Junto]

Damn I expected this to be one of the better battles of the round
Both these dudes capable of some dope shit but to me this was kinda weak to be real
Lotto confused me from the jump... never heard Tixylix is it 'tics'll licks', 'tic selects/elects'?
That was a cool concept tho & a cpl good attempts but shit like the closer I wasn't feelin
Galactic didn't really bring the haymakers either but his concepts a little better to me
The first 2 were cool... never heard aldila... Last 2 ok
Not a real decisive one but I thought Tic got it

V/ Tic