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Old 06-08-2018, 05:45 AM   #21
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"Burn After Reading" (2008)

“If one cannot enjoy reading a book over and over again, there is no use in reading it at all.” - Oscar Wilde

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x2

Our sins are that of arsons, here’s the final verdict
It’s all water under the bridge until we try to burn it
Most are spittin’ and swearing aloud, I supply the verses
Posts are Indian burial grounds, ya diatribe of curses
Guess I’ll water it down; ya die-a-tribe of curses
Simple as it sounds, every time I write it’s perfect
On screens you’re assured, you speak with a purpose
Then I meet you in person and it seems like you nervous
We’re all evil since birth, so we invent an alias
The realest people on earth are just the best at faking it
Text is chaotic, so in order to form some rhyme…
I collect details, look for a pattern and organize
The world has eaten us alive, I guess it’s Godless
Our life spans are simply its digestive process
We look to the sky wishin’, but no reply is given
Cuz disguise-the-limit like road signs that’s hidden
I restrict it, my mind erases a mile a minute
While you race to auctions like my style’s forbidden
Train for Olympics limping, you waving a limp wrist
While I’m putting-on-a-clinic like faking a sickness
Live with conviction like a prison, I’m trapped again
So I spit it with precision to exact revenge
Now let the panic spread, you aint standing yet
Wanna raise up but you fake son, like tanning beds
Have to speak ya mind, but he who tortures that stance…
Gotta-axe-to-grind like strippers before a lap dance
Learn how to stacks bricks, I’ll burn down that quick
Can’t come to terms with that kid like first round draft picks
Your album’s a trash lid, cease trying to spit
Yacht-to-quit like some awfully rich retirement gift
Irony is, you’re too fake to see you’re make believe
So please burn this after reading like blank CD’s
The franchise sets up shop, you outta fashion for weeks
You talk so white there must be a Gap in your teeth
Can’t bring the heat, but you droppin’ your next flop
Cuz ya pre-synced ya beat like cops with a desk job
You Neanderthals make profits? I’ll take a percentage
You live through me so I’m a cave in ya chest, get it?
Every cent is accountable, but I illicit funds…
By what is taken off Ledger, like prescription drugs
You never hear me coming, I can tell they hear you
Must be light on my feet like L.A. Gear shoes
Y’all April fool’s can’t enjoy May’s weather either
Cuz you still manage-to-lose like Floyd Mayweather Sr.
Can’t measure up either, so grow up and reflect
I put my palm on your forehead, no punches connect
Some have said making a chorus will lead to success
But after you do what’s right… really, what’s left?
Just the concept; so you can go coast through posts
But you can’t be male, God forgot your postal code
Won’t come out on your own, so I broke your phone
Hiding home alone will coax-you-out like an overdose
Collect when you pass go, leave your investors alone
You can’t let your past go like Sylvester Stallone
In Rocky 6 and Rambo; I’m teaching the ropes
Only way I’d submit ya work is with a guillotine choke
I’m like Quentin Tarantino, tearin’-teen-ho’s
Take their cherry and go, I’m not a charity though
Musical chairs are repo’d, your career is re-sold
You don’t apparently know that ya transparency shows
The Tide is turning, but you aint wearin’ clean clothes
Get ‘contacts’ in the biz cuz you can barely see bro
That’s a guaranteed show, you’re a rare placebo
I’m committed like patients, hope the therapy holds
When the World Trade deleted, I suffered a minor stroke
Impregnated a girl named Katrina, but her water broke
You claustrophobic bitch, the walls are closing in
I’m like an archaeologist, I got a bone to pick
Few can live as fugitives, prison yards are growin’
I haven’t noticed, I’m still-at-large like a blowfish
You’re on the VHS shelf, homeless as an orphan
Just forfeit, I’m the coming-attraction like endorphins
I’ve been indoors since, but I cannot endorse it…
Without a forced grip on reality like a Picasso portrait
To ignorant to ignore it, so you of course snitch
You a journalist, someone shoots and you report it
Don’t record it, cuz no one understands ya overkill
You not a straight shooter like the camera in Cloverfield
I know the deal, but you of course opt to miss it
You don’t got a pot to piss in, I’m more optimistic
Wash in Mystic River, I need to protect the leak
I’m the last sentry left in the twenty first century…

Never content with my content, destroy, don’t read
All who enter and desire a phrase to coin, quote me
I’ll fire the afterburners like unemployed dope fiends
So burn after reading but avoid the smoke screen…

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That’s just a ploy, joking; a milestone is reached
This entire piece was the chorus, and so...

... repeat. :D


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Old 06-08-2018, 05:46 AM   #22
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"Like Clockwork" (2007)

Clockwork - With machinelike regularity and precision; perfectly.

“When I've gone back to work, it's always with that sense of inevitability. That may be a complete delusion, but it's the one that I need to get out of bed and go about my business. That sense that I can't avoid this thing. I better just get on with it.” - Daniel Day-Lewis

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Time and time again I have to post something I regret
I only keep coming back to show you what lies ahead
On the road to success you flunked your driver’s test
While I passed with flying colors like a rival set
I’m not impressed; all your bars die once their said
Kind of like my echo, you a far cry from the best
Why confess? Nothing you saying has any worth
Sentences rope you in, you hang on my every word
I pray you never return; God, I’m begging you
Like Division II college Basketball, I’m not playing Duke
I’m cutting loose with a knife tucked in under suits
And like Cherry in Planet Terror, I gotta gun-to-boot
I’m so ahead of you that if I battle disabled…
You split-seconds-behind-me like fat children at the kids table
Spit flow all day bitch, you’re still a foe that’s ate quick
If you ‘bananas’ I’m a guerrilla; so you goin’-ape-shit
Now you sure that Gwen Stefani founded this language
So you go to urban dictionary like, ‘how do I say this’?
I’m like clockwork, you all hype like the Y2K glitch
Trying to face it is virtually-impossible like the Matrix
You a wide array of basic, nothing makes a statement
If your Hell-bent-on-greatness I must be raping Satan
You ask who’s the greatest, then led the forum’s debate
You Brokeback Mountain, can’t get your story straight
Y’all can hate, but you jumping quickly on my cock
Because y’all ingrates like bums on a city sidewalk
You be like, “C’mon dog, I aint around your jock”
But you still on my dick if you act like you proud your not
So if you’re the bomb, I’m the bomb shelter, kid
Cuz when you drop beside me nobody can tell you did
Hell with this, if I get under it I’m tearing the skin
Like a fat suit, you fake actors are wearing me thin
You no American Gangster, it’s not drugs you pushin’
The only heroine you bought into was Wonder Woman
You not even a thug, what you represent is far dumber
This is a rhyme scheme, I need your credit card number
You trailing behind the lead trying to find your style
So I bring you up to speed like a Nascar driver’s child
If we stage a performance, you’re walking into silence
I get more bra’s thrown at me than talking with Hawaiian’s
Until we battle in real life, pucker up and blow me
I freestyle, you freeze-tile; you must’ve gotten cold feet
I know… you think I’m too weak to view this instant
That’s okay… you can wait a week or two to click it
That way, you’ll convince yourself that you are different
And not just a stupid victim of your superstitions
Whatever you envision, I’m writing something better
My mind’s warped like time warps, I’m on another level
The cash you fags steal is a go for broke adventure
Cuz I know that-’chu’-aint-real like old folks with dentures
You sound nothing but whack, it’s the show that delivers
So you wound-up-in-the-back like old action figures
Rappers shoot to kill, you can act through your guilt
But that wound-is-still-doctored like the Zapruder film
Take what I‘ve taught you; but don’t lie, why bother?
Time alters and gives you away like a bride’s Father
Einstein was correct, I’ll be coming back in a month…
Time exists so that everything doesn’t happen at once.
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Old 06-08-2018, 05:53 AM   #23
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"I Am Legend" (2007)

“All things are subject to interpretation (and) whichever interpretation prevails at a given time is a function of power and not truth.” - Friedrich Nietzsche

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Alaska question, it’s for all Caucasians and Africans
Would you rather live in the Big Apple or Minneapolis?
You Nevada choice; in MySpace I’m the size of Jupiter
Truth can hurt; even Google Earth can’t find Universe
Washing-ton’s of dirt off the many-germs in Germany
I could take a huger leak than the state of New Orleans
You run of the Mil-waukee, I’m a perfect Ten-nessee
Say adios to audios, everyone heard this Texas heat
But you still a little Chile so Ukraine ya neck to peek
Sacramento? My sack a Mentos; refresh the screen
List a Continent’s contents on any map that you see…
And whether you elevated or depressed, that’s a relief
You a Virgin-ya geek; I’d put you out of ya ‘Missouri’
But everyone deserves a little Latitude, to a degree
Iowa debt to My-ami; he paid but Egypt me off
Now I’m too Madagascar, blame oil’s ascending costs
I can’t watch Yukon the rest, so Iraq my brain fast
You wanted to Bangkok so you just had to Baghdad
You lack direction, North, South, East, and West
You always gotta cum-piss like before and after sex
To keep Green at Bay, Raleigh in Carolina, I guess
You can’t take a Toke-yo, so who you China impress?
That Air-a-zona kid out; the Green-land’s you in jail
Fuck cess, line up some blow… all I need Israel’s
They Dublin the sales, but you tell me who’s wealthy?
There’s no stopping cold Turkey, we need a New Delhi
Ate all the organ’s in Oregon, and you stay for lunch
So I can’t be as Hungary as you, Norway as much
Kenya keep up? I know Rome and Russia are clichéd
But this is not State of the Art, this is Art of the State
I’m Montana, Scarface; you Bossed-into a scene bro
You’re from the hood but can’t get Compton a casino
Europe a few chips, then you take a ‘loss’ in Vegas
Vague-is-Pacific enough, I don’t got to Artic-ulate it
Got to the Arc-and-saw nothing, never met with Noah
Diss Pensacola like vending machines, dispense-a-cola
Then I Tampa with evidence so the cops stay busy
And just by living in Utah… you insult Lake City
Guess that’s the Maine reason you up in the air again
I’ll bring you down to Earth, you Landover Maryland
I got buff in Buffalo, my one punch Florida kid
I’m the bully after school, it’s 3:10 and Yu-ma’ bitch
Losing lets them off the hook, but a Win-a-peg foes
Lost our bearings like Firestone, we need to coordinate bro
But ya Mumbai’s your clothes, so guess I was wrong
You still have a clip on tie cuz you can’t Taiwan on
So go get a New Jersey from the city of Hoboken
And if Singapore rain, this must be the Indian Ocean
Or Ja-maican albums like Jeffrey Atkins in session
Fuck Columbus, this Earth is simply flat and pathetic
So like Will Smith’s film, you can either try to end it…
Or put your name on the map…

… and say I Am Legend.
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