12-07-2014, 06:23 AM | #1 |
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Im reading palms seeing things that aint easily formed speaking psalms
least of all i can call it now at peace with all creatures born its never easy to see the faults force shake a heathen pulse its no sin we keep the demons close i only deal with fiends who eat the most never give up forever try its a sure thing when gods happy expect better light recall with better sight create right in darkness my fears disappear amongst the carnage stare beyond the spheres carved from karmic conquest my coarseness dampen a goddess armpits like a snake bite on a hate night blaze hecate amongst the grave sight dead in my old ways 1st class ticket to take flight grapes and figs my rigs rigged no remorse like scotty riggs sig sleeper hold knocked out the big pig scream eureka hoe and she loves that i don't need her tho sound like a clever blow creepshow indian statue flow follow u home i bleed oak scented blood give a good memory back to love god from above it stood when the cosmic circles budged im in a hole a well make a wish and if i follow the song it sells ring the bells sleigh of hand voodoo priest slings the shells superconscience rays of man burn shadows on a basic cell lack detail so i play the creator well of a ancient land feelings duplicate a willful spell ill will will tell well the well filled up well wishes spilled from a spit filled cup sips filled up you see you give up give and take effect create a real world up homey its lonely up here lets crawl with snakes in the gobi jump in a wormhole and switch to satori shinobi...i said you dont know me i been loving this long to go bon jovi Last edited by brokenhal0; 01-25-2021 at 07:38 AM. |
12-07-2014, 05:23 PM | #2 |
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Always dig your snf style. Cool cotent and imagery
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12-07-2014, 05:51 PM | #3 |
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Loved these bars:
its a sure thing gods happy then expect better light recall with better sight create right in darkness my fears disappear stare beyond the spheres carved from karmic conquest Cool piece you got here. Keep it up.
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12-09-2014, 12:44 AM | #4 |
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Craziness brotha
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12-12-2014, 01:38 PM | #5 |
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This was a smooth piece, I didn't enjoy the build up to snake bite & hate night
hate night just seems like a random thing to put together at least in my opinion the opening part of this verse was really well put together though and so was the ending I think that the middle just took away from it a bit but the switch off was well done after that little bump in the road you seemed to have a nice idea of how to finish and you did that well, nice work my dude...
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snake bite >>my serpent mind thinking got me caught off guard by a energy vampire on a .. hate night ... a night where i let anger get to me or my emotions off kilter o them vamps got to me << my coarseness with females was basiclly compared to a snake bite how i get there attention not giving a fuck about there feelings so im the energy vamp now its a hate night Last edited by brokenhal0; 12-19-2014 at 03:47 AM. |
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12-19-2014, 10:32 AM | #7 |
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I understand the concept I just feel that's a odd combination
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