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06-25-2018, 03:34 PM | #1 |
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WK 8: Championship:Jabari Black 5-2 vs. Blue Bayou 5-2 - Blue Bayou WINS!
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Check ins are encouraged but not mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ FAILURE TO VOTE ON 3 BATTLES IS A DQ. NO MATTER WHO YOU ARE!!! YOU WILL BE DISQUALIFIED. VOTE ON 3 BATTLES OR YOU LOSE. SIMPLE! THERE’S BEEN A LOT OF COMPLAINTS ABOUT VOTING RECENTLY, IF THERE IS SOMEONE WHO YOU DON’T WANT TO VOTE IN YOUR BATTLE YOU MUST STATE THEIR NAME IN YOUR CHECK IN. IF IT’S A CRAZY AMOUNT OF PEOPLE THEN SORRY YOU’RE JUST A BITCH AND ALL VOTES WILL COUNT. AS PER INCREDIBLE @Jabari Black @Blue Bayou |
06-26-2018, 10:28 AM | #2 |
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Gun bars?
Lol jk. 16 - 20. |
06-29-2018, 02:29 PM | #3 |
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06-29-2018, 09:31 PM | #4 |
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Lemme grab that extendo
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12 gage! You’ll need CPR to revive you after it dump through ya vest/ Even the medics got gun bars...telling each other ‘they gotta pump on ya chest’/ I won’t miss when this pole shoot. I put the inf beam on it then smoke you/ I’m pac man with the laser...this ‘dot’ll turn ya ghost, Blue’/ Catch you on wedding day letting the weapon spray...the Taurus flare and light ‘em/ U and ya girl’ll ‘see the Judge before the wedding’ - that’s the marriage license/ Weak faggot. You try to run? You’ll get a leg shot when the four ring/ I’ll knee cap em...A ‘Patella split up’ like a Indian family divorcin’/ Nothing tough about him. Machete his throat and let the blade stick out him/ I’ll have his head dangling...His ‘skull’s hanging off his neck’ like Dhalsim/ Ya fiancés a freak nigga. Hit her doggy...I’ll have her reaching back while I deep dick her/ I’ll make her ‘grab the ball’ then ‘throw it back’ to me - that’s a flea flicker/ Im Hey Arnold with the .22 - stretch domes with the little caps when the deuce spit/ Or I’ll bring the HK to ya crib...I got the ‘Heckler at ya doorstep’ like the Stoop Kid/ Let a sig pop em. Don’t give a fuck if you a legend - I’ll stretch a vet/ I got the strap for a big body...squeezing arms like a blood pressure test/ Cut ya stomach open then drag you while ya guts spilling...This is torture, B/ Cops’ll find a body with ‘organs in the background’ like a horror scene/ Last edited by Jabari Black; 06-30-2018 at 10:11 PM. |
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06-30-2018, 10:55 PM | #6 |
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u see this guys wording last week?! it's like he's working to bore us.. everything he Roti Butchered so fast i thought he was serving us Schwarma if i'm talkin top 5 in the league of emcees that can smack me back.. TRUST me, i'm only leavin Blacklisted to prove ur wack ass is EXACTLY that ^^not kiddin, ask us to mention the most savage in threads.. we're all 'leavin Blackout'... like every bitches drunk level u've had in ur bed so don't feed me those lies like ur dick'll grind some booty.. only bitch that's EVER gunna Eye-Black is Icebox from that Little Giants movie bring on the wife jokes, its fine, call her a tramp w/ keys.. goahead & Dishonour cuz u been doin that to text since u champed the league u as the champ makes me sick, how bad i'm getting ill is severe.. forget a pollen that shit’s enough to make bees live on for millions of years kill u in ur own castle when the twin nina's press ya ribs.. i'm 'coming w/ Heat' & runnin those Sticks to ya House like a Tesla Grid talk's a big game but he's been a gay homo.. 9 out, this pussy 'Jets from the Stick' like the old Winnipeg Logo bow down to the King, the motherfuckin beast w/ the writtens.. or i'll dump the clip & put more 'Caps to ya Forehead' than the Fetal Position |
07-01-2018, 11:35 AM | #7 |
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V/ Blue
Wasn’t feeling Blacks closers, On the other handed, Blue’s landed for me just fine, especially the closer. The Blue’s nameplays were cool. Last edited by DMS; 07-01-2018 at 11:41 AM. |
07-01-2018, 04:04 PM | #8 | |
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12 gage! You’ll need CPR to revive you after it dump through ya vest/
Even the medics got gun bars...telling each other ‘they gotta pump on ya chest’/ sheesh this was fire, loved the 2nd line wording and unique execution I won’t miss when this pole shoot. I put the inf beam on it then smoke you/ I’m pac man with the laser...this ‘dot’ll turn ya ghost, Blue’/ i know for a fact you were having trouble creating a punch out of the concept, you just HAD to get it off because the concept was dope and you just didn’t wanna let it get away from you lol. Here’s the thing, the only time the second line is acceptable to be shorter than the first line is if the punch is overall superb. If not then it’s usually gonna fall flat. You had a nice concept here but the second line read too forced to rate this as good. I give you this kinda feed because I can relate Catch you on wedding day letting the weapon spray...the Taurus flare and light ‘em/ U and ya girl’ll ‘see the Judge before the wedding’ - that’s the marriage license/ damn here’s another one that was definitely a dope concept but the second line wording hurt it. What could have been a 10/10 Punch is now a 5/10. OK here Weak faggot. You try to run? You’ll get a leg shot when the four ring/ I’ll knee cap em...A ‘Patella split up’ like a Indian family divorcin’/ kind of a reach for me here tbh Nothing tough about him. Machete his throat and let the blade stick out him/ I’ll have his head dangling...His ‘skull’s hanging off his neck’ like Dhalsim/ overall this was ok, wording and flow a bit choppy Ya fiancés a freak nigga. Hit her doggy...I’ll have her reaching back while I deep dick her/ I’ll make her ‘grab the ball’ then ‘throw it back’ to me - that’s a flea flicker/ lol this is decent Im Hey Arnold with the .22 - stretch domes with the little caps when the deuce spit/ Or I’ll bring the HK to ya crib...I got the ‘Heckler at ya doorstep’ like the Stoop Kid/ alright, the concept is kinda played but this was an ok flip Let a sig pop em. Don’t give a fuck if you a legend - I’ll stretch a vet/ I got the strap for a big body...squeezing arms like a blood pressure test/ FIRE Cut ya stomach open then drag you while ya guts spilling...This is torture, B/ Cops’ll find a body with ‘organs in the background’ like a horror scene/ dope on all levels 3 good Vs u see this guys wording last week?! it's like he's working to bore us.. everything he Roti Butchered so fast i thought he was serving us Schwarma lol cool if i'm talkin top 5 in the league of emcees that can smack me back.. TRUST me, i'm only leavin Blacklisted to prove ur wack ass is EXACTLY that first line reads really weird, overall bar is OK ^^not kiddin, ask us to mention the most savage in threads.. we're all 'leavin Blackout'... like every bitches drunk level u've had in ur bed lol good so don't feed me those lies like ur dick'll grind some booty.. only bitch that's EVER gunna Eye-Black is Icebox from that Little Giants movie decent here bring on the wife jokes, its fine, call her a tramp w/ keys.. goahead & Dishonour cuz u been doin that to text since u champed the league mmm decent u as the champ makes me sick, how bad i'm getting ill is severe.. forget a pollen that shit’s enough to make bees live on for millions of years lol ok barcotic this is decent kill u in ur own castle when the twin nina's press ya ribs.. i'm 'coming w/ Heat' & runnin those Sticks to ya House like a Tesla Grid nice talk's a big game but he's been a gay homo.. 9 out, this pussy 'Jets from the Stick' like the old Winnipeg Logo this was cool bow down to the King, the motherfuckin beast w/ the writtens.. or i'll dump the clip & put more 'Caps to ya Forehead' than the Fetal Position bit of a stretch, still ok tho, works 4 good I give more feed to JB on his bars because he’s a growing battler and needs the feed to keep improving. Blue is already a legend and has his wording and style down pat, no need to extensively critique solidly formed bars. Both of these guys each had dope concepts and creative angles, the only difference is that wording and execution is something JB definitely struggled on with a good number of his lines. Blues wording is superb almost always and usually never posts played stuff. You guys are both pretty much tied in quotes and misses but what separates you two is that blue’s verse is a lot more polished and flowed easier. Tough call and I honestly could have voted whichever way but I think blue Edged it. Vote Blue Bayou
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Jabari Black
12 gage! You’ll need CPR to revive you after it dump through ya vest/ Even the medics got gun bars...telling each other ‘they gotta pump on ya chest’/ very simple/played-ish concept, not giving it a pass I won’t miss when this pole shoot. I put the inf beam on it then smoke you/ I’m pac man with the laser...this ‘dot’ll turn ya ghost, Blue’/ i like it Catch you on wedding day letting the weapon spray...the Taurus flare and light ‘em/ U and ya girl’ll ‘see the Judge before the wedding’ - that’s the marriage license/ dece Weak faggot. You try to run? You’ll get a leg shot when the four ring/ I’ll knee cap em...A ‘Patella split up’ like a Indian family divorcin’/ no Nothing tough about him. Machete his throat and let the blade stick out him/ I’ll have his head dangling...His ‘skull’s hanging off his neck’ like Dhalsim/ nice Ya fiancés a freak nigga. Hit her doggy...I’ll have her reaching back while I deep dick her/ I’ll make her ‘grab the ball’ then ‘throw it back’ to me - that’s a flea flicker/ wtf no Im Hey Arnold with the .22 - stretch domes with the little caps when the deuce spit/ Or I’ll bring the HK to ya crib...I got the ‘Heckler at ya doorstep’ like the Stoop Kid/ nah Let a sig pop em. Don’t give a fuck if you a legend - I’ll stretch a vet/ I got the strap for a big body...squeezing arms like a blood pressure test/ fire Cut ya stomach open then drag you while ya guts spilling...This is torture, B/ Cops’ll find a body with ‘organs in the background’ like a horror scene/ played 3 gd punches 1 jab 5 misses vs Quote:
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