06-27-2020, 09:05 PM | #1 |
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Exis ft. Master Rock-Hip Hop
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From the park to the streets, from the west to the east it’s the war, it’s the peace, the inheritance of the meek, to the pain that it leaks, from the blood that they seek It’s what keeps me… up at night It’s the strain, it’s the strife the process of my plight, it’s knowing when to pick the fruit when it's ripe its's harvesting seed to bloom for my rights, It’s sight beyond sight, it's more than the eye can see interdimensional, a vision beyond three times as dope, it pierces the vein another way cope, I reminisce and I poke, diggin deep and I soak, from the bus stop, mean streaking streets for props we scoping out the plots aiming for perfect spots it’s an understanding, an urge the itch don't stop starving to eat all the toys in the shop breaking, all the way to pop n locks table turn, revealing not the cristal nor the bottle pops It's the mean, it’s the streaks It's the nod to these beats It's the night and the freaks honey drips in them sheets throw-ups in them streets fat laces on my cleats sparking of the leaf From the clenching of my teeth savoring of the beef It's the reach from my peak where the wonders never cease It's the culture it's the art, It's my part lifeforce, my heart It's where the rhythm starts it's the blues from the color that they choose It's the samples so give me a little piece It's the chops so gimme that beat -- Exis: It's shinin' brightness - It's darkness, decay It's life & a predator stalkin' it's prey It's walkin' this way, It's not conformin' It's cold as ice, It's hot & scorchin' It's silence & screams, It's to die, It's to breathe Amongst creeps & violence, It's a child of the streets It's to cloak your image, It's to provoke the limits It's the realest shit, It's jokes & gimmicks Food for thoughts up in it, churnin' your mind It's a la carte, It's a burger with fries It's a burden, It's light - It's discernin' a lie It's a tidal wave & it's turnin' the tide It's clarity, It's to blaze a sack It's fakes & acts, It's to state the facts Got the grace & tact of a social retard It's an expandin' mind, It's total recall It's peace & calm with enough havoc It's blood splatters, Love & drug addicts It's rough, savage - It's upholdin' decrees It's anarchy, It's the code of the streets Got laws of it's own, Never go to the police It's the written word, It's to flow on a beat It's rockin' a show, On your block, On the go It's conflict, Withstandin' all the shots & them blows Lacin' them tracks, It's young peeps achin' for stature It's DJ's, Graffiti, Breakin' & rappin' State of emergency, Nowadays it's gats, Pimpin' & crack But I love it, It's Hip Hop, & it's as simple as that.
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06-29-2020, 11:15 AM | #2 |
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Why did you edit my first line like that...?
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06-29-2020, 11:05 PM | #4 |
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Master rock was cool. Lost me in some spots with your scheme. Got a little to wordy and added 1 or 2 too many syllables once in a while. Concept was cool. Fun flex
Actually thought Exis came in and stole the show here, pretty solid. Nice way to close out dude. Concept was cool.
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Felt the same, Rock had a decent verse but it wasn't nothing spectacular and it might be nitpicking but you referred to the streets a lot for my liking would have liked to see you use a different vocabulary choice but it's cool. Thought it was decent just felt a little simple imo
Exis had a lot of dope concepts here snd an awesome flow throughout loved the comparisons and how you kinda hushed the people saying you're good on flow but never really on topic you've had a couple dope outings as a topical writer as of late. Cool collab guys |
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Yo Adverse, I grew up in the streets where Hip Hop became a part of my everyday life. It might sound cliche but it is my experience. But respect, different strokes for different folks.
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Good looks on the feed Ad, 'tis appreciated fam...
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07-10-2020, 12:21 PM | #9 |
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Nice. A back to basics collab that reminds the reader why we're even here on this site. in some cases, where we're at in life. I caught the passion in this for sure. Rock you brought some nice images in your verse. Rhyme scheme was straightforward but the flow was nice for the most part. Exis, compoundtastic stuff. The use of opposites to illustrate the huge spectrum that hip-hop represents was inspired and had me cracking a smile before i was even halfway done. You brought the imagery and the philosophy in a great verse.
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Gracias fam...niggas need to show more love to Master though, thought he held shit down.
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pretty cool verse. it rhyme fairly well. I can't say any one line in particular grabbed me or anything like that. But overall it was a cool ode to the artform. Decent stuff to be sure. Exis You seemed focused. Very choice and concise with the your words. Your imagery was on point, and I felt the emotion and flow were both stellar. I thoroughly enjoyed this. Good shit.
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