Corleone's keystyle thread

[Exis]

Ok thanks...

[corleone]

lol.. god.. jealous niggas still envy.. what ever happened to good ol' fashion battle rap and that was that.. smh.. whew, niggas be hatin.. lol 100!

[corleone]

*pops a bottle open.. feeling nice


corleone a beast, I rip shit like no other emcee,
pretty don.. I bag chicks every day of the week,
come pray with a G, cool out and light this L,
and get so lit, you couldn't recall the time to tell//
true gentleman, keep a twin glock on the hip,
and fire shots that'll spin your head like the exorcist//
I'm next to big.. pac, nas, and all the above,
closest thing since L dropped, hence the name, and all of the buzz//
Corleone.. boss status, I haul static,
I paint pictures like vangouh on any art canvas//
I cause havoc and bomb planets,
alien like.. hartspyreric acids trapped in my lung passage//
.. you bum bastards get spun backwards,
and left for dead holy, after licking a shot like drunk pastors//
uh.. you ain't seeing the kid,
believe what you want but truth is, I easily win//
here, some grease for your chin..
.. cut you up with the hands,
fuck you up where you stand like a sexual stance//
perpetual style.. I'm in a class of my own,
past perfection.. god like with a hell of a flow//
.. genetically gifted, wicked like devilish scriptures,
intelligent.. smarter then two brains together at instant//

[Eŋg]

flames.

[Exis]

I'm next to big.. pac, nas, and all the above,

^^Um no lol...I mean I know you like to exaggerate nigga but really? Thanks for that tho, made my day ;P

[Johnny 6 feet]

The spin your head like the exorcist line was a stand out here. Standard brag stuff but with a good flow and rhyme scheme to help the piece along. Lost count of how many I wrote drunk or high (probably because I was drunk or high). Some of the best stuff can come from when you're not in a normal state of mind. Solid bars. Braggadocious. Easy read.

Keep on keeping on.

-6

[Inno]

Vote sharp

[corleone]

quick keystyle.. respond back with a same length verse..

yoo..

this character is out of his mind.. what a name to exploit himself//
claims he a monster but never killed a thing for wealth//
you must suffer from down syndrome and ya name don't help,
I noticed you spelled it with a "U" and thought of mental health//
you a sad fuck, with bad luck,
who grew up on a trash truck,
who noticed my name tags spelled on your sisters' math-book//
.. spelled as, "Corleone wuz here",
and '98, the one year,
same year I let the monster (my dick) out to breathe some-air//
you a fag trippin', battle rappin' like he can't get called out,
caught him slippin with his sisters boyfriend going all out//
me??.. I was on the bleachers, getting head with my balls out,
you was the alter boy getting sodomized in the lords' house//
you all mouth with no hype,
with no doe and no life,
a sex offender with a history colder then north poles'-ice//
I'm raw like.. eating poisonous fish mixed with curred rice,
you more like.. softer then most the bitches I fucked all night//
.. the soft type, with no fight, no bark or no bite,
you have no mic skills..
you sound like someone who swallowed something down the wrong pipe//
and yes.. that was a pun intended,
indirect for cock sucker, as you are as mentioned..

[corleone]

^^^ pick my little dude up, lol.

[Hush]

This isn’t good big dog

[Exis]

He's better than you pussy...

[corleone]

^^^ one more time for the triple 9, lmfao.. I straight demolished @Sharp on his own forum. This thread should be in the hall of fame in my opinion.

[Sharp]

you're 0-1 vs me lol... why not stick it in your own HOF on your self loving forum of you and 300 bots?

Don't you have other forums to try to convince you're a successful musician? This one's pretty clearly dried up

[Blue Bayou]

Corleone what makes you think I won't cutchu

[corleone]

quick keystyle.. respond if you want or not.. keep your verse the same or of lesser length of my verse.. due date 8/7/2020 on or before midnight..

quick keystyle..

let's all play dumb and act like your name isn't as awkward//
is that greek? or a nickname passed down by your-father// (.. lol)
"zuchefiasco", that bro.. has to be horror//
don't know if your parents were drunk when they named you or its a matter of-karma// (.. lol)
your name reads like you were raised somewhere on a farm//
and I could tell by the lyrics that you write in your songs// (.. no skills)
its no wonder you couldn't reply to my threads with something-constructive//
cause you wouldn't know a thing about "hiphop" other than-crutches// (.. lol)
you can't fight, and it's obvious you couldn't rhyme for nothing//
I would of fronted you something but you'd probably burn that in a oven//(.. lol he don't know how to hustle/he couldn't cook a brick)
.. I'm not the type to fuck-with, you duck quick at the sight of drama,
like your girlfriend.. when we watch netflix in our-pajamas// (.. lol, drama as in "beef"/film genre/her giving me blowjobs)
she loves to watch my films.. she's a film-fanatic//
for a quick nut.. I lied and promised her a role as an actress// (.. lol)
the bitch rachet.. she believed it, I cleaned up and was soon-gone//
and wiped the nut off my dick on the same sheets you sleep-on// (.. lol, straight dirty)
she said, "Cor, be strong".. "you know zuche is mentally-challenged"//
I replied, "true that.. but whats with that name he's carrying?"//
she said.. "zuchey was born a transvestite and I know it's embarrassing",-
"so please keep this to yourself because his folks'll get mad at him"//
I said.. "thats not a problem.. " real calm,
and then, "another thing.. ", playing our theme song,
.. "last night, I seen zuche at the club with heels on"// (.. lol)
.. this herb tryna play me in his comments.. like I wouldn't read-and-respond//
I'll beat-and-retard his ass than leave-him-deformed//
I'll key in a verse and bleed from my palms..
on some religious shit.. like I was writing scriptures-or-psalms//
.. keep talking and I'll break open your jaw,
till' your gums fall apart and all your teeth remain on the floor//
so what you saying, if what you saying is false?,
I'll take a trip to your house and kick in your door//
than wave my gun in your face and break-in-your-skull,
as I record the footage over my cellphone for netcees.org//
.. test me gawd, you don't wanna brawl with me,
I'll fuck you up and lay you where coffins-be//
come spar with me.. step in the ring and lose horribly//
pardon me but you will never be as raw as me//
.. I'm probably the sickest nigga to ever exist,
I'll weather the election.. cause come the results, we'll see who's the bitch//

[Geno]

This isnt good man. Do i really have to tell you that? This cant be life

[Exis]

Why you always say quick keystyle? Half the forum free style shit nigga...no need to state the obvious bitch.

This was fuckin' awful btw.

[Bomb Bard]

Gone @ him laughing at his own bars

[Sharp]

He's straight up donated money to your garbage site and you do him like this? Smh

Also trying to rhyme farm and songs? Smh



btw due date means literally nothing. This is an OM drop. you give others feedback and they give you feedback. Don't act like you get a W if he doesn't respond with a verse

[UPN Zuch]

I will never recover from this.