06-22-2014, 09:57 PM | #1 |
been that, done there.
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aiight - REAL feedback time. CRITERIA INSIDE.
I will provide feedback, break-down style, to at least the first ten works that meet the following criteria:
- post a link in this thread to somethin you dropped on netcees which was written on or after May 1, 2014 (i don't want to read some old 'personal classics'.......... necessarily**) - ** IF it was written before 5/1, but is something particularly important to you, simply tell me when it was written and why you want a fresh read and objective breakdown from me. substance wins in a vacuum, recency wins in the dustpan. so to summarize, RESPOND WITH: A) link, which should B) dated, and if before 5/1, C) all of the above drop 'em if you got 'em. ------------------------------- closed ------------------------------- 01. zenland - "yaya" 02. veritas - "your 7th universe" ------------------------------- open ------------------------------- 03. fig - "bleeding intention" 04. ydk - "humanity smoked up in a gravity bong" 05. dead man - "from, a lighthouse in wilderness" 06. vulgar - "visitors" 07. mike wrecka - "We Have Awoke a Sleeping Giant" 08. oats - "Catharsis" 09. 10.
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06-22-2014, 10:12 PM | #2 |
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06-22-2014, 10:24 PM | #4 | |
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06-22-2014, 10:27 PM | #5 |
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Yea bc this will make up for your wrongs.
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06-22-2014, 10:34 PM | #6 |
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if it is wrong not to check the internet for 6 days straight while vacationing at the beach, then i don't want to be right yo lol
do you have a link to some fresh material, Aero?
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06-22-2014, 10:36 PM | #7 | |
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At least go to a reputable beach.
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06-22-2014, 10:46 PM | #8 | |
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so word, i am just a sugar daddy --- i consider dudes like pancake, certain, and sharp in charge, with others as well. holla if you're interested in running an aero-branded tourney or something, i am more than willing to learn from your dedication and attention to detail yo
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06-22-2014, 10:48 PM | #9 |
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Change faggot back to knuck
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06-22-2014, 10:48 PM | #10 |
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I'm interested in being this site's sugar daddy.
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06-22-2014, 10:53 PM | #11 |
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Inspiring
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06-22-2014, 11:01 PM | #12 |
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you got anything semi-recent V? appreciate that worldview as you know yo.
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06-22-2014, 11:03 PM | #13 |
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06-22-2014, 11:06 PM | #14 |
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crazy - i just noticed we don't have a canonical domain up in this beeeyotch. with a "www." in the url, it opened a new tab to www.netcees.co with the default skin and not logged in lol.
you just posting a link for feedback will ultimately lead to an improved site, Fig. Thank you for your continued efforts, intentional and unintentional alike ;)
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06-22-2014, 11:07 PM | #15 |
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06-22-2014, 11:12 PM | #16 |
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06-22-2014, 11:17 PM | #17 |
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06-23-2014, 12:07 AM | #18 |
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06-23-2014, 12:30 AM | #19 |
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06-23-2014, 12:54 AM | #20 |
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So who else is going to pledge to feed those pieces?
I know I will probably
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