Think (Music Video)

Joel Venom · 12-30-2013, 03:02 PM

New music video called "Think" let me know what you think of it and LIKE & COMMENT on the video as well!

It's a low budget music video so I had to make it work with my camera haha

veritas · 12-30-2013, 03:09 PM

why is this guy not blown up?

Dope flow, great voice, ridiciulous wordplay and good content.

I wish the video was better quality, but the song is dope. excellent sampling.

I am a joel venom fan. I bump your dat piff stuff in the ride.

Joel Venom · 12-31-2013, 03:52 AM

thanks man, and i don't know why i haven't blown up yet to be honest. i plan to do more shows this year and get some music video's professionally done after i purchase this camera. that motivates me that you think i should be famous by now foreal it really does. god bless

Figgly Wiggly · 12-31-2013, 04:23 AM

You make great music man.

Dope shit, seriously

Joel Venom · 12-31-2013, 04:32 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Fig Jr.

You make great music man.

Dope shit, seriously

thanks bro..seriously thanks it means alot!

Ryan 12 · 12-31-2013, 05:08 AM

dope video @Joel Venom

nice instrumental as well

props

uh-oh · 12-31-2013, 07:05 AM

dope

Geno · 12-31-2013, 04:22 PM

i enjoyed this @Joel Venom

took a long time for me to honestly say that i enjoy your music. i think your becoming who you were meant to be in this business. good to see a video from you. well done man

keep doing you

Joel Venom · 01-01-2014, 06:16 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Genocide

i enjoyed this @Joel Venom

took a long time for me to honestly say that i enjoy your music. i think your becoming who you were meant to be in this business. good to see a video from you. well done man

keep doing you

aye homie well good looks on that foreal, i def appreciate that. much love bro i'm still working at my craft so i'm reaching to improve all the time.

Zen · 01-01-2014, 06:41 PM

Nice.

Certain · 01-01-2014, 07:01 PM

The beat is good, your delivery is good and the lyrics are OK to good. But they don't all match up. You're going too fast and there are a few too many things going on in the beat for a song that supposedly has deep lyrics. Plus, the theme is pretty general and generic.

You have all the tools to do it, though, and this was a fine listen.

Figgly Wiggly · 01-01-2014, 09:01 PM

Certain with the constructive criticism

He is a wise man Joel, he means only to be helpful

Joel Venom · 01-02-2014, 05:41 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Certain

The beat is good, your delivery is good and the lyrics are OK to good. But they don't all match up. You're going too fast and there are a few too many things going on in the beat for a song that supposedly has deep lyrics. Plus, the theme is pretty general and generic.

You have all the tools to do it, though, and this was a fine listen.

thanks for the honest feedback, i'm gonna work on that thank you once again i take heed to all the advice and feedback i get!

Badweather · 01-02-2014, 11:47 AM

cool shit

KwaL!ty · 01-02-2014, 12:26 PM

@Joel Venom
i wish cancer was just a Zodiac sign

^dope ass line..

Joel Venom · 01-02-2014, 10:55 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Phuck Yew

@Joel Venom
i wish cancer was just a Zodiac sign

^dope ass line..

much love bro i know you felt that one, it was deep

Objective · 01-03-2014, 03:01 PM

Thought the track was dope, looking forward to see more from you. Also felt what Certain was saying tho', that's great feed imo. Don't got anything more to say, just keep doing you.

Joel Venom · 01-03-2014, 05:34 PM

^much love bro, yeah i'm learning from his feedback to step my game up

12-31-2013, 04:22 PM	#8
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,325 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036758	i enjoyed this @Joel Venom took a long time for me to honestly say that i enjoy your music. i think your becoming who you were meant to be in this business. good to see a video from you. well done man keep doing you __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*

01-01-2014, 07:01 PM	#11
Certain Mad fucking dangerous. Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 12,072 Battle Record: 40-19 Champed - AOWL Season 3 - Art of Writing League (2x) Rep Power: 85899402	The beat is good, your delivery is good and the lyrics are OK to good. But they don't all match up. You're going too fast and there are a few too many things going on in the beat for a song that supposedly has deep lyrics. Plus, the theme is pretty general and generic. You have all the tools to do it, though, and this was a fine listen. __________________ I'm just swinging swords strictly based on keyboards, unbalanced like elephants and ants on seesaws.

01-02-2014, 11:47 AM	#14
Badweather Chillin' like FUCK!!! Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,855 Battle Record: 1-1 Rep Power: 0	cool shit __________________ Chill Phil My rep hand is NOT WAY strong anymore.

01-03-2014, 03:01 PM	#17
Objective ( ͡º ͜ʖ ͡º) Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 3,787 Battle Record: 17-32 Rep Power: 52474189	Thought the track was dope, looking forward to see more from you. Also felt what Certain was saying tho', that's great feed imo. Don't got anything more to say, just keep doing you. __________________ I'm not a slave for entertainment, I'm entertainments personal slave, So deep into writing I'm concerned bout the text on my grave. www.youtube.com/watch?v=gV8ozGcGJ6o

12-31-2013, 03:52 AM	#3
Joel Venom Galaxy Child Join Date: Jun 2013 Location: Raleigh, NC Posts: 137 Rep Power: 34	thanks man, and i don't know why i haven't blown up yet to be honest. i plan to do more shows this year and get some music video's professionally done after i purchase this camera. that motivates me that you think i should be famous by now foreal it really does. god bless

12-31-2013, 04:23 AM	#4
Figgly Wiggly Bam Join Date: Nov 2013 Posts: 456 Rep Power: 3636318	You make great music man. Dope shit, seriously

12-31-2013, 05:08 AM	#6
Ryan 12 Worst of the worst Join Date: Nov 2013 Posts: 1,014 Battle Record: 6-1 Rep Power: 7022	dope video @Joel Venom nice instrumental as well props

12-31-2013, 07:05 AM	#7
uh-oh DA GOD Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Canton Ohio Posts: 12,362 Battle Record: 1-0 Champed - Beat Battle II - Beat Battle V - Beat Bags Rep Power: 84181417	dope

01-01-2014, 06:41 PM	#10
Zen Arm the Homeless Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,104 Battle Record: 22-24 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 35079719	Nice.

01-01-2014, 09:01 PM	#12
Figgly Wiggly Bam Join Date: Nov 2013 Posts: 456 Rep Power: 3636318	Certain with the constructive criticism He is a wise man Joel, he means only to be helpful

01-02-2014, 12:26 PM	#15
KwaL!ty Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 1,170 Battle Record: 21-15 Rep Power: 0	@Joel Venom i wish cancer was just a Zodiac sign ^dope ass line..

01-03-2014, 05:34 PM	#18
Joel Venom Galaxy Child Join Date: Jun 2013 Location: Raleigh, NC Posts: 137 Rep Power: 34	^much love bro, yeah i'm learning from his feedback to step my game up