ill nik-A vs. CtrlF4 - CTRL WINS

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@ill nik-A @ctrlf4

[ill nik-A]

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Welcome!
@ctrlf4 posted

[CtrlF4]

yup..

[ill nik-A]

With my laziness & facing Ctrl how can yall expect me to impress see?!?
yall can grade me all u want but why would I give an F4 when I can beat him with any F key
I can post why the chicken cross the road lines & u wont get other’s votes
Fuck insult to injury… the fact u work in a hospital makes it more of a dead mother joke
my comfort zone is rhyming anything, so fuck ur hate here bro
While ur go to play is Much Ado About Nothing or any faggoty shit Shakespeare wrote
u nothing but a bum homie lol at u thinking u speak wonders
u a wealth of information cuz u know the best dumpster to eat out of & bridge to sleep under
u suck bad & u’re not getting the picture; just quit now its true
& if all of a sudden u start showing flashes… it’s only so I can Kanye punch the shit outta u
We can compare whose lines are better & bring in the facts
If u are Chozen... It's cuz ure just an animated fagggot who thinks he can rap

[CtrlF4]

need an ext til tomorrow after work a lot goin on right now and slpy

[CtrlF4]

I usually don't battle for free, but I had to show this goof
so this beatings on the house, until he's thrown from the roof
As ur pal I have to tell you, ur open mic was weak at best
Bud light was sooo bad, i had to drink a keg to read the rest
& when it comes to the women, we all know ur lifes empty
cuz you cant shelter the fact, ur 40 + and cant provide any
ur bank statements are pathetic, its a known fact ur lackin bills
you get dealt so much small change, you inspired that whole Samsung Apple deal
I asked my girl to get married, she said she's elated to
urs only wants to jump a broom if it leads to escape from you
& this next punch may hurt a bit, but vets stay murkin nik
not only did he lose the fall tourney, he lost every other season tournaments

[KwaL!ty]

I can post why the chicken cross the road lines & u wont get other’s votes
Fuck insult to injury… the fact u work in a hospital makes it more of a dead mother joke
my comfort zone is rhyming anything, so fuck ur hate here bro
While ur go to play is Much Ado About Nothing or any faggoty shit Shakespeare wrote


I get the kanye but it wasn't ye even...



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usually don't battle for free, but I had to show this goof
so this beatings on the house, until he's thrown from the roof
& when it comes to the women, we all know ur lifes empty
cuz you cant shelter the fact, ur 40 + and cant provide any
ur bank statements are pathetic, its a known fact ur lackin bills
you get dealt so much small change, you inspired that whole Samsung Apple deal
I asked my girl to get married, she said she's elated to
urs only wants to jump a broom if it leads to escape from you


vote ... was pretty easy I didn't know what the fuck nik was going for in the start with a keyboard ref .. Ctrl got this

[Answer]

F4 line is okayish, dead mother line doesnt really connect, shakespeare line doesnt have any kind of punch in it, wealth of information line is worded well, but doesnt construct of any wordplay, flash line was cool, but i felt like it couldve been executed better, chozen line was an okay closer

roof line was dope, whether or not it's bitten isn't for me to say - bud light line was eh...if you didnt like bud light, you wouldnt drink a keg - shelter line is solid - wasnt really feeling the small change line, and the broom line was kinda wack. The fall tourney concept wasnt really worded effectively at all



I feel like CTRL started out strong and his verse depreciated over time. Nik wasn't really utilizing a lot of effective concepts...most of it came off as fillerish. I think in a battler, both sides could improve on actually having at least one punch per every 2 lines

but the one standout line was the roof line, and that tipped the vote

MVGT - CTRL4

[Unfukwitable]

With my laziness & facing Ctrl how can yall expect me to impress see?!?
yall can grade me all u want but why would I give an F4 when I can beat him with any F key
not really clever and didn't pack much impact .
I can post why the chicken cross the road lines & u wont get other’s votes
Fuck insult to injury… the fact u work in a hospital makes it more of a dead mother joke
I think I grasped where you was tryna go but wording messed this bar up .
my comfort zone is rhyming anything, so fuck ur hate here bro
While ur go to play is Much Ado About Nothing or any faggoty shit Shakespeare wrote
ain't like wording much but this was cool .
u nothing but a bum homie lol at u thinking u speak wonders
u a wealth of information cuz u know the best dumpster to eat out of & bridge to sleep under
ehh not really feeling it .
u suck bad & u’re not getting the picture; just quit now its true
& if all of a sudden u start showing flashes… it’s only so I can Kanye punch the shit outta u
This was a cool current event bar (it was ye tho but still) .
We can compare whose lines are better & bring in the facts
If u are Chozen... It's cuz ure just an animated fagggot who thinks he can rap
wasn't a good closer Imo .


I usually don't battle for free, but I had to show this goof
so this beatings on the house, until he's thrown from the roof
cool concept couldve been executed doper tho .
As ur pal I have to tell you, ur open mic was weak at best
Bud light was sooo bad, i had to drink a keg to read the rest
this was ok seen the wp before but it was relevant & maybe you shouldve put down your keg to read the rest to go with the "bud light was soo badd" feel me ? .
& when it comes to the women, we all know ur lifes empty
cuz you cant shelter the fact, ur 40 + and cant provide any
couldve been worded much better .
ur bank statements are pathetic, its a known fact ur lackin bills
you get dealt so much small change, you inspired that whole Samsung Apple deal
not feeling this I get where you're going tho .
I asked my girl to get married, she said she's elated to
urs only wants to jump a broom if it leads to escape from you
wasn't a solid bar .
& this next punch may hurt a bit, but vets stay murkin nik
not only did he lose the fall tourney, he lost every other season tournaments
Okay, couldve had more sting for the close tho .

this battle was Ight I feel like one came with a sleeper verse not bringing his usual style of dope to the table he just rushed some quick bars with okay concepts out to avoid a n/s thats just my opinion due to reading his past material the other had some okay concepts didn't execute them to their fullest potential but he did just enough to pull out the win, looking forward to yall coming with your A+ games next time around . v/ Ctrl

[King Ra.]

@ill nik-A, your opener was just a generic punch, a simple nameplay diss, nothing major. Second bar, again was basic. Wasn't really feeling the concept there and seems more indirect than direct, but even at that doesn't pack enough of a sting. Third bar, like the previous two doesn't connect to well, though this is your best attempt thus far. Fourth bar, is decent. Still no real connection here. Between this & your third bar, I feel you could have done something more with the concepts used. Something is just missing. Fifth bar seems to me so far as your best shot. This packed a bit of a sting, but it lacks creativity. Closer, is okay. Comes off more like your fifth bar, but out of everything you wrote, the last two bars are the more effective ones.

@ctrlf4, opener is good. The house/roof connection was a nice concept, not a haymaker but a nice jab to start. Your second bar however misses to me. It doesn't come off too well punchwise, more statementish the way you delivered it. Third bar is okay. The set up to the punchline is what makes it connect, but just a personal shot at best. Fourth bar, is good. I liked the small change/Samsung/Apple connection. Again, you do a good job having the set up lead into the punch line. Fifth bar is l-o-l. Not a stinger but decent. Closer was okay. Could have been better, but points for the personal connection.


Pretty shocked at this match up. While this is the first time I've read a ctrlf4 verse, I've read plenty nik-A verses and this was one was far from the norm. I haven't seen you battle much lately so maybe you are trying to warm up or underestimated your opponent. In either case this definitely was far from you at your peak. ctrlf4, was most consistent here, I felt the opener was a nice start and set the tone. LOTB imo was the small change/Samsung/Apple bar. With that said....

MVGT: ctrlf4. Good job by both competitors.