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Old 06-28-2015, 04:53 PM   #1
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Old 06-28-2015, 06:17 PM   #2
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Old 06-29-2015, 02:21 AM   #3
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Thought that was dope, reminded me of some Wu Tang ish. You writing to get through this slump you were talking about being in musically?

Best way out of it IMHO is to write through it, keep everything, read through again when you have that groove back and find some hidden gems back there in the work!

Keep that pen moving!
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Old 06-29-2015, 05:37 PM   #4
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this shit fire. well played
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Old 07-02-2015, 03:13 PM   #5
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this was some dope out the box shit Geno...
some of that less toilet paper summer day hot shit...
but word for the length it was, it came off smooth
LMAO, but here's a bump man..
this shit needs more views...
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Word thanks guys. Had forgotten about this. Been down a while just stumbled on it. I REALLY want to write again i just never push myself to use my spare time to do so. I need you guys man.
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