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Old 11-19-2019, 12:09 PM   #1
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Asylum:

(i) the protection granted by a nation to someone who has left their native country as a political refugee.

(ii) an institution offering shelter and support to people who are mentally ill.

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Stuck behind boarded windows can't make my coordinates known
If I'm not in my own world then straight to orbit I go
According to most I escaped the nuthouse as orderlies dozed
Those in denial all goin' viral like a quarantine zone
Fuck law n' order get your lawn in order, crawl through the weeds slow
If y'all gonna go beast mode you could've at least mowed
You standing at the cross roads and trip on the potholes
Until your momentum subsides like a sandwich with a combo
The south might vanish in ozone but the antidote's global
I doubt your land is that noble to reject outlandish proposals
Why go out on a limb? Oh... you're a prominent figure
Last time I went out in a limo I went to prom in it, figures
I always deliver, you have-nots might trigger some suspicions
But if I ever get out of your hair it will be on one condition
Grizzled vets are still spittin' so if you go and chill with 'em...
Better bloody-well-listen like a buffalo bill victim
You killed religion so I went from praying more to wishin'
The alternative is I'll-turn-native for the tuition
Flash mob you bitches, it's not to say I contract hitmen...
But when Whitey Bulger swapped his prisons my knee socks were gone and missin'
What a coincidence; down south word gets around
But if you try to live it up you'll never live it down
Mix loathing with self doubt and y'all can drown in that shit
So batten down the hatches and walk on eggshells for the practice
Got you dead-to-rights like Patrick, yet no one is flattered
Fact is you got to be dead to write something that matters
Let you in on a secret like passwords, just listen to the streets
Y'all driven by ingenuity but that engine isn't new to me
Didn't you even proofread? I know my shit is appaulin' to newbies
Hive been drawing in groupies since my shit was a-pollen to new-bees
Hate to spring that on you but the writing's on the wall
So to summer-ize pride comes before the fall
I'll report to the almighty before I conform to this forum
Take you off life support but be warned, life's-a-port in the storm
I don't harbor resentment anymore, stick the landing I'm off and running
I guess I'm just plane-gully, no wonder my rep stays unsullied
I'll bank money rolls until that fugaze art is sold
Low and behold ya may-lay charges like Liu Kang's arsenal
I'm Orenthal to your Nicole, we're doing a dry run tonight
I'll click every dating app in sight just to wet my appetite
Collect my windfall like tornado sites, I'm getting used to theft
One flew over the cuckoo's nest but what happened to the rest?
School's a business students live in to get used to prison
A putrid system, if the church pew's missin' then who's forgiven?
Too hot headed it's pathetic, you are meant to fail
You jerks sweat details yet cooler heads prevail
You say "love it or leave it" like your border's real
But you couldn't make Us/Get Out if you were Jordan Peele
Your country's whole spiel is something we need to behold
Cuz he who wears the belt rarely ever sees the loop holes
Plus your news is fully consumed by the bullets you shoot
Now you try to pull geeks from schools... well, bully for you
You got no replies and forty views? Just keep on droppin' dude
All it proves is you're too good for people to acknowledge you
Seems great but ain't the truth; Look who you nominate these days
Letting a dog off its leash makes you a walking cliche
I'd rather replay old freeze frames than succeed in these states
I guess boredom is the price we pay for not being insane
You cramp discussion boards nothing more, even heinous sluts read rants
Seems with ink-you-bait chicks like eggs under heat lamps
They say Canada is a melting pot and I'm cast iron man
I won't lend a helping hand so you can hop out of that frying pan
I'm in high demand, with no mist near the coast is clear
Votes disappear, the fix is in but there's no repair
You incensed like a fragrance so I toss a frag in boats
Like burn you star spangled faggots, this is my flagship post
The passion used to build a wall left people trapped in tombs
I have to assume that inside there's fifty padded rooms
A long pursuit of freedom, dawn's early light starts the song
Another lobotomy never bothered me as long as my heart was strong
I know it's hard to drop these bombs until the target's gone
But after not too long you forget what side of the bars you're on...

.. .emoh si erehw eht traeh si. ..

Ah, for fuck sakes... Is everything okay doctor? What's wrong?
I shocked the... God damnit. Do you want me to get involved?
Unless you can fix an iron lung, this is something I have to solve
But sir, he has no medical coverage or I.D. attached at all
These fucking foreigners... Then fucking just prescribe him Tylenol
Where is he from anyway? We found him lying outside the wall
Toss him over... Won't he climb back up?... It's forty five feet tall!
Plus he's not one of us, he won't survive another violent fall
Besides it's not my call, I've been trumped from high above

You don't mean... Please, he's been out of office since 2021
I'm just saying, don't you think the country's been mismanaged enough?
Rappers and wrestlers are passing for Presidents, the damage is done

Um sir, I think the middle finger on the patient's hand is just stuck
It must've landed straight up ... He'd make a pretty good mannequin, huh?
I think something's planted in the... Relax, didn't you notice his mask?
Hasn't Halloween passed? I thought this job was no strings attached
Sir, he stinks of gas and not the kind that leaks from his ass
Ha! Don't make me laugh, did you toss his wedding ring in the trash?
Well give me that STAT, you know I'm underpaid
Two mortgages and one Escalade can really bust the bank
Besides look at his ribcage, that stamp says Made in USA

Sir I think it's a fake, it's bluish grey with an unusual fade
I can't see the 'A', (Made in Us?) Is that a wire in his palm?
Yup. We may make the news today nurse, but try to stay calm
What do you mean?... Wipe away the make up, hear that quiet alarm?
I might be wrong but beside his small intestine lies a hydrogen bomb
My God! What do we do!? Who do we tell!? Where do we go!?
Leave the questions alone, we have no friends, all our bridges are closed
But surely we can let in those we've helped and assisted from home!
The system is broke, our brothers bailed and our sisters are smoke
Wait! His lips have just spoke ... Lean in and listen real close...
"We hear you crying out save us... but the world is whispering... No"
I think we found us a host, hear that ticking sound from below?
We did this to ourselves, didn't we? Doctor, I think he's about to explo- -
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Old 11-19-2019, 03:17 PM   #2
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I’ll come back to this with a breakdown fo sho
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you could have gone for more to wishing/more tuition
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