Week 14 Contenders: Innovator vs. YDK - (YDK wins)

Vulgar · 09-30-2015, 10:57 PM

LGPA Season 1: Week 14

@Innovator @YDK

Check ins: Thursday (Midnight Eastern time)
Poems Due: Friday (Midnight Eastern time)
Votes due: Sunday (Midnight Eastern time)

Topic: The Animal Kingdom

Write about something you see in this video.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oZud8JHtxWE

Good luck.

YDK · 10-01-2015, 01:06 AM

Check

Inno · 10-01-2015, 08:40 AM

Oh my

Inno · 10-02-2015, 10:23 PM

Ext plz

Inno · 10-03-2015, 09:24 PM

Fields of savages amongst victims
Fur killer skin, ivory hunter stink
Blood curdling howls haunt the moon
Mauled paws swipe the the stars
Chasing heaven Amidst the haze

Killings saturate the winds
Souls evaporated along the trails
Lost battles, tales of the fallen
Victory stalked, pranced. Killed.

YDK · 10-04-2015, 02:13 AM

Droppin soon

YDK · 10-04-2015, 02:17 AM

Elegance, wild
The food chain has no remorse
When we're all hungry

Spoken · 10-04-2015, 03:52 AM

Just to let ya kno ur ku is off brother its only 4-7-5 bruh first default.

This was actually harder to vote on than it seems tbr.... the haiku speaks in volumes.... and its utterly effective. For what it is and how jt indulged into the tooic. Niceness and inno had a nice descriptive of the basic yet completw take on such tooic. U did a predictable take but expanded thw creativity and showed crafted work with ur word selection.

Hmm..... hard but I gotta go with inn... could go either way tho

YDK · 10-04-2015, 04:08 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Spoken

Just to let ya kno ur ku is off brother its only 4-7-5 bruh first default.

This was actually harder to vote on than it seems tbr.... the haiku speaks in volumes.... and its utterly effective. For what it is and how jt indulged into the tooic. Niceness and inno had a nice descriptive of the basic yet completw take on such tooic. U did a predictable take but expanded thw creativity and showed crafted work with ur word selection.

Hmm..... hard but I gotta go with inn... could go either way tho

I pronounce wild as 2 syllables (why-ooled)
Just to be clear lol

Woke · 10-04-2015, 02:45 PM

I am going to give this to YDK. While it is a close battle, both were short and that haiku is just overly effective. Shit hit a few nails on the pin head square

v/ydk

Vulgar · 10-06-2015, 11:42 PM

Tough battle to tally. Innovator came with something of a picture in a photo album approach, giving the reader glimpses of various perspectives in respect to war, animalistic nature, and he used animals as a way of doing this. It had its flimsy moments. I don't think it was a strong showing. My poem was garbo this week, btw. (Smh)

YDK - "Elegance, wild" is a bit of a mismatch. Unless... well, we can consider nature as an elegant network. It really is. The last line was a hitter, I liked the sound of it. It has an element of an overseeing statement - one of those lines that are impossible to disagree with. We nod our heads like "Eh? Yes." in the aftermath.

VOTE YDK

Frank · 10-07-2015, 03:40 AM

MVGT YDK

Haiku nullified his opponent

09-30-2015, 10:57 PM	#1
Vulgar Razor-thin derision Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,422 Battle Record: 40-25 Accomplishments - OM HOF Champed - Fight Night LIV - Gimmick Battle League (2x) - Write Week II - Art of Writing League - Storytelling And Topical Invitational Tournament - STI - Haiku Writer Challenge - GWL Picture Challenge(2x) Rep Power: 49604317	Week 14 Contenders: Innovator vs. YDK - (YDK wins) LGPA Season 1: Week 14 @Innovator @YDK Check ins: Thursday (Midnight Eastern time) Poems Due: Friday (Midnight Eastern time) Votes due: Sunday (Midnight Eastern time) Topic: The Animal Kingdom Write about something you see in this video. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oZud8JHtxWE Good luck.

10-01-2015, 01:06 AM	#2
YDK ghost in the matrix Join Date: Apr 2013 Location: Covington, KY Posts: 4,564 Battle Record: 14-25 Champed - Art of Writing League (x2) - Lime Green Poetry Association Rep Power: 8181109	Check __________________

10-04-2015, 02:13 AM	#6
YDK ghost in the matrix Join Date: Apr 2013 Location: Covington, KY Posts: 4,564 Battle Record: 14-25 Champed - Art of Writing League (x2) - Lime Green Poetry Association Rep Power: 8181109	Droppin soon __________________

10-04-2015, 02:17 AM	#7
YDK ghost in the matrix Join Date: Apr 2013 Location: Covington, KY Posts: 4,564 Battle Record: 14-25 Champed - Art of Writing League (x2) - Lime Green Poetry Association Rep Power: 8181109	Elegance, wild The food chain has no remorse When we're all hungry __________________

10-04-2015, 03:52 AM	#8
Spoken ...DA GAWD... Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,355 Battle Record: 13-34 Rep Power: 5860410	Just to let ya kno ur ku is off brother its only 4-7-5 bruh first default. This was actually harder to vote on than it seems tbr.... the haiku speaks in volumes.... and its utterly effective. For what it is and how jt indulged into the tooic. Niceness and inno had a nice descriptive of the basic yet completw take on such tooic. U did a predictable take but expanded thw creativity and showed crafted work with ur word selection. Hmm..... hard but I gotta go with inn... could go either way tho __________________ WP Po'ethics

10-01-2015, 08:40 AM	#3
Inno Ad mini tator Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 10,005 Battle Record: 26-54 Champed - Lime Green Poetry Association - Black August - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 85899400	Oh my

10-02-2015, 10:23 PM	#4
Inno Ad mini tator Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 10,005 Battle Record: 26-54 Champed - Lime Green Poetry Association - Black August - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 85899400	Ext plz

10-03-2015, 09:24 PM	#5
Inno Ad mini tator Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 10,005 Battle Record: 26-54 Champed - Lime Green Poetry Association - Black August - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 85899400	Fields of savages amongst victims Fur killer skin, ivory hunter stink Blood curdling howls haunt the moon Mauled paws swipe the the stars Chasing heaven Amidst the haze Killings saturate the winds Souls evaporated along the trails Lost battles, tales of the fallen Victory stalked, pranced. Killed.

10-04-2015, 02:45 PM	#10
Woke Senior Member Join Date: May 2015 Posts: 183 Battle Record: 6-4 Rep Power: 553415	I am going to give this to YDK. While it is a close battle, both were short and that haiku is just overly effective. Shit hit a few nails on the pin head square v/ydk

10-06-2015, 11:42 PM	#11
Vulgar Razor-thin derision Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,422 Battle Record: 40-25 Accomplishments - OM HOF Champed - Fight Night LIV - Gimmick Battle League (2x) - Write Week II - Art of Writing League - Storytelling And Topical Invitational Tournament - STI - Haiku Writer Challenge - GWL Picture Challenge(2x) Rep Power: 49604317	Tough battle to tally. Innovator came with something of a picture in a photo album approach, giving the reader glimpses of various perspectives in respect to war, animalistic nature, and he used animals as a way of doing this. It had its flimsy moments. I don't think it was a strong showing. My poem was garbo this week, btw. (Smh) YDK - "Elegance, wild" is a bit of a mismatch. Unless... well, we can consider nature as an elegant network. It really is. The last line was a hitter, I liked the sound of it. It has an element of an overseeing statement - one of those lines that are impossible to disagree with. We nod our heads like "Eh? Yes." in the aftermath. VOTE YDK

10-07-2015, 03:40 AM	#12
Frank Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2001 Posts: 3,228 Champed - NWL Season 2 - Art of Writing League (5x) - Lime Green Poetry Association - AOWL Season 6 - AOWL Season 10 Rep Power: 3853343	MVGT YDK Haiku nullified his opponent __________________ *VETWORK*