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Old 09-20-2018, 09:10 PM   #1
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Old 09-20-2018, 09:12 PM   #2
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Old 09-24-2018, 05:28 PM   #3
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Originally Posted by John Dillinger
I mean just don’t go calling something trash and terrible one week and then dope the next it just doesn’t make sense

u mads a disgrace, ya battle in the 1-2 got u slapped in the face
i know that 'elegance' Viper was rough... but damn cant u have it with grace
this kid just annoys, my boys pick where i shoot n they get to the point
so when the metal goes up, my team yellin heads n tails, im flippin a coin
tough guy a merc? kill u and ya partner, if u bluff u get hurt
so step into my office and get sent home with a box, tough day at work
im slumpin the jerk, u never get in holes the scrub just appalls
watch me swing n fuck up John Daly... then take a club to his balls
ur fearin the slug! eye contacts not a thing he wears like a thug
one blastll put ya in orbit, he wont look at the heat like hes scared of the sun

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Old 09-24-2018, 10:33 PM   #4
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I don't give your bitch my time, u really think this "dimes" fine?
We know ur just Pressin Zero's the way Scorekeeper on the Sideline
I'll shoot u before you blink, should be a felon w/ it dude
Showed up while u Scrambled & Bledsoe much it's irrelevant what u Drew
Took ur wife from ur fake ass, she see's that when I flex it I blast it
The day I met her she threw away Scoring & it wasnt no S.I Classics
During the pod I had that bitch suckin, her head right by the glock bro
& when u see the bullets the Mag Cast it won't follow w/ Friendly Convo
U got that Syndrome u slow fuck, smoke ur tard ass while Im recordin
& wash your bloody shirt w/ Downy cuz it tortures u watching me pour it

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Old 09-27-2018, 05:08 PM   #5
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Elegance, Jon Daly

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Magcast

This was a cool battle. I was a bit stingy with quotes but nothing was bad. Was just feeling score a bit more. JD, Bledsoe was a bit too old/obscure and the throw away score could’ve been dope but I didn't like the flip. Nice battle tho.

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Old 09-29-2018, 05:41 PM   #6
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u mads a disgrace, ya battle in the 1-2 got u slapped in the face
i know that 'elegance' Viper was rough... but damn cant u have it with grace

(This is pretty good. I think you had typo in setup. Elegance was pretty slick. The angle is just okay)

this kid just annoys, my boys pick where i shoot n they get to the point
so when the metal goes up, my team yellin heads n tails, im flippin a coin

(Good concept. I see where you were going but you didn’t quite pull it off imo. The heads and tails part is a bit forced)

tough guy a merc? kill u and ya partner, if u bluff u get hurt
so step into my office and get sent home with a box, tough day at work

(This was a light jab. I think it landed but it’s sent home with a box flip feels a bit basic)

im slumpin the jerk, u never get in holes the scrub just appalls
watch me swing n fuck up John Daly... then take a club to his balls

(I know he’s John Daly is a golfer but I don’t watch golf (except tiger lol) so I’m using context clues, but I’m pretty sure I’m missing the reference. For what it’s worth, it seems pretty good. The John Daly is a good name flip. I see the tie ins, but I been googling because I’m sure there’s a current event reference here but I don’t get it. I liked it even going I’m sure I’m not completely catching it)

ur fearin the slug! eye contacts not a thing he wears like a thug
one blastll put ya in orbit, he wont look at the heat like hes scared of the sun

(I got this one missing. The flip is really basic. You set up the punch a bit with the “fearing the slug” but you needed more imagery to really make this work. Also, won’t look at the heat/won’t look at the sun is a bit reachy to me. I like where you were going, I think you coulda made it work, but I don’t think you executed it as best as you could)


I don't give your bitch my time, u really think this "dimes" fine?
We know ur just Pressin Zero's the way Scorekeeper on the Sideline

(I’m missing the double meaning for pressing Zeros. What sport is that for? Context clues helped me with this one though. I like the concept. Scorekeeper name flip is pretty good. This is landed. Prob even better if I fully understood the reference)

I'll shoot u before you blink, should be a felon w/ it dude
Showed up while u Scrambled & Bledsoe much it's irrelevant what u Drew

(So I’ve heard Bledsoe/bled so flips before (with Eric Bledsoe the b-ball player) so that took away from the impact to me - didn’t feel fresh. It has some choppy wording issues. You woulda needed to set this one up better and clean up the wording for it to really land. This was just okay to me at best)

Took ur wife from ur fake ass, she see's that when I flex it I blast it
The day I met her she threw away Scoring & it wasnt no S.I Classics

(Lol y’all killing me with theses references. I normally catch everything with a google search but I cant figure this one out either. Not sure what SI Classics is. Anyways, Score ring is a slight stretch. Other than that - can’t really give too much feed)

During the pod I had that bitch suckin, her head right by the glock bro
& when u see the bullets the Mag Cast it won't follow w/ Friendly Convo

(Grimey! I liked this one. Mag cast was a good flip. Set it up well. Nice line)

U got that Syndrome u slow fuck, smoke ur tard ass while Im recordin
& wash your bloody shirt w/ Downy cuz it tortures u watching me pour it

(Lol funny concept. You shoulda did a better flip with the “Downy” because I like where you were going. The “tortures you watching me pour it” part isn’t that good to me because that’s not really going to torture someone with downs unless you really paint that picture in the set up. This was okay)


This was a close battle to me. I think JD had the LOTB with the Magcast line but I think Score was more consistent. Score was landing jabs throughout and landed more punches even though JD was the heavier puncher. I missed a few bars from both guys so hopefully that didn’t mess up my vote too much. Overall, I got Score slightly edging this one.

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Old 09-30-2018, 07:31 PM   #7
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u mads a disgrace, ya battle in the 1-2 got u slapped in the face
i know that 'elegance' Viper was rough... but damn cant u have it with grace

Okay.

this kid just annoys, my boys pick where i shoot n they get to the point
so when the metal goes up, my team yellin heads n tails, im flippin a coin

Wording was off here. Decent.

tough guy a merc? kill u and ya partner, if u bluff u get hurt
so step into my office and get sent home with a box, tough day at work
Again, good concept but could’ve been re-worded to add more impact.

im slumpin the jerk, u never get in holes the scrub just appalls
watch me swing n fuck up John Daly... then take a club to his balls
lol. Good.

ur fearin the slug! eye contacts not a thing he wears like a thug
one blastll put ya in orbit, he wont look at the heat like hes scared of the sun
Eh.




I don't give your bitch my time, u really think this "dimes" fine?
We know ur just Pressin Zero's the way Scorekeeper on the Sideline
Not feeling.

I'll shoot u before you blink, should be a felon w/ it dude
Showed up while u Scrambled & Bledsoe much it's irrelevant what u Drew
Okay.

Took ur wife from ur fake ass, she see's that when I flex it I blast it
The day I met her she threw away Scoring & it wasnt no S.I Classics
Okay.

During the pod I had that bitch suckin, her head right by the glock bro
& when u see the bullets the Mag Cast it won't follow w/ Friendly Convo
Nice.

U got that Syndrome u slow fuck, smoke ur tard ass while Im recordin
& wash your bloody shirt w/ Downy cuz it tortures u watching me pour it
Na.

Okay battle. I think JD was better written, while Score had the better concepts/punches. In all, I could oversee the wording from Score enough to appreciate the punchlines.

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