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Old 03-06-2020, 01:24 PM   #2901
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Transparent apparition, apparently lacks attention
It's scarce but the passions in him, the terrible tracks he's spittin
Work as a gateway to show the world his embarassing accidents
Documenting his rises and falls, and witness his backwards spinnin
Each verse could be used as a parable to detatch from sins
Each paragraph is a suicide note, foreshadowing the barrel that's at his chin
When this magnum pop like Cobain death'll be my magnum opus
Phantom of the opera showed promise but was undone by his tragic losses
Now close the curtain, slide the velvet drapes over my final act
It's over, he finally ran out of lines to rap
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Old 03-09-2020, 11:58 AM   #2902
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First off...I'm better man, Not one person here likes you
You couldn't come hard nigga if you were stickin' it to Ice Cube
I'll light you on fire then put it out with gas, Fuckin' rip you fast
I would split you with personals but this bitch don't have no past
I'm 34 & in my prime, My hooks will leave you inspired
I guess the older the worse yes? You're like fuckin' Ali ever since he retired
You're wack & that's a fact, So there's the reason why I lost interest fast
You can be dope I'll give you that, but lately nigga you've just been trash
Meanin' you're garbage...
You're the fill buster to my skill, & I'm an option to your nuclear carnage
Just give it up dude, Join my fan club & listen
Nigga you've been wantin' these bars like every time you dropped the soap in prison
Bad jokes & simple rhymes, That's what your style brings to mind
'Cause when & if we battle, It's just gonna be my mom or sister is your filler for lines
You would lose, Shut up & give me rep
Now sit back down, Learn from it & give respect.
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Old 03-10-2020, 12:10 AM   #2903
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yo Fuck Off with all this Tough Talk i'll have you outlined in Chalk
better Walk or Run Away i dodge bullets from the Gun you Spray
are you having Fun Today?
Again, jus' Leave i'll be Negging you Indeed while you be Begging for Feed
Wholly Mediocre/ you're an Ugly little Ogre the reason i Don't stay Sober
watch who you're talking to with all your Commands. fan club? you don't have Fans
or Stans
when writing a verse you need a better Plan.
you in your Prime? you Lyin'
u don't live a Life of Crime best believe i'll Fight for Mine and take yours if your Wife is Fine
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Respect is Earned usually around the time i'm Emptying your Urn,
after Letting you Burn
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Old 03-10-2020, 02:52 AM   #2904
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You know there is a Diss the Emcee above you thread, Why not post this bullshit in there instead...
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Old 03-10-2020, 11:03 AM   #2905
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They say I'm working on myself every year lime Bieber do
But if you need the truth i hardly ever see it through
I got here from hardwork and dedic...nah i preferred the easy route
I'm a ghost of my former self...beetlejuice beetlejuice beetlejuice
Old bitch said i was clingy, i put too much heart and soul in it
Wifey says I'm so despondent and borderline emotionless
I'm trying to find a balance walking on wires suspended in the sky
Depression in my smile and surrender in my eyes
Wanted to be the next Hakeem Seriki but I'm more like Joaquin Phoenix
Portraying a broken man, Stopped being a dreamer once they caught me sleeping
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Old 03-13-2020, 02:00 AM   #2906
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Airlift aboard. Ric Flair gifs galore.

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Old 03-16-2020, 06:02 AM   #2907
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The effort shines twisting purges infecting minds
across the desert lines fought degenerate spy's
electrolyte imbalance too much sweat for one exercise
take your time there's little left your earth just got penalized
like a virus the cure is vivid signs your listless no fear to die
as i play pretend in suspended states
Why does your pad screw the infrequent waste
i asked why does a clear view incite feelings that we are fakes
The accompanied deposit socks his bay not today
im free never locked away the vertical guard
such phenomenon growls the embedded names
of a virtual god

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Old 03-16-2020, 05:48 PM   #2908
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A virtual God won't hurt you like; "Nah,
I got service to attend and chats with Allah."
Misfits in awe stare death in the eye like bigots on Ra,
who needs the sun when you can spin vinyls of Ska?
And intrinsic sheets of rap music hits visits unique.
Adlibs are important so mix it with beats.
S'all codes on a screen, nano-bots for machines,
all of me makes up pixels on screens.
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So deep into writing I'm concerned bout the text on my grave.


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Old 03-18-2020, 09:40 PM   #2909
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Ayo...

Exis returns burnin', You've heated the kid
The best move you could ever make is just deletin' your shit
Beat me? I've reached three
I'm Bill Clinton nigga, Impeach me
I'm gangsta like snitching & ouch
You couldn't find fuckin' shells @ the beach G
You gotta be bigger to reach me, Don't be laughin' so fast
The only back down is your mom when I'm waxin' that ass
Sentiments shown, Everyone knows you've been a poser for weeks
Your fuckin' opener, The middle & your closer was weak
You pack toasters as heat, Bitch fuck you & your gay friends
If you're so great, Why don't you create multies that fuckin' make sense?
My spittin' is like my women, Listen
I'd rather not bust fast
You're used like a bus pass, I got ill 20's
Nigga you roll on hub caps
I got bitches on my nut sack while you're stuck on rape
Why'd you come off the head? Man, It felt fuckin' great!
Just a little longer, Please son
I promise I'll squeeze one
Right between your eyes so you realise Exis has come
Straight for your spot bitch, Laugh later you're just a wack hater
I rap greater, You couldn't find a decent line on graph paper.
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Old 03-21-2020, 03:58 PM   #2910
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down my throat i splash Jager whenever my past wavers
and blast neighbors with guns that'll slash razors
my flask savior, i grasp til it's down to its last vapor
this crass nature of mine will help me to stay safer
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Old 03-21-2020, 10:31 PM   #2911
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getting detained, then getting tasered, staying on paper, no audio, no video, the court rule in my favor, letting me out / loose on you haters, in the backyard next to the chick coop shooting potatoes, it's Mister Doom and Gloom, doom's day pepper, the one with all the tools and weapons that he uses with aggression, and if he had to he'd take it from you in a second, who cares about the rules when the food starts to lessen, people come unglued and start stressing, it's time for you to start investing in something to use for your protection

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Old 03-21-2020, 11:32 PM   #2912
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reptilian collapse high dimensional memory maps
with that said you react wrong
don't respond sloppy to a future already drawn
before you were born
symmetry tracks from point to line to energy packs
with that said you react right beyond memory facts

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Old 03-22-2020, 09:37 AM   #2913
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Jimmy Halpert of the hip hop offices
Been quarantined 25 years due to my social awkwardness
Looking around at the mass hysteria...psh buncha novices
The waded up cloths under my bed could’ve started the apocalypse
Toilet paper shortage? Nah my filler semen full of killer traits
Bunch of new age Jeffery Dahmers and Billy Gates
Insane or genius?, the line I walk is thin..
You wanna fill my shoes? Those some giant moccasins!
Prognosis is I’ve been problematic since my prologue
Already knew I was making waves with my voice before sonar
All I know is go hard and never give it a rest..
Scribbling vet, barbecue sauce the thing behind my ribs is a mess.
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Old 03-23-2020, 03:11 PM   #2914
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get his address, get in the car and give me the tech, fill up this cartridge and put on this vest, i'll do the hard shit, you take out the pet, keep it from barking, i'll take out the rest, if we stay in the dark they'll be no arrest, they'll be no one left! ha
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if you do this for me, then you? i'll respect, if not, then it's you i reject

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Then its you ill neglect , who you fooling? the movements a mess
i know your doing your best

a much needed quest conceded beetle heads feasting on meaty flesh
a much needed rest competing ants incompetent that there queens eating less

Kings crowned,rings round a once pound a posies,rhythm switch
how strange your girlfriends proud she knows me,shade like master roshi

The plague glows,radiance emitting blob like slime , drop that line
corona said drop that lime, put em on time out,sit em in the corner

feed em to the lion house,walking threw rome with the lions out
roaming the desert cause the rhymes are drying out and your suns dying out

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Old 03-27-2020, 11:51 PM   #2917
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The glare of the sphere teetered out and was gone. 7-hundred-however many billion years of calipers pronged in the Outer Mekong.

Why do stars even last that long? What ecosystem is being supported. And who can get through space time with all the rigor mortis when the ships are cordless.

Let's hop in Skipper's Forklift and prepare for inner war-winds. A dry spot's a nice landing patch but avoid the eternal tornadoes in the pale gray vortex.
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quit telling these whores fables, trying to coerce them into sex
when you can just strangle them and force them into it, it anit gonna
make any difference, you're still just taking up space with your existences,
the car in the way when you're running late, that's under the speed limit
looking to see who be in it, before rolling down the window and squeezing it
it's ok for you to think of this, but to actually do the shit means you're a lunatic,
means you done flipped, like the switch on the circuit breaker, you done tripped
all the lights on but no one;s home,you done split, your boy's gone
take another hit from the bong, don't blow it out it'll i finish writing this song
taking it right to the dome, so much on my mind, need to lighten the load
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Old 04-03-2020, 01:18 PM   #2919
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Kept provokin me till i had broken my silence
Kept poking the sleeping sheep until you had woken a lion
Shook a dormant poltergeist who only walked corridors at night
Now he's a day walking vampire who's immune to the light
A changed dude from that lame brain from high school
Who wouldn't do his homework but would crank out a dang chain of haikus
The game changed but mind you, I'm still that flow provider
Hope you got a camp to stand beside you when i decide to open fire
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Jobless, mobs of anti-appreciatives load into train cars
repurposed hospitals.
What's possible has been reconsidered - so much so
"Robust growth" and let's take a loan out to stay in bungalows
Bundled, cloaked, hundreds stoked
to survive easy. But under no conditions is it guarantined
Lungs choke. Lunge for ropes - the safest way to climb freely
Freefalling but took hold. Don't look down - it's gruesome in Rome
The moon isn't whole, if you look out the window
Or look inward. It's just you in your funeral homes.
What the heck? WHO is next? Is it strep?
Did you take your meds? I'm feeling kind of hot in the head
I'm trying to cope with the stress
Sitting on a boat and depressed
It's a cold day and suffering's the proof

Infected. Deaths. Recovered. Phew.
We follow timelines and guidelines, muttering rebukes
Can we source the spread of Black Death?
A seafood market in Wuhan.
That's pretty accurate compared to how it was detected in the past.
Tequila in the flask. Supplies are going fast.
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