LMAO SO I'M WILLING TO PUT MY NC TEXT BATTLE RECORD ON THE LINE VS. CIMMERIAN - OH SHIT! - Page 2

sral · 08-21-2015, 03:24 PM

lmao damn that banstick been wielded pretty quick huh?

Cimmerian · 08-21-2015, 05:16 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by sraL

Dope shit, no worries.

I'm married too. Let me know when you've got a minute and we'll get this in!

Shouts to @Vulgar too on the Spotlight offer, much appreciated.

I can't lie, I'd have preferred something longer bar count-wise, but it's a privilege and an honour to get to face you. Much respect bruh.

Well, you can write as much as you want. But I'll write probably 14-16 lines.

Thanks for the compliment.

Cimm.

Cimmerian · 08-30-2015, 10:35 PM

I should be able to sit down this week. When do you want the verses to be due?

Cimm.

Clutbuck · 08-31-2015, 04:27 AM

I'm not too bothered on when the verse are due. Aren't you getting married next week?!

Just post up when you're done and I'll have something posted when you come back off honeymoon.

No pressure.

It's an honour just to have you back writing tbh.

oats · 08-31-2015, 05:25 AM

I got winner.

Clutbuck · 08-31-2015, 05:42 AM

you in the AOWL @oats?

Cimmerian · 08-31-2015, 08:22 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Clutbuck

I'm not too bothered on when the verse are due. Aren't you getting married next week?!

Just post up when you're done and I'll have something posted when you come back off honeymoon.

No pressure.

It's an honour just to have you back writing tbh.

This coming weekend. I have a fantasy draft this Tuesday. I'll write while I'm doing that. Should I just post the verse in this thread?

Cimm.

sral · 08-31-2015, 08:52 AM

Yeah that's cool, think Vulgar said he'll throw it up on some Spotlight Battle ish in the leagues once were done so no need for a separate thread!

oats · 08-31-2015, 09:11 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Clutbuck

you in the AOWL @oats?

nah. too busy

Cimmerian · 08-31-2015, 05:55 PM

a [d] diction

The death of me: these words work incessantly
Like cooks in a kitchen mixing without a recipe
Phrases speed on pages, collision on the precipice
Crash of a diction, the prescription is the melody
Art is a catharsis or a needle to a vinyl vein—
Scratching the surface, bleeding as I write away
Drowned in the sound, surfing on a tidal wave
Sands through my hand, slipping with the light of day
Been drunk off the ink, the pen parries the sheets
Stabbing wounds in a womb to carry the seed
The birth of thought, blooming, I'm buried beneath—
The root of all evil, and now its married to me
All bark and not a bite from the family tree
Let's pretend we're all peachy, syrupy sweet
Knocking ourselves out for the feel of the beat
Popping pills/taking notes hoping nobody sleeps . . .

on me.

8===D~~~~(}: · 09-01-2015, 12:22 AM

so gay

sral · 09-20-2015, 09:00 AM

The whole over-the-counter culture we're determined to push and market
is reminiscent of how a vulture first circles above a carcass.
Once it's certain its supple targets ripe for the taking,
It turns and then plummets sharply to try and engage it.
Few survive to escape this method of business
as the vulture thrives on remains left by their victims.
Its predatory instinct has been meticulously honed
to descend on the witless before picking at the bones.
Initially it holds them in place as its denigrating
before crippling it's foe beneath the weight of its expectation.
The prey is then decimated, with it's worth spit from the beak,
and vulture retaining its reputation for being driven by greed.
Stripping the meat from the soulless skeleton that remains in its hold
until every bit has been eaten up by the generation below.
With patented old ideas regurgitated and fed to the young
as originality's re-labelled, re-sold, re-pressed and re-done...

ill nik-A · 09-20-2015, 10:15 AM

Dope stuff can we get a thread for this

I read both and got a winner
@Vulgar

Frank · 09-20-2015, 07:14 PM

SQUAWK SQUAWK SQUAWK

08-21-2015, 03:24 PM	#21
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08-31-2015, 05:25 AM	#25
oats Steel Cut Join Date: May 2013 Posts: 5,073 Battle Record: 19-10 Accomplishments - OM HOF (2x) Champed - Fight Night LXXXIV - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 79005425	I got winner. __________________ You should be water

08-31-2015, 08:52 AM	#28
sral Shrewd as evearthed Join Date: Aug 2014 Location: Wolverhampton, England Posts: 8,253 Battle Record: 28-3 Champed - Gimmick Battle League - The Winter Topical - Topical Martyrs - Lime Green Poetry Association - Lyric Olympics - Art of Writing League - Guerrilla Writing League (2x) - Black August II Rep Power: 85899391	Yeah that's cool, think Vulgar said he'll throw it up on some Spotlight Battle ish in the leagues once were done so no need for a separate thread! __________________ - Netcees Rebuttal Tourney - Art of Writing League (x 4) - AOWL Season 11 Champion (Undefeated Season)

08-31-2015, 05:55 PM	#30
Cimmerian Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2013 Posts: 142 Rep Power: 2933495	a [d] diction The death of me: these words work incessantly Like cooks in a kitchen mixing without a recipe Phrases speed on pages, collision on the precipice Crash of a diction, the prescription is the melody Art is a catharsis or a needle to a vinyl vein— Scratching the surface, bleeding as I write away Drowned in the sound, surfing on a tidal wave Sands through my hand, slipping with the light of day Been drunk off the ink, the pen parries the sheets Stabbing wounds in a womb to carry the seed The birth of thought, blooming, I'm buried beneath— The root of all evil, and now its married to me All bark and not a bite from the family tree Let's pretend we're all peachy, syrupy sweet Knocking ourselves out for the feel of the beat Popping pills/taking notes hoping nobody sleeps . . . on me. Last edited by Cimmerian; 08-31-2015 at 09:30 PM.

09-20-2015, 09:00 AM	#32
sral Shrewd as evearthed Join Date: Aug 2014 Location: Wolverhampton, England Posts: 8,253 Battle Record: 28-3 Champed - Gimmick Battle League - The Winter Topical - Topical Martyrs - Lime Green Poetry Association - Lyric Olympics - Art of Writing League - Guerrilla Writing League (2x) - Black August II Rep Power: 85899391	The whole over-the-counter culture we're determined to push and market is reminiscent of how a vulture first circles above a carcass. Once it's certain its supple targets ripe for the taking, It turns and then plummets sharply to try and engage it. Few survive to escape this method of business as the vulture thrives on remains left by their victims. Its predatory instinct has been meticulously honed to descend on the witless before picking at the bones. Initially it holds them in place as its denigrating before crippling it's foe beneath the weight of its expectation. The prey is then decimated, with it's worth spit from the beak, and vulture retaining its reputation for being driven by greed. Stripping the meat from the soulless skeleton that remains in its hold until every bit has been eaten up by the generation below. With patented old ideas regurgitated and fed to the young as originality's re-labelled, re-sold, re-pressed and re-done... __________________ - Netcees Rebuttal Tourney - Art of Writing League (x 4) - AOWL Season 11 Champion (Undefeated Season)

08-30-2015, 10:35 PM	#23
Cimmerian Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2013 Posts: 142 Rep Power: 2933495	I should be able to sit down this week. When do you want the verses to be due? Cimm.

08-31-2015, 04:27 AM	#24
Clutbuck Battle Rap's Married Man Join Date: May 2015 Location: Crumpetville, England Posts: 389 Battle Record: 2-0 Champed - Gorilla Writing league Rep Power: 3513498	I'm not too bothered on when the verse are due. Aren't you getting married next week?! Just post up when you're done and I'll have something posted when you come back off honeymoon. No pressure. It's an honour just to have you back writing tbh.

08-31-2015, 05:42 AM	#26
Clutbuck Battle Rap's Married Man Join Date: May 2015 Location: Crumpetville, England Posts: 389 Battle Record: 2-0 Champed - Gorilla Writing league Rep Power: 3513498	you in the AOWL @oats?

09-01-2015, 12:22 AM	#31
8===D~~~~(}: Banned Join Date: Mar 2015 Posts: 1,335 Battle Record: 0-1000 Champed - Mustache C-C-Combo Breaker - No Man Cleft Behind (x79) - Clefts & Rights II - Grand Cleft Larceny - Cleft 4 Dead V Rep Power: 0	so gay

09-20-2015, 10:15 AM	#33
ill nik-A Super Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 7,407 Battle Record: 70-25 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Battle Arena - BA Picture - Picture Battle Tournament - Netcees Battle League (3x) - Netcees Writers League (2x) - Summer Classic VI - Fall Brawl III - Netcees Battle League Season X - Lyric Olympics Rep Power: 77164516	Dope stuff can we get a thread for this I read both and got a winner @Vulgar __________________ Grumpy old man.

09-20-2015, 07:14 PM	#34
Frank Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2001 Posts: 3,228 Champed - NWL Season 2 - Art of Writing League (5x) - Lime Green Poetry Association - AOWL Season 6 - AOWL Season 10 Rep Power: 3853343	SQUAWK SQUAWK SQUAWK __________________ *VETWORK*