Spoken Vs. Muff - MUFF WINS

Spoken · 12-20-2014, 05:03 AM

10 lines
24hr. Check
24hr. After last person checks in to drop verse.
House rules.

@Muff this my check broseph

El Muffin · 12-20-2014, 05:25 PM

In but I'm not rdy

If its due 24 hrs frm now I'm good

Might key up shutting if u give me incentive 2

Spoken · 12-20-2014, 05:44 PM

Fuck incentives either key now ur use the 24hr leniency it don't matter accept the beating

Spoken · 12-21-2014, 05:57 AM

@Muff

The worse of all kind, muff the type to pine with lies
Put the knife integer many people since he brings life to how they write.
Been texting a long time.. u've set stones for a path,
N noticed everyone tossed this stepping stone to cover the tracks.
He penzoil bitches, fugly hoes just to clear the hoax,
The way muffler dimes in the sheets is gas'd cus he blowin' smoke.
Fruitcake been wailing for acceptance. A legend in text?
We'll soon find out once I put junto's question to test.
5-0... that's a KO w/ no conscience in mind,
Funny u prayer not losin' till sum1 took amen had u crucified.

El Muffin · 12-21-2014, 01:26 PM

on laptop. which means ur fkn dead @Spoken

Quote:

Originally Posted by Spoken

Real talk.

I shud say the same for u to my battles then cus we never kno wat the Fuck u saying till we see this shit -->V/

Then we realize u placing an actual vote... It's like u put stuttering into text format and got a patent for it.

U make GoW sentences look human

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yo

Ur a weak faggot. Endangered from birth
U say my votes need translation...well your verses are wack as fuck in every language on earth
U need guidance fam..and no im not forcin the issue
I tried to Coach Spo'...but u need to get off the bench to EVEN come close to Official
Man your rhymebook should come complete w/ a shredder
1-2 League's like your Childhood
Someone kicked your Jigsaw puzzle n now u tryin to put the pieces together
College football is dope bro. yet u dont cheer coz foods missing
Shit only reason you and your team eligible for a bowl is coz yall stand in line at soup kitchens
BLOODSUCKER. ya life is a waste. i got the louisville slugger lyin in wait
Run? Watch how quick I Turn to A Bat if this fkn Vampire tries to escape

BANG

Plot · 12-21-2014, 03:02 PM

Wow okay pretty aweful here.
Im going with Muff for his Closer.. couldn't really gel with anything else.
..was it into germany people? thats weird.
Muff lay dimes in the sheets? Idk seemed forced beyond or I'm not getting it.
Muffs, soup bowl/gridiron bar was a bar, the jigsaw puzzle thing was a possible concept.
V-Muff for his closer

El Muffin · 12-21-2014, 03:23 PM

smh

open for votes

Spoken · 12-21-2014, 03:35 PM

Thanks for showing @Muff and @Plot thanks for the vote @Sharp Nine we open for business

Spoken · 12-22-2014, 12:10 AM

Bump

Greed · 12-22-2014, 01:50 AM

Those wordplay attempts need serious work spoke. I didn't get the integer one either. Prayer was weird. Muffler was cool but really bad misses overall. Soup bowl was dope overall just better.

V muff

timeless · 12-26-2014, 09:03 PM

muffler was cool missed tho

vs.

last 2 bars

v. muff, spoken work on concepts more mane

Swerve · 12-28-2014, 03:35 AM

Nada

vs.

Ur a weak faggot. Endangered from birth
U say my votes need translation...well your verses are wack as fuck in every language on earth
Man your rhymebook should come complete w/ a shredder
1-2 League's like your Childhood
Someone kicked your Jigsaw puzzle n now u tryin to put the pieces together
BLOODSUCKER. ya life is a waste. i got the louisville slugger lyin in wait
Run? Watch how quick I Turn to A Bat if this fkn Vampire tries to escape

Muff's verse wasn't amazing or anything, but it was more than enough. Spoke, you seem to have the concept of wordplay and metaphors down, but you need to work on that wording/delivery. Right now, there's just too much going on and your lines are difficult to follow and lack a punch. Keep at it.

V/ Muff

12-20-2014, 05:03 AM	#1
Spoken ...DA GAWD... Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,355 Battle Record: 13-34 Rep Power: 5860410	Spoken Vs. Muff - MUFF WINS 10 lines 24hr. Check 24hr. After last person checks in to drop verse. House rules. @Muff this my check broseph __________________ WP Po'ethics

12-20-2014, 05:25 PM	#2
El Muffin DOHpe since 02' Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Surrounded by white ppl Posts: 14,693 Battle Record: 43-24 Champed - Netcees Battle League - 1-2 Punch Onslaught - 1-2 Punch League - Hot or Thot Roast - Hot or Thot 2018 - Fight Night 11 - NPL Roast Rep Power: 34230531	In but I'm not rdy If its due 24 hrs frm now I'm good Might key up shutting if u give me incentive 2 __________________ It’s like weed in Highschool- w/ the cans I’ll smoke you Bitch I floss . I Got the chain out to see like Constantinople

12-20-2014, 05:44 PM	#3
Spoken ...DA GAWD... Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,355 Battle Record: 13-34 Rep Power: 5860410	Fuck incentives either key now ur use the 24hr leniency it don't matter accept the beating __________________ WP Po'ethics

12-21-2014, 05:57 AM	#4
Spoken ...DA GAWD... Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,355 Battle Record: 13-34 Rep Power: 5860410	@Muff The worse of all kind, muff the type to pine with lies Put the knife integer many people since he brings life to how they write. Been texting a long time.. u've set stones for a path, N noticed everyone tossed this stepping stone to cover the tracks. He penzoil bitches, fugly hoes just to clear the hoax, The way muffler dimes in the sheets is gas'd cus he blowin' smoke. Fruitcake been wailing for acceptance. A legend in text? We'll soon find out once I put junto's question to test. 5-0... that's a KO w/ no conscience in mind, Funny u prayer not losin' till sum1 took amen had u crucified. __________________ WP Po'ethics

12-21-2014, 03:23 PM	#7
El Muffin DOHpe since 02' Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Surrounded by white ppl Posts: 14,693 Battle Record: 43-24 Champed - Netcees Battle League - 1-2 Punch Onslaught - 1-2 Punch League - Hot or Thot Roast - Hot or Thot 2018 - Fight Night 11 - NPL Roast Rep Power: 34230531	smh open for votes __________________ It’s like weed in Highschool- w/ the cans I’ll smoke you Bitch I floss . I Got the chain out to see like Constantinople Last edited by El Muffin; 12-21-2014 at 06:10 PM.

12-21-2014, 03:02 PM	#6
Plot Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 1,376 Battle Record: 26-32 Rep Power: 1309741	Wow okay pretty aweful here. Im going with Muff for his Closer.. couldn't really gel with anything else. ..was it into germany people? thats weird. Muff lay dimes in the sheets? Idk seemed forced beyond or I'm not getting it. Muffs, soup bowl/gridiron bar was a bar, the jigsaw puzzle thing was a possible concept. V-Muff for his closer

12-21-2014, 03:35 PM	#8
Spoken ...DA GAWD... Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,355 Battle Record: 13-34 Rep Power: 5860410	Thanks for showing @Muff and @Plot thanks for the vote @Sharp Nine we open for business __________________ WP Po'ethics

12-22-2014, 12:10 AM	#9
Spoken ...DA GAWD... Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,355 Battle Record: 13-34 Rep Power: 5860410	Bump __________________ WP Po'ethics

12-22-2014, 01:50 AM	#10
Greed Raw Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 1,727 Battle Record: 21-40 Rep Power: 29975684	Those wordplay attempts need serious work spoke. I didn't get the integer one either. Prayer was weird. Muffler was cool but really bad misses overall. Soup bowl was dope overall just better. V muff

12-26-2014, 09:03 PM	#11
timeless past tense Join Date: Nov 2013 Location: NJ Posts: 1,627 Battle Record: 22-39 Rep Power: 4341325	muffler was cool missed tho vs. last 2 bars v. muff, spoken work on concepts more mane

12-28-2014, 03:35 AM	#12
Swerve SDub Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 1,877 Battle Record: 40-34 Champed - Alias Tourney III (Heroes vs. Villians) - Fight Night LXIV - Netcees Battle League Rep Power: 64920324	Nada vs. Ur a weak faggot. Endangered from birth U say my votes need translation...well your verses are wack as fuck in every language on earth Man your rhymebook should come complete w/ a shredder 1-2 League's like your Childhood Someone kicked your Jigsaw puzzle n now u tryin to put the pieces together BLOODSUCKER. ya life is a waste. i got the louisville slugger lyin in wait Run? Watch how quick I Turn to A Bat if this fkn Vampire tries to escape Muff's verse wasn't amazing or anything, but it was more than enough. Spoke, you seem to have the concept of wordplay and metaphors down, but you need to work on that wording/delivery. Right now, there's just too much going on and your lines are difficult to follow and lack a punch. Keep at it. V/ Muff __________________ No Cap Gang.