WEEK 8: Fraze 1-1 VS FGR 1-1 FGR WINS

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[fraze]

Sup bruh. 14 cool?

[FGR]

Originally Posted by fraze

Sup bruh. 14 cool?

Yup

[fraze]

Your pockets are skid row svelte. Your mom and dad are relatives.
Not bred for intelligence… and that ‘initial’ mistake is why FGR lacks the dead President’s
Headliner, I Kill Bills and rip shows. You stay giving a bitch dough.
He’s locked inside that pussy whip... for reel, he can’t even wiggle his big toe.
This white boy hits the board with boring lines… not talking creased up khakis.
Your punches are all over the map… they could do the job of Steve Kornacki



I’ll end this hack with cipher attacks before his script’s completed.
I’m stopping the spread. Your verses are viral… the site will get better once that shit’s deleted
Come get your guts removed. Barrel’s sawed off plus the stock is missing...
My trigger finger’s itchin and the pump can face you quicker than a jack-o-lantern competition
I won’t have to draw the stick FGR. While you try to guess the game plan,
I’ll give you enough to rope to _ _ _ _ . _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ . Fill in the blank while I play hangman.
You ugly pig faced fuck. If we chop it up, I’m bringing a field knife.
You don’t resemble a decent writer... you just look like you’re orc in real life.




HANG YOURSELF

[FGR]

@fraze
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I've read battles from u. A light jab n this dude was through
Couldn't handle a fracture. Wtf u think'll happen when I snap ya bones in two?
If I see u irl I'm running those pockets. Gimme the cash or the uzi sprays..
My guns like old radio contest.. cuz it'll be the fraze that pays
Jab, jab, punch bitch.. two hits will drop this queer
You'll get a Left, right, ..square to the face like Scorpion telling you "get over here"
I shoot shots at this dudes top .. plenty of bullets I'm giving
If he ever bust back it's taking a greyhound to the shit hole he's living
There's no way your beating me. my fist destroy all enemies
As far as careers go, watch this lozenges faster than sore throat remedies
I'll 6 feet deep ya crew kid. No one could withstand this beating
The 9 put ya whole squad in boxes like a communal zoom meeting
You ain't the thug criminal you protray. This tatty tale is see thru
No one believes this dude was booked, why the fuck you think no one reads you?

[Coop]

FRAZE


Your pockets are skid row svelte. Your mom and dad are relatives.
Not bred for intelligence… and that ‘initial’ mistake is why FGR lacks the dead President’s
Too statement-ish for my taste
Headliner, I Kill Bills and rip shows. You stay giving a bitch dough.
He’s locked inside that pussy whip... for reel, he can’t even wiggle his big toe.
I was with it until the punchline. Flat way to finish it
This white boy hits the board with boring lines… not talking creased up khakis.
Your punches are all over the map… they could do the job of Steve Kornacki
Good thing you put the gif in there cuz i was like WHO TF. This ok
I’ll end this hack with cipher attacks before his script’s completed.
I’m stopping the spread. Your verses are viral… the site will get better once that shit’s deleted
The concept is better than the execution but this was aight
Come get your guts removed. Barrel’s sawed off plus the stock is missing...
My trigger finger’s itchin and the pump can face you quicker than a jack-o-lantern competition
Wasn't feelin it
I won’t have to draw the stick FGR. While you try to guess the game plan,
I’ll give you enough to rope to _ _ _ _ . _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ . Fill in the blank while I play hangman.
Kudos for trying some creative shit butttt not a fan. Ultimately this didn't hit
You ugly pig faced fuck. If we chop it up, I’m bringing a field knife.
You don’t resemble a decent writer... you just look like you’re orc in real life.
So so


Keep that hangman creativity, just use it differently. Pussy whip shoulda ended differently, might've been your best bar. 5/10



VS


FGR

I've read battles from u. A light jab n this dude was through
Couldn't handle a fracture. Wtf u think'll happen when I snap ya bones in two?
Not a huge fan of "you lost to __ last week" bars
If I see u irl I'm running those pockets. Gimme the cash or the uzi sprays..
My guns like old radio contest.. cuz it'll be the fraze that pays
This is good np. Wish you didnt make it a gun bar
Jab, jab, punch bitch.. two hits will drop this queer
You'll get a Left, right, ..square to the face like Scorpion telling you "get over here"
Basic but creative. Gamers know
I shoot shots at this dudes top .. plenty of bullets I'm giving
If he ever bust back it's taking a greyhound to the shit hole he's living
I like this
There's no way your beating me. my fist destroy all enemies
As far as careers go, watch this lozenges faster than sore throat remedies
Not getting the wp
I'll 6 feet deep ya crew kid. No one could withstand this beating
The 9 put ya whole squad in boxes like a communal zoom meeting
I need more than this
You ain't the thug criminal you protray. This tatty tale is see thru
No one believes this dude was booked, why the fuck you think no one reads you?
Not feeling as a closer

The first half shits on the 2nd half.

6/10




I’ll end this hack with cipher attacks before his script’s completed.
I’m stopping the spread. Your verses are viral… the site will get better once that shit’s deleted

VS


If I see u irl I'm running those pockets. Gimme the cash or the uzi sprays..
My guns like old radio contest.. cuz it'll be the fraze that pays
I shoot shots at this dudes top .. plenty of bullets I'm giving
If he ever bust back it's taking a greyhound to the shit hole he's living


then Scorpion >>>> orc > over the map

VOTE: FGR

[Wanderer]

Fraze

Pussy whip and all over the map had potential.. just don’t like what you did with em. Keep the creativity coming bro and you’ll nail execution with more practise . For now, overall, this was lacklustre

Fgr

Fraze that pays was cool and communal zoom meeting.. I dig it

Overall, this was also not a great verse but I’ve seen you come with heat before and know you can do more . You did just enough to beat your opponent anyway..

Voting FGR

[Scout]

Fraze

This white boy hits the board with boring lines… not talking creased up khakis.
Your punches are all over the map… they could do the job of Steve Kornacki

Opener didn't hit, but had potential
I wish pussy whip worked. My type of creative punch, but grammatically it was too much of a reach
And since when did we start using the word 'pump' as pumpkin? I hope not...
I feel obliged to give you props for that hangman line. You tried something crazy. It didn't work..this time. But those are the kind of out the box ideas that take you to another level, if pulled off right
Orc irl closer was an almost


FGR

If I see u irl I'm running those pockets. Gimme the cash or the uzi sprays..
My guns like old radio contest.. cuz it'll be the fraze that pays
Jab, jab, punch bitch.. two hits will drop this queer
You'll get a Left, right, ..square to the face like Scorpion telling you "get over here"

Dude, you're nice with them ideas. Witty as fuck
But you're also one of those lazy rhymers, hindering your full potential. I almost didn't quote phrase that pays because of it, and the scorpion bar could've been bolded and/or lotw with better execution
Work on that. You'll be a real threat

Voting FGR by a quote

[iSpaz]

I've read battles from u. A light jab n this dude was through
Couldn't handle a fracture. Wtf u think'll happen when I snap ya bones in two?
I'll 6 feet deep ya crew kid. No one could withstand this beating
The 9 put ya whole squad in boxes like a communal zoom meeting

Vs.

Not feeling much

V/FGR. Could have quoted more from fgr but chose the ones that did the most damage imo. Fraze had some cool concepts and setups but feels like the punch fell flat on a lot of them.

[Saint]

Your pockets are skid row svelte. Your mom and dad are relatives.
Not bred for intelligence… and that ‘initial’ mistake is why FGR lacks the dead President’s

initial.. no done before an better

Headliner, I Kill Bills and rip shows. You stay giving a bitch dough.
He’s locked inside that pussy whip... for reel, he can’t even wiggle his big toe.

liked where you were going

This white boy hits the board with boring lines… not talking creased up khakis.
Your punches are all over the map… they could do the job of Steve Kornacki

Lol this was ok but the gif was corny


I’ll end this hack with cipher attacks before his script’s completed.
I’m stopping the spread. Your verses are viral… the site will get better once that shit’s deleted
Come get your guts removed. Barrel’s sawed off plus the stock is missing...
My trigger finger’s itchin and the pump can face you quicker than a jack-o-lantern competition
I won’t have to draw the stick FGR. While you try to guess the game plan,
I’ll give you enough to rope to _ _ _ _ . _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ . Fill in the blank while I play hangman.
You ugly pig faced fuck. If we chop it up, I’m bringing a field knife.
You don’t resemble a decent writer... you just look like you’re orc in real life.

not all that original or clever. closer was like. a playground diss. Expected better considering. Kornaci was decent but if I think about it not all that great tbh as it could apply to anyone who uses political maps, needed more.

FGR won w/ left right & zoom meeting
V FGR