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10-14-2016, 07:26 PM | #1 |
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Battle Arena Tournament - Aero vs ill Nik-A - OPEN FOR VOTES
Verse 1
Most of us men here right? This nigga make bitches want to switch genders after he gives awful head Once he ate her she started becoming one of us like the Walking Dead And he gets no action, pays to see tits cuz sex he doesn't have a chance Working hard, Just for the nipsey hustles like the California rapper's fans I never pay for pussy, especially sex with your chick If she says just leave the tip she's slowly adjusting to take in the rest of the dick Have ya mom stack my bread, you're thinking wouldn't she be bored? She declined your offer to help, ur like well it's the thot that counts, & I couldn't agree more My niggas Beat ya ass and laugh, you thinking these guys insane We ***kle louder to cover your screams, sometimes you have to laugh to hide the pain Verse 2 Ya bitch-made style sucks bad & lacks the fight. who can stomach the crap u write Bars got me KO'ing fools with stools... ur shitty samples came back from the lab positive for parasites u can't even control ya bitch cuz for a drink she a star, homie. It'd break ya heart, whoadie It's dick on delivery as soon as I spotter... While ur weak ass needs one to bench press the bar only I tear it apart surely while u think ya love bug isn't gettin her muff thugged; Netflix & chill fun Fuck what u buy to keep her lookin fly... Im a home wrecker like Aaron Rodgers with the golf club tryin to kill one beans, I spill some. I keep it real like these are blood words; the best ever to crush nerds And since you're not making it to the next round... u can blame it on the goat like the Cub's curse I know the slug hurts. Heard it through the grapevine from some RIP laying sources Besides, u'll open-up but not just cuz we're close... My gun'll splatter ya face like drip painting portraits |
10-14-2016, 07:39 PM | #2 |
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I dunno who is who, but number 2 got it imo...just overall a stronger verse, bars were delivered better and the punches were harder. That's all I have to share.
Vote the second guy.
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10-15-2016, 01:32 AM | #3 |
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verse one walking dead, nipsey and tip lines were good, verse 2 parasites an cubs curse were nice, i think verse one was better verse 2 had some wordy an stretched lines that killed acouple bars from hittting, this was a good battle vote verse one
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10-15-2016, 09:26 AM | #4 |
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verse 2 got this easily
cyrax obv shouldn't be allowed to vote ever nah, but 2 got it tho way more refined and effective verse |
10-15-2016, 12:51 PM | #5 |
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Agreed! Cy shouldn't be allowed to vote. 2-0 verse 2.
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10-15-2016, 01:38 PM | #6 |
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Dont know i had verse one as well second guy felt a bit too stretched if that was even really he problem it was just like u was trying to tell a story and some of the end lines were a bit rambunctious imo anyhow... not much else to say about it really the first guy came with hard bars and strong hits second guy didnt its that basic.... u dont have to count this as a vote if u dont want tho... just my oppi...
Vote: first guy
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10-17-2016, 11:57 PM | #7 |
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I didnt even have to think about this one..
Verse 2 got it for me, the delivery was on point! after reading that shit I forgot what Verse 1 was about nice work here
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10-18-2016, 10:17 AM | #8 |
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Walking dead punch was pretty koo. Verse 2 had that aaron rogers joint, concept was crazyy but the bar was hella stretched. That cubs goat shit was fire tho.
Vote verse 2 |
10-18-2016, 12:18 PM | #9 |
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verse 1, better flow and soft punches
verse 2, better punches and no flow vote - verse 2
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10-18-2016, 03:05 PM | #10 |
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Opener tip n closer
Cubs stools closer Close but second verse took it on creativity IMO. V 2nd verse |
10-19-2016, 08:57 AM | #11 |
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I think verse 2 got it. Overall it was a more effective verse.
I'd say that 1 had a smoother delivery but just didn't hit as hard. The WD opener was dope tho, imo. 2 took it w/ harder punches tho. The Arod line was lotb(really dope concept). In the end 2 was just a bit better... props to both tho. Vote- Verse 2 |
12-06-2016, 06:58 PM | #12 |
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v/verse 1 - bars flowed nicely and attempted a few creative punches. you horny as shit grab a cold shower. could not get into the second verse, the only bar that flowed was the cubs one and by then i was uninterested.
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