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Old 12-10-2017, 07:11 AM   #1
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Old 12-10-2017, 05:26 PM   #2
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gun bar king? plzzz. stop blowin smoke thru ur clit
so Credulous in here.. i aint naive, i just kno u a bitch
u pull triggers to help boredom, u aint really about war tho
besides
4 arms couldnt handle this ledge end. consider urself Goro
u whimper at weapons, the type to use ur crib for protection ..
but my beam'll hit u on the way to ur car, no Christmas projections
maybe u aint hear me tho. u a weary HOE, cleeearly no shotta
n woman, ima leave ur heart on ya box like a Cheerios product
wet fast. neck slashed. u've never repped a set, assclown
closest u came to a chop on the corner was in WWF Smackdown
claim a tough guy life n cant even fuck a rough, wide white ting
if u think this kid gets Kucherov ur rocker & should be struck by lightning
ya moms tho? she's actually quite middle aged n fine
I pushed that pink behind her walls further than the insulation guys
i switch styles every bar, u cant match the steez that ive ushered
truthfully u couldnt have any more up ur sleeve than a Hush shirt
shoutout @Victor for the nbl promo vid loll

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Old 12-15-2017, 10:11 AM   #5
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Keep FORGETTING ur soft n I’ll keep bustin til the blicky broke
50 smoke. These reminders in front of ur face ain’t sticky notes
The man in this shit! For all that nagging u shud get blamed wit the clips
Bi polar?! Dog it’s called TRANSGENDER wen a man acts like a bitch
U’ve avoided the fade since h/s, so don’t act like u’re down to ride
Faggot u been beating around the bush wayyy before u made it ur 9 to 5
Bitch I ain’t taking no L, plus I’ll murder this fake n won’t tell
They’ll find Bar floating above water like the lobbies @ Las Vegas hotels
Somebody shuda told this goofy that he cud get smoked wit toolies
Creep up. Watch em talk thru the clips like he tryna get to kno the movie
Ignite the piff, what I write is sick, u ain’t as nice as this
Bitch u cudnt black in a verse if u had Aero sit down n write the shit
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rofl

how lit was i
Yeah bro tell me about it, me and my nigs be in clubs hittin hella scenes
But u were on NC 3hrs later?! Dog that’s the fastest fuckin “lit” I ever seen!!
Wat the hell is this foo’ sippin? I can’t help if dudes missin’
This chopper BEEN lookin to lift a body like a rescue mission
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gun bar king? plzzz. stop blowin smoke thru ur clit
so Credulous in here.. i aint naive, i just kno u a bitch

god I hope this whole verse isn't a bunch of forced wordplays smh

u pull triggers to help boredom, u aint really about war tho
besides
4 arms couldnt handle this ledge end. consider urself Goro

horrible wordplay and played out goro punch

u whimper at weapons, the type to use ur crib for protection ..
but my beam'll hit u on the way to ur car, no Christmas projections

this is cool

maybe u aint hear me tho. u a weary HOE, cleeearly no shotta
n woman, ima leave ur heart on ya box like a Cheerios product

all these heart flips after hush did that hearts bar smh...this was good tho

wet fast. neck slashed. u've never repped a set, assclown
closest u came to a chop on the corner was in WWF Smackdown

this is good...this verse not too shabby what a relief

claim a tough guy life n cant even fuck a rough, wide white ting
if u think this kid gets Kucherov ur rocker & should be struck by lightning

this is good...I would however like zelph to annunciate the wordplay in the mag this week if possible

ya moms tho? she's actually quite middle aged n fine
I pushed that pink behind her walls further than the insulation guys

nah wack

i switch styles every bar, u cant match the steez that ive ushered
truthfully u couldnt have any more up ur sleeve than a Hush shirt
shoutout

wat no

@Victor for the nbl promo vid loll

cringe at explanation followed by "loll"

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Keep FORGETTING ur soft n I’ll keep bustin til the blicky broke
50 smoke. These reminders in front of ur face ain’t sticky notes

fiiiiiire

The man in this shit! For all that nagging u shud get blamed wit the clips
Bi polar?! Dog it’s called TRANSGENDER wen a man acts like a bitch

LMFAOOOO yikes

U’ve avoided the fade since h/s, so don’t act like u’re down to ride
Faggot u been beating around the bush wayyy before u made it ur 9 to 5

got eem

Bitch I ain’t taking no L, plus I’ll murder this fake n won’t tell
They’ll find Bar floating above water like the lobbies @ Las Vegas hotels

dope

Somebody shuda told this goofy that he cud get smoked wit toolies
Creep up. Watch em talk thru the clips like he tryna get to kno the movie

yep

Ignite the piff, what I write is sick, u ain’t as nice as this
Bitch u cudnt black in a verse if u had Aero sit down n write the shit

lol light

Yeah bro tell me about it, me and my nigs be in clubs hittin hella scenes
But u were on NC 3hrs later?! Dog that’s the fastest fuckin “lit” I ever seen!!

lol straight forward. this landed.

Wat the hell is this foo’ sippin? I can’t help if dudes missin’
This chopper BEEN lookin to lift a body like a rescue mission

played
this was mad close to me actually. bars wording kills his shit for me its just fuckin corny < "whimper at weapons" "u a weary hoe" "clearly no shotta" "rough, wide white ting"

but the time I get thru the set up I literally fucking hate u so it doesn't matter if kungfu grip wrote the fucking punchline at that point cuz im already swayed to dislike the shit.

an cred was way more personal too....like I feel like theres a TON of personal shots to be taken at cred....as long as you don't mind latin king shooters at ur door lol so that was disappointing that bars verse was so generic.

bar will get votes in this battle but not from me, I had cred with cleaner wording and harder hitting punches with a personal edge. bar was more creative//////hes always very creative.....but wasn't enough for me here

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Cred took this. Barcotic had a good line with the pink behind the walls stuff but not enough to take out sticky notes, 9 to 5 and Vegas Hotels.
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Old 12-15-2017, 04:02 PM   #8
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Keep FORGETTING ur soft n I’ll keep bustin til the blicky broke
50 smoke. These reminders in front of ur face ain’t sticky notes
not bad, ok opener

The man in this shit! For all that nagging u shud get blamed wit the clips
Bi polar?! Dog it’s called TRANSGENDER wen a man acts like a bitch
wording helped this land...straight forward.

U’ve avoided the fade since h/s, so don’t act like u’re down to ride
Faggot u been beating around the bush wayyy before u made it ur 9 to 5

straight personal

Bitch I ain’t taking no L, plus I’ll murder this fake n won’t tell
They’ll find Bar floating above water like the lobbies @ Las Vegas hotels

bar/n club lines played, flipped fresh w above water

Somebody shuda told this goofy that he cud get smoked wit toolies
Creep up. Watch em talk thru the clips like he tryna get to kno the movie

light but its fresh to me as à concept..

Ignite the piff, what I write is sick, u ain’t as nice as this
Bitch u cudnt black in a verse if u had Aero sit down n write the shit

super light

Yeah bro tell me about it, me and my nigs be in clubs hittin hella scenes
But u were on NC 3hrs later?! Dog that’s the fastest fuckin “lit” I ever seen!!

straight personal

Wat the hell is this foo’ sippin? I can’t help if dudes missin’
This chopper BEEN lookin to lift a body like a rescue mission

Nah....hush did a similar line.
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gun bar king? plzzz. stop blowin smoke thru ur clit
so Credulous in here.. i aint naive, i just kno u a bitch

I prononce it u-luss....cool idea tho

u pull triggers to help boredom, u aint really about war tho
besides
4 arms couldnt handle this ledge end. consider urself Goro

didnt like this....legend end i get but just dont f w the wp.

u whimper at weapons, the type to use ur crib for protection ..
but my beam'll hit u on the way to ur car, no Christmas projections

cool, nothing crazy.

maybe u aint hear me tho. u a weary HOE, cleeearly no shotta
n woman, ima leave ur heart on ya box like a Cheerios product

setup iffy....and most them cereals have those hearts as à health ad, & heart lines alot....This aiight tho.

wet fast. neck slashed. u've never repped a set, assclown
closest u came to a chop on the corner was in WWF Smackdown

Cool. Cant say ive seen it.

claim a tough guy life n cant even fuck a rough, wide white ting
if u think this kid gets Kucherov ur rocker & should be struck by lightning

Setup eh, nice wp

ya moms tho? she's actually quite middle aged n fine
I pushed that pink behind her walls further than the insulation guys

not feeling

i switch styles every bar, u cant match the steez that ive ushered
truthfully u couldnt have any more up ur sleeve than a Hush shirt
shoutout @Victor for the nbl promo vid loll

dece vid référence.
Good battle...going to edit in a winner. Cred had the better executed & straight hits w personals vs barc who had the more creative wps and concepts

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Old 12-15-2017, 04:45 PM   #9
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gun bar king? plzzz. stop blowin smoke thru ur clit
so Credulous in here.. i aint naive, i just kno u a bitch
Reach, ending syllable is pronounced as LUS not LOSS.
u pull triggers to help boredom, u aint really about war tho
besides
4 arms couldnt handle this ledge end. consider urself Goro
Ledge end/Legend, nahhhh - bad IMO.
u whimper at weapons, the type to use ur crib for protection ..
but my beam'll hit u on the way to ur car, no Christmas projections
Meh... Not feeling this much at all... Ok so the beam will hit him... Just has no impact to me at all.
maybe u aint hear me tho. u a weary HOE, cleeearly no shotta
n woman, ima leave ur heart on ya box like a Cheerios product
This was ok but light.
wet fast. neck slashed. u've never repped a set, assclown
closest u came to a chop on the corner was in WWF Smackdown
You always have to have at least one wrestling concept in your verse, huh? lol... This was basic but OK.
claim a tough guy life n cant even fuck a rough, wide white ting
if u think this kid gets Kucherov ur rocker & should be struck by lightning
Not feeling this.
ya moms tho? she's actually quite middle aged n fine
I pushed that pink behind her walls further than the insulation guys
This doesn't make any sense to me.
i switch styles every bar, u cant match the steez that ive ushered
truthfully u couldnt have any more up ur sleeve than a Hush shirt
Wack.
shoutout @Victor for the nbl promo vid loll

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Keep FORGETTING ur soft n I’ll keep bustin til the blicky broke
50 smoke. These reminders in front of ur face ain’t sticky notes
Ok
The man in this shit! For all that nagging u shud get blamed wit the clips
Bi polar?! Dog it’s called TRANSGENDER wen a man acts like a bitch
This was basic but effective. Nice personal shot at his user title which he's changed - probably after reading your verse.
U’ve avoided the fade since h/s, so don’t act like u’re down to ride
Faggot u been beating around the bush wayyy before u made it ur 9 to 5
Landscaping concepts against him been done. This one is close to one of the dopest ones, tho. Spit had a dope one with him bullyin and shuving snow around, lol.
Bitch I ain’t taking no L, plus I’ll murder this fake n won’t tell
They’ll find Bar floating above water like the lobbies @ Las Vegas hotels
Didn't like this.
Somebody shuda told this goofy that he cud get smoked wit toolies
Creep up. Watch em talk thru the clips like he tryna get to kno the movie
Nah... Wack.
Ignite the piff, what I write is sick, u ain’t as nice as this
Bitch u cudnt black in a verse if u had Aero sit down n write the shit
Nah.
Yeah bro tell me about it, me and my nigs be in clubs hittin hella scenes
But u were on NC 3hrs later?! Dog that’s the fastest fuckin “lit” I ever seen!!
Statement... Nothing much here...
Wat the hell is this foo’ sippin? I can’t help if dudes missin’
This chopper BEEN lookin to lift a body like a rescue mission
Seen this concept way to many times.
Damn, I didn't think Cred stood a chance here coming in to the battle TBR.
Overall I think CRED took this. Barc is Barcs own worst enemy here. I get being creative but you over do it with word play constantly reaching trying to make shit work. It killed you here. Cred started out nice but fell off. He also kept it simple and didn't attempt to be overly creative or complicated with a more direct approach and it was effective.

v/Cred
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gun bar king? plzzz. stop blowin smoke thru ur clit
so Credulous in here.. i aint naive, i just kno u a bitch
Perfect usage far as the definition of the word, yet TERRIBLE usage far as phonically & word association
u pull triggers to help boredom, u aint really about war tho
besides 4 arms couldnt handle this ledge end. consider urself Goro
Very boring, you're better than this
u whimper at weapons, the type to use ur crib for protection ..
but my beam'll hit u on the way to ur car, no Christmas projections
this is OK
maybe u aint hear me tho. u a weary HOE, cleeearly no shotta
n woman, ima leave ur heart on ya box like a Cheerios product
Lol I liked this
wet fast. neck slashed. u've never repped a set, assclown
closest u came to a chop on the corner was in WWF Smackdown
Smh..
claim a tough guy life n cant even fuck a rough, wide white ting
if u think this kid gets Kucherov ur rocker & should be struck by lightning
Decent
ya moms tho? she's actually quite middle aged n fine
I pushed that pink behind her walls further than the insulation guys
Could've been funnier & more impactful w/ better wording
i switch styles every bar, u cant match the steez that ive ushered
truthfully u couldnt have any more up ur sleeve than a Hush shirt
LMAO great closer
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Keep FORGETTING ur soft n I’ll keep bustin til the blicky broke
50 smoke. These reminders in front of ur face ain’t sticky notes
Decent
The man in this shit! For all that nagging u shud get blamed wit the clips
Bi polar?! Dog it’s called TRANSGENDER wen a man acts like a bitch
Lol nasty
U’ve avoided the fade since h/s, so don’t act like u’re down to ride
Faggot u been beating around the bush wayyy before u made it ur 9 to 5
Clever personal
Bitch I ain’t taking no L, plus I’ll murder this fake n won’t tell
They’ll find Bar floating above water like the lobbies @ Las Vegas hotels
Decent, wording could be better
Somebody shuda told this goofy that he cud get smoked wit toolies
Creep up. Watch em talk thru the clips like he tryna get to kno the movie
Again merely OK, would have been harder w/ different wording
Ignite the piff, what I write is sick, u ain’t as nice as this
Bitch u cudnt black in a verse if u had Aero sit down n write the shit
Nah, this was bland
Yeah bro tell me about it, me and my nigs be in clubs hittin hella scenes
But u were on NC 3hrs later?! Dog that’s the fastest fuckin “lit” I ever seen!!
Lol nice
Wat the hell is this foo’ sippin? I can’t help if dudes missin’
This chopper BEEN lookin to lift a body like a rescue mission
Weak closer
VOTE CRED he was cleaner & slightly more effective w/ his material, Idk maybe Barc just underestimated his opponent.
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gun bar king? plzzz. stop blowin smoke thru ur clit
so Credulous in here.. i aint naive, i just kno u a bitch

fire

u pull triggers to help boredom, u aint really about war tho
besides
4 arms couldnt handle this ledge end. consider urself Goro

nah

u whimper at weapons, the type to use ur crib for protection ..
but my beam'll hit u on the way to ur car, no Christmas projections

cool

maybe u aint hear me tho. u a weary HOE, cleeearly no shotta
n woman, ima leave ur heart on ya box like a Cheerios product

okay

wet fast. neck slashed. u've never repped a set, assclown
closest u came to a chop on the corner was in WWF Smackdown

nah

claim a tough guy life n cant even fuck a rough, wide white ting
if u think this kid gets Kucherov ur rocker & should be struck by lightning

dope

ya moms tho? she's actually quite middle aged n fine
I pushed that pink behind her walls further than the insulation guys

nice

i switch styles every bar, u cant match the steez that ive ushered
truthfully u couldnt have any more up ur sleeve than a Hush shirt

cool

shoutout @Victor for the nbl promo vid loll

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Keep FORGETTING ur soft n I’ll keep bustin til the blicky broke
50 smoke. These reminders in front of ur face ain’t sticky notes

dope

The man in this shit! For all that nagging u shud get blamed wit the clips
Bi polar?! Dog it’s called TRANSGENDER wen a man acts like a bitch

nice

U’ve avoided the fade since h/s, so don’t act like u’re down to ride
Faggot u been beating around the bush wayyy before u made it ur 9 to 5

nah

Bitch I ain’t taking no L, plus I’ll murder this fake n won’t tell
They’ll find Bar floating above water like the lobbies @ Las Vegas hotels

nah

Somebody shuda told this goofy that he cud get smoked wit toolies
Creep up. Watch em talk thru the clips like he tryna get to kno the movie

nah

Ignite the piff, what I write is sick, u ain’t as nice as this
Bitch u cudnt black in a verse if u had Aero sit down n write the shit

nah

Yeah bro tell me about it, me and my nigs be in clubs hittin hella scenes
But u were on NC 3hrs later?! Dog that’s the fastest fuckin “lit” I ever seen!!

nah

Wat the hell is this foo’ sippin? I can’t help if dudes missin’
This chopper BEEN lookin to lift a body like a rescue mission

nah
cred was okay

started off hard

went lame 3 bars in

barc was more consistent

had a solid verse

clear win

v-barc
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gun bar king? plzzz. stop blowin smoke thru ur clit
so Credulous in here.. i aint naive, i just kno u a bitch

Dope

u pull triggers to help boredom, u aint really about war tho
besides
4 arms couldnt handle this ledge end. consider urself Goro

Nah

u whimper at weapons, the type to use ur crib for protection ..
but my beam'll hit u on the way to ur car, no Christmas projections

Ok

maybe u aint hear me tho. u a weary HOE, cleeearly no shotta
n woman, ima leave ur heart on ya box like a Cheerios product

Ok

wet fast. neck slashed. u've never repped a set, assclown
closest u came to a chop on the corner was in WWF Smackdown

Ok

claim a tough guy life n cant even fuck a rough, wide white ting
if u think this kid gets Kucherov ur rocker & should be struck by lightning

Dope

ya moms tho? she's actually quite middle aged n fine
I pushed that pink behind her walls further than the insulation guys

Nice, lol

i switch styles every bar, u cant match the steez that ive ushered
truthfully u couldnt have any more up ur sleeve than a Hush shirt

Cool



Keep FORGETTING ur soft n I’ll keep bustin til the blicky broke
50 smoke. These reminders in front of ur face ain’t sticky notes

Dope

The man in this shit! For all that nagging u shud get blamed wit the clips
Bi polar?! Dog it’s called TRANSGENDER wen a man acts like a bitch

Dope

U’ve avoided the fade since h/s, so don’t act like u’re down to ride
Faggot u been beating around the bush wayyy before u made it ur 9 to 5

Nah

Bitch I ain’t taking no L, plus I’ll murder this fake n won’t tell
They’ll find Bar floating above water like the lobbies @ Las Vegas hotels

Cool

Somebody shuda told this goofy that he cud get smoked wit toolies
Creep up. Watch em talk thru the clips like he tryna get to kno the movie

Ok

Ignite the piff, what I write is sick, u ain’t as nice as this
Bitch u cudnt black in a verse if u had Aero sit down n write the shit

Ok

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rofl

how lit was i
Yeah bro tell me about it, me and my nigs be in clubs hittin hella scenes
But u were on NC 3hrs later?! Dog that’s the fastest fuckin “lit” I ever seen!!

Lmao! Nice

Wat the hell is this foo’ sippin? I can’t help if dudes missin’
This chopper BEEN lookin to lift a body like a rescue mission

Nah



Good battle. Both had some hard shit n some okish stuff but this boils down to misses n I got cred with two n bar with one so bar edges this.. vote bar
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so Credulous in here.. i aint naive, i just kno u a bitch

Okay

u pull triggers to help boredom, u aint really about war tho
besides
4 arms couldnt handle this ledge end. consider urself Goro

Okay

u whimper at weapons, the type to use ur crib for protection ..
but my beam'll hit u on the way to ur car, no Christmas projections

Stretch

maybe u aint hear me tho. u a weary HOE, cleeearly no shotta
n woman, ima leave ur heart on ya box like a Cheerios product

Okay

wet fast. neck slashed. u've never repped a set, assclown
closest u came to a chop on the corner was in WWF Smackdown

Lol okay

claim a tough guy life n cant even fuck a rough, wide white ting
if u think this kid gets Kucherov ur rocker & should be struck by lightning

Loool

ya moms tho? she's actually quite middle aged n fine
I pushed that pink behind her walls further than the insulation guys

Damage

i switch styles every bar, u cant match the steez that ive ushered
truthfully u couldnt have any more up ur sleeve than a Hush shirt

Okay

shoutout @Victor for the nbl promo vid loll

16.

Keep FORGETTING ur soft n I’ll keep bustin til the blicky broke
50 smoke. These reminders in front of ur face ain’t sticky notes

Cool open

The man in this shit! For all that nagging u shud get blamed wit the clips
Bi polar?! Dog it’s called TRANSGENDER wen a man acts like a bitch

Ha

U’ve avoided the fade since h/s, so don’t act like u’re down to ride
Faggot u been beating around the bush wayyy before u made it ur 9 to 5

Solid

Bitch I ain’t taking no L, plus I’ll murder this fake n won’t tell
They’ll find Bar floating above water like the lobbies @ Las Vegas hotels

Okay

Somebody shuda told this goofy that he cud get smoked wit toolies
Creep up. Watch em talk thru the clips like he tryna get to kno the moviefat wife

Okay

Ignite the piff, what I write is sick, u ain’t as nice as thisfat wife
Bitch u cudnt black in a verse if u had Aero sit down n write the shit

Eh

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rofl

how lit was i

Yeah bro tell me about it, me and my nigs be in clubs hittin hella scenes
But u were on NC 3hrs later?! Dog that’s the fastest fuckin “lit” I ever seen!!

Lol

Wat the hell is this foo’ sippin? I can’t help if dudes missin’
This chopper BEEN lookin to lift a body like a rescue mission

Played but not bad



Cool battle. Tough call let me come back to this

Yeah I say cred i was iffy on one bar but overall edges it

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Bar, Christmas projection and insulation were dope

Cred, opener was good but that transgender shit was lotb and gave u the edge imo


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gun bar king? plzzz. stop blowin smoke thru ur clit
so Credulous in here.. i aint naive, i just kno u a bitch
cred I listen here, yes I get it, the bar isn’t bad but the spa just so fuckin weird man
u pull triggers to help boredom, u aint really about war tho
besides
4 arms couldnt handle this ledge end. consider urself Goro
would have been better if you didn’t trade legend for ledge end, ledge end took away from the impact for sure
u whimper at weapons, the type to use ur crib for protection ..
but my beam'll hit u on the way to ur car, no Christmas projections
this is nice. Lol @ whimper incgeneral tho
maybe u aint hear me tho. u a weary HOE, cleeearly no shotta
n woman, ima leave ur heart on ya box like a Cheerios product
damn I guess we did OD on heart punches this week. Decent
wet fast. neck slashed. u've never repped a set, assclown
closest u came to a chop on the corner was in WWF Smackdown
lol’d ok I dug it
claim a tough guy life n cant even fuck a rough, wide white ting
if u think this kid gets Kucherov ur rocker & should be struck by lightning
nice this was good Man, a good example of how wp should be done
ya moms tho? she's actually quite middle aged n fine
I pushed that pink behind her walls further than the insulation guys
dope
i switch styles every bar, u cant match the steez that ive ushered
truthfully u couldnt have any more up ur sleeve than a Hush shirt
shoutout @Victor for the nbl promo vid loll
nah man


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Keep FORGETTING ur soft n I’ll keep bustin til the blicky broke
50 smoke. These reminders in front of ur face ain’t sticky notes
ha this is nice
The man in this shit! For all that nagging u shud get blamed wit the clips
Bi polar?! Dog it’s called TRANSGENDER wen a man acts like a bitch
solid, good personal
U’ve avoided the fade since h/s, so don’t act like u’re down to ride
Faggot u been beating around the bush wayyy before u made it ur 9 to 5
damn, alright
Bitch I ain’t taking no L, plus I’ll murder this fake n won’t tell
They’ll find Bar floating above water like the lobbies @ Las Vegas hotels
decent
Somebody shuda told this goofy that he cud get smoked wit toolies
Creep up. Watch em talk thru the clips like he tryna get to kno the movie
lol I liked it
Ignite the piff, what I write is sick, u ain’t as nice as this
Bitch u cudnt black in a verse if u had Aero sit down n write the shit
nah this is a miss
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rofl

how lit was i
Yeah bro tell me about it, me and my nigs be in clubs hittin hella scenes
But u were on NC 3hrs later?! Dog that’s the fastest fuckin “lit” I ever seen!!
good
Wat the hell is this foo’ sippin? I can’t help if dudes missin’
This chopper BEEN lookin to lift a body like a rescue mission
too similar to Vic’s Punch this week, and I think his was a closer too. Decent punch overall due to that

Barcotic had a good verse, eased up on the crazy wp a bit since last week and I really do appreciate that. I got him having 3 hitters. Cred was very consistent here, only had 1 clear miss in my book. Got cred wirh 4 hitters but with a few decent lines as well. Cred gets it.

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I got Cred here pretty handily
He had some burners in there, opener, transgender was lols, Vegas hotels, talk through clips was good also

Barc had goro, which lends credence to ledge end vs legend, it didn’t take away from the bar to me, Christmas projections was solid, and insulation

Actually I guess I don’t have Cred handily winning, but I do have him winning with one more quotable

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gun bar king? plzzz. stop blowin smoke thru ur clit
so Credulous in here.. i aint naive, i just kno u a bitch
... hell fucking no
u pull triggers to help boredom, u aint really about war tho
besides
4 arms couldnt handle this ledge end. consider urself Goro
...lol no
u whimper at weapons, the type to use ur crib for protection ..
but my beam'll hit u on the way to ur car, no Christmas projections
...ok
maybe u aint hear me tho. u a weary HOE, cleeearly no shotta
n woman, ima leave ur heart on ya box like a Cheerios product
...ok
wet fast. neck slashed. u've never repped a set, assclown
closest u came to a chop on the corner was in WWF Smackdown
...what’s for does this mean
claim a tough guy life n cant even fuck a rough, wide white ting
if u think this kid gets Kucherov ur rocker & should be struck by lightning
....lolll wtf is this shit
ya moms tho? she's actually quite middle aged n fine
I pushed that pink behind her walls further than the insulation guys
..ok
i switch styles every bar, u cant match the steez that ive ushered
truthfully u couldnt have any more up ur sleeve than a Hush shirt
...no and fuck you
shoutout @Victor for the nbl promo vid loll

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Keep FORGETTING ur soft n I’ll keep bustin til the blicky broke
50 smoke. These reminders in front of ur face ain’t sticky notes
...nah
The man in this shit! For all that nagging u shud get blamed wit the clips
Bi polar?! Dog it’s called TRANSGENDER wen a man acts like a bitch
...lol
U’ve avoided the fade since h/s, so don’t act like u’re down to ride
Faggot u been beating around the bush wayyy before u made it ur 9 to 5
...don’t get it
Bitch I ain’t taking no L, plus I’ll murder this fake n won’t tell
They’ll find Bar floating above water like the lobbies @ Las Vegas hotels
...ok
Somebody shuda told this goofy that he cud get smoked wit toolies
Creep up. Watch em talk thru the clips like he tryna get to kno the movie
...nah
Ignite the piff, what I write is sick, u ain’t as nice as this
Bitch u cudnt black in a verse if u had Aero sit down n write the shit
...lol but no
Yeah bro tell me about it, me and my nigs be in clubs hittin hella scenes
But u were on NC 3hrs later?! Dog that’s the fastest fuckin “lit” I ever seen!!
...nah
Wat the hell is this foo’ sippin? I can’t help if dudes missin’
This chopper BEEN lookin to lift a body like a rescue mission
...nice


Cred got it
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Bar had: cheerios box, chop in the corner, kucherov, insulation guys

Cred had: sticky notes, transgender, 9 to 5, floating

I thought this was close but I thought creds got a little harder. Good battle though.

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