Aero vs Choice Wordz - AERO WINS

Orc · 12-10-2017, 07:16 AM

Netcees Battle League: The Legends Edition

Rules

Due Dates:

Verses are due Thursday and will be open until Sunday.
Battles that lack votes may close later.
One sided battles may get closed early.
Extensions are 24 hours

Line Limit:

Minimum of 8, maximum of 16.
If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first.

Check ins are encouraged but not mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ

FAILURE TO VOTE ON 3 BATTLES IS A DQ. NO MATTER WHO YOU ARE!!! YOU WILL BE DISQUALIFIED. VOTE ON 3 BATTLES OR YOU LOSE. SIMPLE!

@Aero @Choice Wordz

Aero · 12-10-2017, 09:14 AM

10

Choice Wordz · 12-11-2017, 01:09 PM

Fine with that. It’s on

The mandatory 3 votes, is that for week 2 battles? @Orc

Orc · 12-12-2017, 11:04 AM

Yes

Choice Wordz · 12-14-2017, 05:49 PM

Money, I ain’t shy a buck, the barrels maim your narrow frame
Choice spice it up, I’m fly as what n’ Aero plain
Your house of cards vs. A380... Wordz plenty crazy
You tryna Pres for some gay ish... like Kevin Spacey
On top of your mindstate, crisp as Frito Lay
I’ll stay rocking your dome like Beats by Dre
This dude way soft, round stitched up like baseballs
Hit with napalm n’ leave your face off in this face-off
I’m outta this universe, you outta this planet, vanished
Now, keep Wordz out your mouth like sign language
@Aero

Aero · 12-14-2017, 10:32 PM

Give me a break, this is a waste, makes it tough to rhyme
I feel like Orc said I've got Choice Wordz for you & those were "fuck your time"
I trust my nine, chain's untucked I'm fine, hell I don't mind threats
He did try pulling up on me while I was flexing - lifting himself on my biceps
Your girl gave me & my guys a set of keys, there's no ignoring me
Anarchies working in your crib nigga we're taking away all your authority
4 in his chest, at the funeral strapped while they're mourning his death
I'll put so many holes in his box you'd think they were transporting a pet
A known blunder, for pay catch you in traffic, I keep the chrome brother
You crying while I'm shooting you in the car for money like Keaton Jones mother

For Battling · 12-14-2017, 11:32 PM

Money, I ain’t shy a buck, the barrels maim your narrow frame
Choice spice it up, I’m fly as what n’ Aero plain
lol cute
Your house of cards vs. A380... Wordz plenty crazy
You tryna Pres for some gay ish... like Kevin Spacey
but nah
On top of your mindstate, crisp as Frito Lay
I’ll stay rocking your dome like Beats by Dre
right idea but wasn’t good
This dude way soft, round stitched up like baseballs
Hit with napalm n’ leave your face off in this face-off
snother One where you had the right idea but wasn’t good
I’m outta this universe, you outta this planet, vanished
Now, keep Wordz out your mouth like sign language
this was cool, props

Choice: Sup bro, this wasn’t bad at all for somebody who seemingly just began text. Tbh I think you have a lot of potential and I’d like to see you post a lot more & remain active in here. As far as verse quality overall, definitely could have gotten more creative and thrown harsher punches but you had the right idea. You’ll improve for next time I’m sure.

Vs

Give me a break, this is a waste, makes it tough to rhyme
I feel like Orc said I've got Choice Wordz for you & those were "fuck your time"
made me lol
I trust my nine, chain's untucked I'm fine, hell I don't mind threats
He did try pulling up on me while I was flexing - lifting himself on my biceps
lol’s all over the place aero!
Your girl gave me & my guys a set of keys, there's no ignoring me
Anarchies working in your crib nigga we're taking away all your authority
alright
4 in his chest, at the funeral strapped while they're mourning his death
I'll put so many holes in his box you'd think they were transporting a pet
this was dope
A known blunder, for pay catch you in traffic, I keep the chrome brother
You crying while I'm shooting you in the car for money like Keaton Jones mother
lmao I knew you would

Aero I love your set ups, probably have the best set up swagger in the game right now. Good verse

Vote: Aero

Saint · 12-14-2017, 11:43 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Choice Wordz

Money, I ain’t shy a buck, the barrels maim your narrow frame
Choice spice it up, I’m fly as what n’ Aero plain
eh basic.

Your house of cards vs. A380... Wordz plenty crazy
You tryna Pres for some gay ish... like Kevin Spacey
again, simple but eh its a start.

On top of your mindstate, crisp as Frito Lay
I’ll stay rocking your dome like Beats by Dre
nah
This dude way soft, round stitched up like baseballs
Hit with napalm n’ leave your face off in this face-off
nah. Been done.
I’m outta this universe, you outta this planet, vanished
Now, keep Wordz out your mouth like sign language
more braggin than diss.
Flow & swag were coo
@Aero

Give me a break, this is a waste, makes it tough to rhyme
I feel like Orc said I've got Choice Wordz for you & those were "fuck your time"
good flip on thé name, pretty dialed in.
I trust my nine, chain's untucked I'm fine, hell I don't mind threats
He did try pulling up on me while I was flexing - lifting himself on my biceps
gay but ok
Your girl gave me & my guys a set of keys, there's no ignoring me
Anarchies working in your crib nigga we're taking away all your authority
more associative than connecting an are keys, atoll mot bad
4 in his chest, at the funeral strapped while they're mourning his death
I'll put so many holes in his box you'd think they were transporting a pet
cool, scratch this off my concept list
A known blunder, for pay catch you in traffic, I keep the chrome brother
You crying while I'm shooting you in the car for money like Keaton Jones mother
ok

Aero easily imo. Every line was put together better.

vote aero.

Inno · 12-14-2017, 11:46 PM

I got Choices opener vs Aeros

Opener
Anarchies line
Transporting pets

Vote aero

Saitama · 12-15-2017, 12:02 AM

Will vote

Profit · 12-15-2017, 03:46 AM

Money, I ain’t shy a buck, the barrels maim your narrow frame
Choice spice it up, I’m fly as what n’ Aero plain

Ok

Your house of cards vs. A380... Wordz plenty crazy
You tryna Pres for some gay ish... like Kevin Spacey

Light

On top of your mindstate, crisp as Frito Lay
I’ll stay rocking your dome like Beats by Dre

Nah

This dude way soft, round stitched up like baseballs
Hit with napalm n’ leave your face off in this face-off

Nah,
I’m outta this universe, you outta this planet, vanished
Now, keep Wordz out your mouth like sign language

Not much of a diss

Give me a break, this is a waste, makes it tough to rhyme
I feel like Orc said I've got Choice Wordz for you & those were "fuck your time"

Dope

I trust my nine, chain's untucked I'm fine, hell I don't mind threats
He did try pulling up on me while I was flexing - lifting himself on my biceps

Lol

Your girl gave me & my guys a set of keys, there's no ignoring me
Anarchies working in your crib nigga we're taking away all your authority

Cool

4 in his chest, at the funeral strapped while they're mourning his death
I'll put so many holes in his box you'd think they were transporting a pet

Dope

A known blunder, for pay catch you in traffic, I keep the chrome brother
You crying while I'm shooting you in the car for money like Keaton Jones mother

Nice

I got aero here with a solid verse.. seemed choice was a little incomplete plus lacked insults.. vote aero

ill nik-A · 12-15-2017, 06:17 AM

Choice wordz.... flowed well with the shortness but the concepts need better development

Aero, opener and pets were dope.. anarchy was really bad lmao

E Tha Real · 12-15-2017, 11:16 AM

This was lopsided Choice needs to work on developing a direct punch with a set-up. He’s all over the place. Aero took this easily the biceps & pet line were heavy hitters; nice showing!

V-aero

Cred · 12-15-2017, 12:37 PM

Keep wordz out ur mouth like sign language was cool. You’ve got the right idea fam, jus need to formulate those lines into harsher hitting ones. Fucking wit the style tho bro.

Vs

The only line I didn’t like was the anarchy one but even that was decent. Aero u seem to look in top form, I see u fam. Holes in the box and that closer we’re bonkers to keep it skreet.

Vote - Aero

Captain Neckbeard · 12-15-2017, 01:46 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Choice Wordz

Money, I ain’t shy a buck, the barrels maim your narrow frame
Choice spice it up, I’m fly as what n’ Aero plain

little style on this but played as fuck .

Your house of cards vs. A380... Wordz plenty crazy
You tryna Pres for some gay ish... like Kevin Spacey

light

On top of your mindstate, crisp as Frito Lay
I’ll stay rocking your dome like Beats by Dre

played

This dude way soft, round stitched up like baseballs
Hit with napalm n’ leave your face off in this face-off

played since the movie from the 90s....the 90s dude

I’m outta this universe, you outta this planet, vanished
Now, keep Wordz out your mouth like sign language

how u gonna drop a played name play on ur own name smh

@Aero

Quote:

Originally Posted by Aero

Give me a break, this is a waste, makes it tough to rhyme
I feel like Orc said I've got Choice Wordz for you & those were "fuck your time"

lmfao gone

I trust my nine, chain's untucked I'm fine, hell I don't mind threats
He did try pulling up on me while I was flexing - lifting himself on my biceps

lmao why u write these gay lines tho this shit SUSS

Your girl gave me & my guys a set of keys, there's no ignoring me
Anarchies working in your crib nigga we're taking away all your authority

fire...and mad funny lol

4 in his chest, at the funeral strapped while they're mourning his death
I'll put so many holes in his box you'd think they were transporting a pet

saw this coming midway thru....its ok I guess

A known blunder, for pay catch you in traffic, I keep the chrome brother
You crying while I'm shooting you in the car for money like Keaton Jones mother

lol of course ud write one of these

had aero in a clean body tbc wordz shit was all played shit minus the current event flip w kev spacey which I thought was only mediocre...aero was light years ahead from a wording and creativity perspective, overall just entirely more enjoyable to read.

v aero

Amen · 12-15-2017, 05:03 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Choice Wordz

Money, I ain’t shy a buck, the barrels maim your narrow frame
Choice spice it up, I’m fly as what n’ Aero plain
Nah.
Your house of cards vs. A380... Wordz plenty crazy
You tryna Pres for some gay ish... like Kevin Spacey
Eh, light.
On top of your mindstate, crisp as Frito Lay
I’ll stay rocking your dome like Beats by Dre
Nah...
This dude way soft, round stitched up like baseballs
Hit with napalm n’ leave your face off in this face-off
Nah.
I’m outta this universe, you outta this planet, vanished
Now, keep Wordz out your mouth like sign language
Dated concept.
@Aero

Quote:

Originally Posted by Aero

Give me a break, this is a waste, makes it tough to rhyme
I feel like Orc said I've got Choice Wordz for you & those were "fuck your time"
Lol, ok.
I trust my nine, chain's untucked I'm fine, hell I don't mind threats
He did try pulling up on me while I was flexing - lifting himself on my biceps
Gay.
Your girl gave me & my guys a set of keys, there's no ignoring me
Anarchies working in your crib nigga we're taking away all your authority
Light.
4 in his chest, at the funeral strapped while they're mourning his death
I'll put so many holes in his box you'd think they were transporting a pet
Bang.
A known blunder, for pay catch you in traffic, I keep the chrome brother
You crying while I'm shooting you in the car for money like Keaton Jones mother
Chigga... Come on bro.

AERO took this. Wordz needs to work on developing his concepts in to more effective/harsher punches.

v/Aero

Schadenfreude · 12-15-2017, 05:57 PM

VOTE AERO Choice needs a lot of elevating & developing. Aero had his usual humor & cleverness, ran away w/ this win fairly easy.

Cool · 12-15-2017, 08:11 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Choice Wordz

Money, I ain’t shy a buck, the barrels maim your narrow frame
Choice spice it up, I’m fly as what n’ Aero plain

nah

Your house of cards vs. A380... Wordz plenty crazy
You tryna Pres for some gay ish... like Kevin Spacey

nah

On top of your mindstate, crisp as Frito Lay
I’ll stay rocking your dome like Beats by Dre

nah

This dude way soft, round stitched up like baseballs
Hit with napalm n’ leave your face off in this face-off

nah

I’m outta this universe, you outta this planet, vanished
Now, keep Wordz out your mouth like sign language

nah
@Aero

Quote:

Originally Posted by Aero

Give me a break, this is a waste, makes it tough to rhyme
I feel like Orc said I've got Choice Wordz for you & those were "fuck your time"

dope

I trust my nine, chain's untucked I'm fine, hell I don't mind threats
He did try pulling up on me while I was flexing - lifting himself on my biceps

nah

Your girl gave me & my guys a set of keys, there's no ignoring me
Anarchies working in your crib nigga we're taking away all your authority

nah

4 in his chest, at the funeral strapped while they're mourning his death
I'll put so many holes in his box you'd think they were transporting a pet

fire

A known blunder, for pay catch you in traffic, I keep the chrome brother
You crying while I'm shooting you in the car for money like Keaton Jones mother

nah

aero won easy

choice sucks

give aero a tougher opponent next time

v-aero

12-10-2017, 07:16 AM	#1
Orc Certified Mother’s Boy Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 5,165 Battle Record: 5-1 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - NBL Season 4 - GBL Season 1 - Lyric Olympics - Fight Night LXVI - Fight Night LX - Fight Night (3x) - NBL Picture Roast - Netcees Battle League (8x) - NBL Picture League - Gimmick Battle League - BA Tag Team - 1-2 Punch League - NBL Cypher (3x) - Battle Arena League - OM HOF (2x) Rep Power: 85899390	Aero vs Choice Wordz - AERO WINS Netcees Battle League: The Legends Edition Rules Due Dates: Verses are due Thursday and will be open until Sunday. Battles that lack votes may close later. One sided battles may get closed early. Extensions are 24 hours Line Limit: Minimum of 8, maximum of 16. If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first. Check ins are encouraged but not mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ FAILURE TO VOTE ON 3 BATTLES IS A DQ. NO MATTER WHO YOU ARE!!! YOU WILL BE DISQUALIFIED. VOTE ON 3 BATTLES OR YOU LOSE. SIMPLE! @Aero @Choice Wordz

12-10-2017, 09:14 AM	#2
Aero GOAT Join Date: Jul 2015 Posts: 4,825 Battle Record: 14-17 Champed - Site Diss Competition - Tag Tournament III - Lyric Olympics - Tag Tournament: "Omicron Variant" Rep Power: 0	10 __________________ Too Rich IRL to Be Here. I'm Out.

12-11-2017, 01:09 PM	#3
Choice Wordz Junior Member Join Date: Dec 2017 Posts: 14 Battle Record: 0-2 Rep Power: 3305170	Fine with that. It’s on The mandatory 3 votes, is that for week 2 battles? @Orc Last edited by Choice Wordz; 12-12-2017 at 06:33 AM.

12-14-2017, 05:49 PM	#5
Choice Wordz Junior Member Join Date: Dec 2017 Posts: 14 Battle Record: 0-2 Rep Power: 3305170	Money, I ain’t shy a buck, the barrels maim your narrow frame Choice spice it up, I’m fly as what n’ Aero plain Your house of cards vs. A380... Wordz plenty crazy You tryna Pres for some gay ish... like Kevin Spacey On top of your mindstate, crisp as Frito Lay I’ll stay rocking your dome like Beats by Dre This dude way soft, round stitched up like baseballs Hit with napalm n’ leave your face off in this face-off I’m outta this universe, you outta this planet, vanished Now, keep Wordz out your mouth like sign language @Aero Last edited by Choice Wordz; 12-14-2017 at 05:57 PM.

12-14-2017, 10:32 PM	#6
Aero GOAT Join Date: Jul 2015 Posts: 4,825 Battle Record: 14-17 Champed - Site Diss Competition - Tag Tournament III - Lyric Olympics - Tag Tournament: "Omicron Variant" Rep Power: 0	Give me a break, this is a waste, makes it tough to rhyme I feel like Orc said I've got Choice Wordz for you & those were "fuck your time" I trust my nine, chain's untucked I'm fine, hell I don't mind threats He did try pulling up on me while I was flexing - lifting himself on my biceps Your girl gave me & my guys a set of keys, there's no ignoring me Anarchies working in your crib nigga we're taking away all your authority 4 in his chest, at the funeral strapped while they're mourning his death I'll put so many holes in his box you'd think they were transporting a pet A known blunder, for pay catch you in traffic, I keep the chrome brother You crying while I'm shooting you in the car for money like Keaton Jones mother __________________ Too Rich IRL to Be Here. I'm Out.

12-12-2017, 11:04 AM	#4
Orc Certified Mother’s Boy Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 5,165 Battle Record: 5-1 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - NBL Season 4 - GBL Season 1 - Lyric Olympics - Fight Night LXVI - Fight Night LX - Fight Night (3x) - NBL Picture Roast - Netcees Battle League (8x) - NBL Picture League - Gimmick Battle League - BA Tag Team - 1-2 Punch League - NBL Cypher (3x) - Battle Arena League - OM HOF (2x) Rep Power: 85899390	Yes

12-14-2017, 11:32 PM	#7
For Battling Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2017 Posts: 3,986 Battle Record: 11-6 Rep Power: 5633912	Money, I ain’t shy a buck, the barrels maim your narrow frame Choice spice it up, I’m fly as what n’ Aero plain lol cute Your house of cards vs. A380... Wordz plenty crazy You tryna Pres for some gay ish... like Kevin Spacey but nah On top of your mindstate, crisp as Frito Lay I’ll stay rocking your dome like Beats by Dre right idea but wasn’t good This dude way soft, round stitched up like baseballs Hit with napalm n’ leave your face off in this face-off snother One where you had the right idea but wasn’t good I’m outta this universe, you outta this planet, vanished Now, keep Wordz out your mouth like sign language this was cool, props Choice: Sup bro, this wasn’t bad at all for somebody who seemingly just began text. Tbh I think you have a lot of potential and I’d like to see you post a lot more & remain active in here. As far as verse quality overall, definitely could have gotten more creative and thrown harsher punches but you had the right idea. You’ll improve for next time I’m sure. Vs Give me a break, this is a waste, makes it tough to rhyme I feel like Orc said I've got Choice Wordz for you & those were "fuck your time" made me lol I trust my nine, chain's untucked I'm fine, hell I don't mind threats He did try pulling up on me while I was flexing - lifting himself on my biceps lol’s all over the place aero! Your girl gave me & my guys a set of keys, there's no ignoring me Anarchies working in your crib nigga we're taking away all your authority alright 4 in his chest, at the funeral strapped while they're mourning his death I'll put so many holes in his box you'd think they were transporting a pet this was dope A known blunder, for pay catch you in traffic, I keep the chrome brother You crying while I'm shooting you in the car for money like Keaton Jones mother lmao I knew you would Aero I love your set ups, probably have the best set up swagger in the game right now. Good verse Vote: Aero

12-14-2017, 11:46 PM	#9
Inno Ad mini tator Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 10,005 Battle Record: 26-54 Champed - Lime Green Poetry Association - Black August - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 85899400	I got Choices opener vs Aeros Opener Anarchies line Transporting pets Vote aero

12-15-2017, 12:02 AM	#10
Saitama One-Punch Man Join Date: Nov 2015 Posts: 118 Rep Power: 5936473	Will vote

12-15-2017, 03:46 AM	#11
Profit Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2017 Posts: 106 Battle Record: 10-8 Rep Power: 53065	Money, I ain’t shy a buck, the barrels maim your narrow frame Choice spice it up, I’m fly as what n’ Aero plain Ok Your house of cards vs. A380... Wordz plenty crazy You tryna Pres for some gay ish... like Kevin Spacey Light On top of your mindstate, crisp as Frito Lay I’ll stay rocking your dome like Beats by Dre Nah This dude way soft, round stitched up like baseballs Hit with napalm n’ leave your face off in this face-off Nah, I’m outta this universe, you outta this planet, vanished Now, keep Wordz out your mouth like sign language Not much of a diss Give me a break, this is a waste, makes it tough to rhyme I feel like Orc said I've got Choice Wordz for you & those were "fuck your time" Dope I trust my nine, chain's untucked I'm fine, hell I don't mind threats He did try pulling up on me while I was flexing - lifting himself on my biceps Lol Your girl gave me & my guys a set of keys, there's no ignoring me Anarchies working in your crib nigga we're taking away all your authority Cool 4 in his chest, at the funeral strapped while they're mourning his death I'll put so many holes in his box you'd think they were transporting a pet Dope A known blunder, for pay catch you in traffic, I keep the chrome brother You crying while I'm shooting you in the car for money like Keaton Jones mother Nice I got aero here with a solid verse.. seemed choice was a little incomplete plus lacked insults.. vote aero

12-15-2017, 06:17 AM	#12
ill nik-A Super Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 7,407 Battle Record: 70-25 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Battle Arena - BA Picture - Picture Battle Tournament - Netcees Battle League (3x) - Netcees Writers League (2x) - Summer Classic VI - Fall Brawl III - Netcees Battle League Season X - Lyric Olympics Rep Power: 77164516	Choice wordz.... flowed well with the shortness but the concepts need better development Aero, opener and pets were dope.. anarchy was really bad lmao __________________ Grumpy old man.

12-15-2017, 11:16 AM	#13
E Tha Real yes really Join Date: Nov 2014 Location: NC Posts: 362 Battle Record: 7-9 Rep Power: 6054891	This was lopsided Choice needs to work on developing a direct punch with a set-up. He’s all over the place. Aero took this easily the biceps & pet line were heavy hitters; nice showing! V-aero

12-15-2017, 12:37 PM	#14
Cred The Biggest Join Date: Jan 2015 Posts: 3,254 Battle Record: 67-32 Accomplishments - Gun Bar King Champed - Fight Night 3 - Fight Night 10 - Fight Night 12 - Battle Arena League Rep Power: 85899380	Keep wordz out ur mouth like sign language was cool. You’ve got the right idea fam, jus need to formulate those lines into harsher hitting ones. Fucking wit the style tho bro. Vs The only line I didn’t like was the anarchy one but even that was decent. Aero u seem to look in top form, I see u fam. Holes in the box and that closer we’re bonkers to keep it skreet. Vote - Aero

12-15-2017, 05:57 PM	#17
Schadenfreude Dynomite.. DYNOMITE!! Join Date: Sep 2015 Posts: 1,408 Battle Record: 42-22 Champed - Netcees Battle League (2x) - BA Tag Team Titles - Lyric Olympics Rep Power: 21049081	VOTE AERO Choice needs a lot of elevating & developing. Aero had his usual humor & cleverness, ran away w/ this win fairly easy. __________________ Aali hupatikana kwa ghali.