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Old 07-07-2017, 08:26 PM   #1
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Edited. Twice as long now. And more complete.

Geno -Slave No More.
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Doormatted, a floored addict of pure maddness
Who needs more acid, hardwood floors of a storm fashion
I could pour ashes, that dance, and that could form fathoms
I prefer saddness, all by myself until earth crashes
Theres a lapse, in my memory bank, never repaid
I could demonstrate, deadly with blades, delicate ways
Get ya lemon shaved, lemon meringue, leverage ole
Ive got way to many words and theres plenty to say
A penny saved -a penny earned, throwin pennies away
I was never a big fan of any sense anyway, common
To see a drug addict broke, spendin pennies to pay homage
So i stay calm, though my crave calls, ima lay off
Not today dog, its bigger things i could trade for
Turn my slave off, keep my head high and just play ball
To many friends dead, to my friends dying -the games wrong
Ive been through it all, seen quite a bit and i still suffer
From a pill lover, to harder stuff, that could kill summers
Spendin real hundreds, just to go be out in real public
Now i fear nothing, clean conscious mind i can call mine
And its ALL mine, doesnt belong to the calls lies
Its been all cries, been all tears, for long years
Aint no more fear, im all ears, reformed spirit
Ill perform miracles, more lyrics, with no cielings
This aint Hov, weezy, or slim shady, its chris -baby
And my new fix, is this music that ive produced lately.
Unghhh..

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Old 07-07-2017, 08:29 PM   #2
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Damn. Wrong forum wtf!?!?

Move this to OM pls. And thank you. And my bad lol
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Old 07-08-2017, 11:10 AM   #4
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I edited it. Made it twice as long. Glad u read/liked it. 1
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the name of the game is sublimation.

there are right and wrong ways to do it. i like your documenting where and when you've erred and how you're working to do better. it sort of fluctuates between your introspection and thirst for healing and an outward aggression towards what brought you to this point.

where you wind up on that spectrum will depend entirely on you. it's very interesting to read work in adjunct with everything else you've shared in recent months.

take care,

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