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Old 11-07-2015, 07:33 PM   #1
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I keep suttin that fire on me, peep the mink dragon
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aint sayin u bitches names but if you apply take it like it came from Raven Symone
I'm Debo twice, fading shooters, no reload dice
because I'm known for the hands, like Diode's wife
u see that? I'm a cross between short bar, long bar, and Allahu Akbar
I'm a Muslim goin ham in the pork section bout to blow up a snack bar
went and chilled for minute, came back and MC's is wack
ey verse reads like a 2trippleO vs a Rican match
given ya'll the darkness, them 3 days came and went
ya'll survived just to witness this cocaine and piff
they'll call me to roll up and smoke you, my codename is spliff
add me on AOL as Feces, in otherwords, my AIMS's the shit
I'm posin' a threat, took a selfie wit ISIS beheading Obama
for that, NSA says I'm a goner, but fuck it...couldn't take it any longer
in the coupe wit the squad bumpin Snoop n Debarge
debatin on celebs and space, and which cannon and scope to use for shootin the stars
cherish yah life, I'll cut you and bury the knife
lucky for you, I'm the only black at my job and don't wanna live up to the stereotype
I coordinate my clothes with the desi or the long nose
I'mma monster that can give two fucks 'bout Eddie's wardrobe
critics weigh in and keep sayin my verse was light, last weeks was harder
if I don't come heavy, it means my current opponent sucks, just being honest
please give the God space, I've had a hard day
nicknamed the hawk Noah for the way it parts waves
Chyeahhh Guevera, you can call me a commie, fuck it
I'm the one you all will tag when them Zombies comin, muthafuckas
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Old 11-07-2015, 08:45 PM   #2
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Now I see why @Destroyer stay duckin
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Old 11-07-2015, 09:00 PM   #3
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Old 11-07-2015, 09:47 PM   #4
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word he stay duckin. That nigga sucks b
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Old 11-08-2015, 01:51 AM   #5
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add me on AOL as Feces, in otherwords, my AIMS's the shit
- I spit up my ramon noodles after reading that

lucky for you, I'm the only black at my job and don't wanna live up to the stereotype
- I can relate to this.

Definitely some heat. Only gripe is if you can actually spit this. some of those bars seem stretched as fuck. Could make some of those bars hit just as hard with less words. I imagine a chino xl flow where he tongue twists sum lines. Lyrics alone were cool tho.
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Old 11-08-2015, 08:50 AM   #6
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Muslim going ham in the pork chop alley slayed me
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Old 11-10-2015, 01:37 AM   #7
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cherish yah life, I'll cut you and bury the knife
lucky for you, I'm the only black at my job and don't wanna live up to the stereotype

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Old 11-11-2015, 07:25 AM   #8
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wrote to it. Jada's Top 5 DOA freestyle mixtape had the beat on there and I was like "Oh I've got to go in on this"
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Old 11-11-2015, 06:45 PM   #9
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because I'm known for the hands, like Diode's wife
u see that? I'm a cross between short bar, long bar, and Allahu Akbar
I'm a Muslim goin ham in the pork section bout to blow up a snack bar

Lmao.
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Reminds me of Em's shadyxv style..compaction of lyrics, fun vocab and fun facts..

Nigga said "I'm posin' a threat, took a selfie wit ISIS beheading Obama"

Tough sir!
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Old 11-15-2015, 10:16 AM   #12
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Cool flex. Some lol's and hard lines in there, decent.
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Old 11-15-2015, 11:29 AM   #13
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This was hard, known for the hand like diodes wife was illll, dope shit my dude.
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just remembered why i dig ya shit so much
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Great read, a lot of quotables in here, Obama and Noah lines were very good.
Loved the smoothness as well.
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critics weigh in and keep sayin my verse was light, last weeks was harder
if I don't come heavy, it means my current opponent sucks, just being honest
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HA! I can relate to this right here, this whole verse was fire from the jump to the end
the flow of this is smooth as duck shit & makes me want to get back into this mode again
regardless you had quotable after quotable in this piece here. a dope read, heres a bump for you
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oh word I didn't even see this

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