11-07-2015, 07:33 PM | #1 |
Saul Paul
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30 Bars of Darkness
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qrj9YCJS120
the open mic assassin, it's only right that I'm spazzin they say what happened with Hattan? eh! I'm still the Dolemite of swaggin I could pull Kelis, see when he's mackin I keep suttin that fire on me, peep the mink dragon #1 with a bullet, netcees game of thrones get turned into danger zones aint sayin u bitches names but if you apply take it like it came from Raven Symone I'm Debo twice, fading shooters, no reload dice because I'm known for the hands, like Diode's wife u see that? I'm a cross between short bar, long bar, and Allahu Akbar I'm a Muslim goin ham in the pork section bout to blow up a snack bar went and chilled for minute, came back and MC's is wack ey verse reads like a 2trippleO vs a Rican match given ya'll the darkness, them 3 days came and went ya'll survived just to witness this cocaine and piff they'll call me to roll up and smoke you, my codename is spliff add me on AOL as Feces, in otherwords, my AIMS's the shit I'm posin' a threat, took a selfie wit ISIS beheading Obama for that, NSA says I'm a goner, but fuck it...couldn't take it any longer in the coupe wit the squad bumpin Snoop n Debarge debatin on celebs and space, and which cannon and scope to use for shootin the stars cherish yah life, I'll cut you and bury the knife lucky for you, I'm the only black at my job and don't wanna live up to the stereotype I coordinate my clothes with the desi or the long nose I'mma monster that can give two fucks 'bout Eddie's wardrobe critics weigh in and keep sayin my verse was light, last weeks was harder if I don't come heavy, it means my current opponent sucks, just being honest please give the God space, I've had a hard day nicknamed the hawk Noah for the way it parts waves Chyeahhh Guevera, you can call me a commie, fuck it I'm the one you all will tag when them Zombies comin, muthafuckas
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11-07-2015, 09:00 PM | #3 |
Bags will be avenged
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11-07-2015, 09:47 PM | #4 | |
Saul Paul
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he speaks....
Quote:
word he stay duckin. That nigga sucks b
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11-08-2015, 01:51 AM | #5 |
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add me on AOL as Feces, in otherwords, my AIMS's the shit
- I spit up my ramon noodles after reading that lucky for you, I'm the only black at my job and don't wanna live up to the stereotype - I can relate to this. Definitely some heat. Only gripe is if you can actually spit this. some of those bars seem stretched as fuck. Could make some of those bars hit just as hard with less words. I imagine a chino xl flow where he tongue twists sum lines. Lyrics alone were cool tho. |
11-08-2015, 08:50 AM | #6 |
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Shit dope
Muslim going ham in the pork chop alley slayed me
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11-10-2015, 01:37 AM | #7 |
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cherish yah life, I'll cut you and bury the knife
lucky for you, I'm the only black at my job and don't wanna live up to the stereotype dope^ Last edited by Pharaohs Army; 10-23-2016 at 08:53 PM. |
11-11-2015, 07:25 AM | #8 |
Saul Paul
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wrote to it. Jada's Top 5 DOA freestyle mixtape had the beat on there and I was like "Oh I've got to go in on this"
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11-11-2015, 06:45 PM | #9 |
(ง'̀-'́)ง
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lol
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11-12-2015, 09:34 AM | #10 |
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because I'm known for the hands, like Diode's wife
u see that? I'm a cross between short bar, long bar, and Allahu Akbar I'm a Muslim goin ham in the pork section bout to blow up a snack bar Lmao. |
11-13-2015, 11:24 AM | #11 |
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Reminds me of Em's shadyxv style..compaction of lyrics, fun vocab and fun facts..
Nigga said "I'm posin' a threat, took a selfie wit ISIS beheading Obama" Tough sir! |
11-15-2015, 10:16 AM | #12 |
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Cool flex. Some lol's and hard lines in there, decent.
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11-15-2015, 11:29 AM | #13 |
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This was hard, known for the hand like diodes wife was illll, dope shit my dude.
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02-25-2016, 08:21 PM | #14 |
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ufffffff..
just remembered why i dig ya shit so much
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02-27-2016, 09:13 AM | #15 |
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Great read, a lot of quotables in here, Obama and Noah lines were very good.
Loved the smoothness as well. |
03-01-2016, 12:15 PM | #16 |
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critics weigh in and keep sayin my verse was light, last weeks was harder
if I don't come heavy, it means my current opponent sucks, just being honest ^^^ HA! I can relate to this right here, this whole verse was fire from the jump to the end the flow of this is smooth as duck shit & makes me want to get back into this mode again regardless you had quotable after quotable in this piece here. a dope read, heres a bump for you
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03-01-2016, 02:44 PM | #17 |
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oh word I didn't even see this
much obliged ya'll
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