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Old 02-08-2020, 03:33 AM   #1
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Old 02-08-2020, 03:39 AM   #2
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yo pjk didn't you, like way back in the day go to some like, those rap battles in canada and where they used to scream in their face and stuff.. and act all tough?

you may not have but I think I remember you did
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Old 02-08-2020, 04:06 AM   #3
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and @sraL slash pjk why don't you join this new league? I think its kinda a fucked because i'm a punchline dude... but still i'd like a few lines to set it up would like it better if it were like 6 lines not 2....

but oh well, ima champ this league and i'm in it so you join it too
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Old 02-08-2020, 04:16 AM   #4
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hey man I do it for fun, but even though im 30 years old ive got some pride into it... like without a doubt im dead serious about it and if I can write whatever.. I can .. you'll see i'll fuck them all up... you'll see more of like me I can write dope lines... you can't so much.. fuck it where is Richard Corey and Knowls O brien at
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Old 02-08-2020, 04:19 AM   #5
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Old 02-08-2020, 04:35 AM   #6
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nigga I wrote 6 punchlines barely thinking.. the set up doesn't matter... just the punchline... and i've got 6 what I think are dope punchlines.. I'm just waiting for the dude to do something, as if I need to use what I wrote sometthing for a good dude or not... fuck it, 4:30 am i'l use my weak one but its still dope just have to come up with the part before

but yeah i've got not 6 probably more like 4 dope new shit... like punchlines when I was good at this back in the day and stuff I would just hear something.. but thas legit over 10 years ago.. so lets see
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Old 02-08-2020, 04:45 AM   #7
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ouch is a known felon, scary and he knows hes violent....
and he's quicker to lay the Chopper down quicker than Kobe's pilot...


thats dope and I posted it... i've got better ones
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I just hope niggas from over seas know that chopper = helicopter and chopper means ak/sk/ any fuly auto... if they don't get it then whatever
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I lay the chopper down quicker than kobe's pilot... thats a dope line

no one can tell me different and its new...

and I've got a bunch of dope lines, better than that niggas are gonna get clowned by the old goat
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Old 02-08-2020, 05:06 AM   #10
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ive got like 10 lines, like punchlines that I just randomly came up with... I just used that kobe line... like I used this line.. they showin' more ass than the superbowl halftime show... with shakira and j lo.. showin more ass blah blah sort of thing

but I got a lot of other shit i've wrote, that is generic but dope... I won't say it now because i'll use it in the future
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the way that i've been good, and i'm pretty sure you've seen it pjk...

is that I really didn't give a fuck about my set up line, my punchline was the shit


my set up could be like

blah blah blah balh balh blah dog
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I guess if someone was super studying on it or super dope they would come up with a first witty line and then get the second one for the punch.. I just throw the punchline haymaker and thats it... set up is arbitrary
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I lay the chopper down quicker than kobe's pilot... thats a dope line

no one can tell me different and its new...

and I've got a bunch of dope lines, better than that niggas are gonna get clowned by the old goat

Flow did the chopper thing two weeks ago tbh:

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hell he copped a bald head from the chopper and Kobe’d himself
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well my line was clearly better, and I have no idea who Flow is and never read anything like that

sooo?
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PJK, dope mag only read part of it maybe i'll read some more in a little bit...

but don't be mad at me because you can't come up with lines anymore... maybe~try~to~do more of that and quit hating on me because I still can

good mag though
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why does the american flag have 426 stars.. I don't know it just cuz murica... why does a unicorn only have one horn...

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I just hope niggas from over seas know that chopper = helicopter and chopper means ak/sk/ any fuly auto... if they don't get it then whatever

Ohh shit... Honestly didn't get it at first so thanks for the explanation

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