Netcees  

Go Back   Netcees > Vault > Archives > The Netcees archive > 1-2 Punch League > 1-2 Archive

User Tag List

Reply
 
Thread Tools Display Modes
Old 01-29-2020, 10:21 AM   #21
Adverse
low tide in serotonin bay
 
Adverse's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jul 2013
Posts: 2,737
Battle Record: 37-28


Champed
- GWL Picture Challenge
- Guerrilla Writing League
- Black August II

Rep Power: 15446142
Adverse has a brilliant futureAdverse has a brilliant futureAdverse has a brilliant futureAdverse has a brilliant futureAdverse has a brilliant futureAdverse has a brilliant futureAdverse has a brilliant futureAdverse has a brilliant futureAdverse has a brilliant futureAdverse has a brilliant futureAdverse has a brilliant future
Default

Yooo but shouts to @Aero for picking up on that F a G/effigy wordplay. I lost fair and square needed to convey that bar better, if anyone has any tips on how to do so lemms know, I'm still a student to this shit
Adverse is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 01-29-2020, 10:22 AM   #22
Aero
GOAT
 
Join Date: Jul 2015
Posts: 4,825
Battle Record: 14-17


Champed
- Site Diss Competition
- Tag Tournament III
- Lyric Olympics
- Tag Tournament: "Omicron Variant"

Rep Power: 0
Aero Aero Aero Aero Aero Aero Aero Aero Aero Aero Aero
Default

Quote:
Originally Posted by Adverse View Post
Yooo but shouts to @Aero for picking up on that F a G/effigy wordplay. I lost fair and square needed to convey that bar better, if anyone has any tips on how to do so lemms know, I'm still a student to this shit

Props. You won that. I'll give you tips on that bar right now.
__________________
Too Rich IRL to Be Here. I'm Out.

Aero is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 01-29-2020, 10:51 AM   #23
Blue Bayou
Ukrainian Howlitzers
 
Blue Bayou's Avatar
 
Join Date: May 2013
Posts: 5,089
Battle Record: 41-24

Accomplishments
- Hall of Fame

Champed
- NBL Season 3
- Alias Tournament II
- Fight Night XLVIII
- Fight Night XXV
- Fight Night XV
- Fight Night (3x)
- Netcees Battle League (4x)
- NBL Tag Team Season 3
- Lyric Olympics
- 1-2 Punch League (3x)
- Battle Arena League (2x)
- Key Grand Prix 2018 1/2
- BA Tag
- NPL Roast
- Netcees Pic League

Rep Power: 17502332
Blue Bayou has a brilliant futureBlue Bayou has a brilliant futureBlue Bayou has a brilliant futureBlue Bayou has a brilliant futureBlue Bayou has a brilliant futureBlue Bayou has a brilliant futureBlue Bayou has a brilliant futureBlue Bayou has a brilliant futureBlue Bayou has a brilliant futureBlue Bayou has a brilliant futureBlue Bayou has a brilliant future
Default

Quote:
Originally Posted by Adverse View Post
Yooo but shouts to @Aero for picking up on that F a G/effigy wordplay. I lost fair and square needed to convey that bar better, if anyone has any tips on how to do so lemms know, I'm still a student to this shit
Yeahhhhh sorry I didn't catch that

I've actually done an effigy bar as well so of all ppl not to catch it LOL
__________________
"I shit myself
I had to throw my underwear in the dumpster outback
Uve won"
-kungfugrip
Blue Bayou is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 01-29-2020, 10:56 AM   #24
Aero
GOAT
 
Join Date: Jul 2015
Posts: 4,825
Battle Record: 14-17


Champed
- Site Diss Competition
- Tag Tournament III
- Lyric Olympics
- Tag Tournament: "Omicron Variant"

Rep Power: 0
Aero Aero Aero Aero Aero Aero Aero Aero Aero Aero Aero
Default

@Adverse

You're predictable as a hot summer, "I'll spray this glock, bustin' at your ribs!"

Predictable as a hot summer? Lol that made zero sense then to follow it up with a silly set up wasn't too good. So work on cleaning that up.

But only time they see you as 'F, a G' is when they're erecting a statue for the greatest cocksucker that's ever lived

The punch is actually not worded badly it's just way too many syllables. Should try to keep your punchlines to no more than 20 syllables this is 32... Buuuut if you're going to do more than 20 syllables for the punchline make sure the set up flows with multis




You're gangster? Dead the shit, I'm not the one you'll get credit with
I'll only say F, a G if they erect statues for the greatest cocksucker to ever live
__________________
Too Rich IRL to Be Here. I'm Out.

Aero is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 01-29-2020, 11:18 AM   #25
Adverse
low tide in serotonin bay
 
Adverse's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jul 2013
Posts: 2,737
Battle Record: 37-28


Champed
- GWL Picture Challenge
- Guerrilla Writing League
- Black August II

Rep Power: 15446142
Adverse has a brilliant futureAdverse has a brilliant futureAdverse has a brilliant futureAdverse has a brilliant futureAdverse has a brilliant futureAdverse has a brilliant futureAdverse has a brilliant futureAdverse has a brilliant futureAdverse has a brilliant futureAdverse has a brilliant futureAdverse has a brilliant future
Default

Quote:
Originally Posted by Aero View Post
@Adverse

You're predictable as a hot summer, "I'll spray this glock, bustin' at your ribs!"

Predictable as a hot summer? Lol that made zero sense then to follow it up with a silly set up wasn't too good. So work on cleaning that up.

But only time they see you as 'F, a G' is when they're erecting a statue for the greatest cocksucker that's ever lived

The punch is actually not worded badly it's just way too many syllables. Should try to keep your punchlines to no more than 20 syllables this is 32... Buuuut if you're going to do more than 20 syllables for the punchline make sure the set up flows with multis




You're gangster? Dead the shit, I'm not the one you'll get credit with
I'll only say F, a G if they erect statues for the greatest cocksucker to ever live
Alright i can work on that, I've always known my setups to be one of my weaknesses, they've been too long winded tbh. And i know in this league especially they're almost as important as the punch itself, thanks for the advice man i needed it i appreciate it
Adverse is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 01-29-2020, 03:41 PM   #26
FGR
AHHHHHHH
 
FGR's Avatar
 
Join Date: May 2013
Location: Philadelphia
Posts: 558
Battle Record: 16-17



Rep Power: 8596595
FGR has a brilliant futureFGR has a brilliant futureFGR has a brilliant futureFGR has a brilliant futureFGR has a brilliant futureFGR has a brilliant futureFGR has a brilliant futureFGR has a brilliant futureFGR has a brilliant futureFGR has a brilliant futureFGR has a brilliant future
Default

I think yall should shorten the due date.. shits to long for 1 bar.. 3 days max
__________________
.
..death to all RIGHT RIGHT!!
FGR is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 01-29-2020, 03:52 PM   #27
Zuo
Sidearms
 
Zuo's Avatar
 
Join Date: Aug 2018
Posts: 620
Battle Record: 1-1



Rep Power: 749611
Zuo has a brilliant futureZuo has a brilliant futureZuo has a brilliant futureZuo has a brilliant futureZuo has a brilliant futureZuo has a brilliant futureZuo has a brilliant futureZuo has a brilliant futureZuo has a brilliant futureZuo has a brilliant futureZuo has a brilliant future
Default

Quote:
Originally Posted by Adverse View Post
Alright i can work on that, I've always known my setups to be one of my weaknesses, they've been too long winded tbh. And i know in this league especially they're almost as important as the punch itself, thanks for the advice man i needed it i appreciate it
You’re taking advice from HIM?!?!

Man c’mon
__________________
Quote:
Originally Posted by Amen View Post
I don’t dress up for Halloween, bro. Stopped doing that at the age of 6 or 7, man.
Zuo is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 01-29-2020, 04:04 PM   #28
Adverse
low tide in serotonin bay
 
Adverse's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jul 2013
Posts: 2,737
Battle Record: 37-28


Champed
- GWL Picture Challenge
- Guerrilla Writing League
- Black August II

Rep Power: 15446142
Adverse has a brilliant futureAdverse has a brilliant futureAdverse has a brilliant futureAdverse has a brilliant futureAdverse has a brilliant futureAdverse has a brilliant futureAdverse has a brilliant futureAdverse has a brilliant futureAdverse has a brilliant futureAdverse has a brilliant futureAdverse has a brilliant future
Default

Quote:
Originally Posted by Zuo View Post
You’re taking advice from HIM?!?!

Man c’mon
Aero is a good dude, besides most other people on this site are so reluctant to spare some knowledge, like battle rap is the Bush's Baked Beans recipe or something smh
Adverse is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 01-29-2020, 04:31 PM   #29
FGR
AHHHHHHH
 
FGR's Avatar
 
Join Date: May 2013
Location: Philadelphia
Posts: 558
Battle Record: 16-17



Rep Power: 8596595
FGR has a brilliant futureFGR has a brilliant futureFGR has a brilliant futureFGR has a brilliant futureFGR has a brilliant futureFGR has a brilliant futureFGR has a brilliant futureFGR has a brilliant futureFGR has a brilliant futureFGR has a brilliant futureFGR has a brilliant future
Default

Bush baked beans recipe lmao
__________________
.
..death to all RIGHT RIGHT!!
FGR is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 01-29-2020, 07:11 PM   #30
Destroyer
Bags will be avenged
 
Destroyer's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jan 2013
Posts: 12,622
Battle Record: 85-58

Accomplishments
- 50+ Wins

Champed
- Gimmick Battle League
- 1-2 Punch League (5x)
- Fight Night LXXIX
- Fight Night 4
- Netcees Battle League (2x)
- NPL Roast

Rep Power: 84181418
Destroyer has a brilliant futureDestroyer has a brilliant futureDestroyer has a brilliant futureDestroyer has a brilliant futureDestroyer has a brilliant futureDestroyer has a brilliant futureDestroyer has a brilliant futureDestroyer has a brilliant futureDestroyer has a brilliant futureDestroyer has a brilliant futureDestroyer has a brilliant future
Default

Lmfaaaaao
__________________
Quote:
Originally Posted by Silver View Post
Sorry for your lost
philosophy.
Destroyer is offline   Reply With Quote
Reply

Thread Tools
Display Modes

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off

Forum Jump


All times are GMT -4. The time now is 12:51 PM.


Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.8.5
Copyright ©2000 - 2024, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.
User Alert System provided by Advanced User Tagging (Lite) - vBulletin Mods & Addons Copyright © 2024 DragonByte Technologies Ltd.
Google+