12-31-2017, 05:35 PM | #1 |
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The God Artifact
...topical battle verse written to the picture
I don't know much about physics, nor am I scientifically inclined I'm just a normal guy from Georgia who works a nine-to-five For a civilian based employer known as Stonehenge Enterprise The global giant in Robotics that owns Quantum Core Designs Which are carbon-coated constructs of monolithic size Computers so complex they've been rumored to be finds Of an underwater ruin near Bermuda in July ... of 1985 When two scuba divers tried to exhume a sacred site Of a luminescent blue ancient pyramid of light Which presumably just might be the last looming relic Of Atlantis due to time being brutally unkind To historic artifacts As they departed towards the bottom the aquatic habitat Holographically became a tropical location full of oxygen exchange It was awesome and insane to observe such a change As the dirt beneath their flippers quickly turned into a stage And lifted them away Towards the center of the entrance which was hexagonal shaped And connected to the cosmos out in subatomic space A quantum gateway to where the clock is not obeyed And they weren't hostages or slaves to its concept or its games Beyond the 4th Dimension to the Source’s algorithm That configured into chains made of quartz and DNA Transformed and rearranged into a ginormous eye That orbited the plane and told them Horus was its name An artificial brain of a deceased deity That morphed its database into string energies And incased it in the safety of the pyramid machine That lay beneath the sea as the greatest source of wisdom In the whole galaxy From the Olmecs to Egyptians to the Dogon and Chinese They all knew of it’s existence in the West Indies Protected by Atlantis and the pre-Columbus Mayans Til they suddenly just vanished leaving nothing but thier silence But those lucky scuba divers rediscovered what was hiding In the ‘Devil’s Triangle’ of those Caribbean islands But apparently their finding wasn’t something we should know Cause they never told the public, but became the CEOs Of Stonehenge Enterprise where I work in video Surveillance operations and security patrol A private corporation that the government supports Such as military branches for their weaponary and force And of course the CIA so they can spy and report To Illuminati masters what the Eye has informed Cos those monolithic structures are like giant thump-drives Of quantum information from a cosmic god’s mind Last edited by ACTIVATE SELF; 01-30-2019 at 04:04 PM. |
01-30-2019, 03:07 PM | #2 |
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Hello, Self Activate...lol..allow me to feed this piece of work. I enjoyed this read Self Activate - had all the essentials for a good written. You had nice mechanics, with a good flow to boot. Decent imagery, with a good narrative. I enjoyed the story-line; - was quite entertaining in a way. Nice work, man. The ending with the character or narration being from a employee was kind of..just there..like..whatever..lol...but it was still good in a way. I enjoyed this written. The ending was pretty good as-well. Nothing too bad to say. Decent work, man. Keep writing! |
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