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Old 10-14-2021, 02:48 AM   #1
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We are remnants of a forgotten future
ancestors of an ancient tomorrow
Spaceships and afro-picks
will be found near our sacred mounds
and burial sites
Archeologist and astronauts
will each provide evidence
to our secret existence
deep inside the Hallow Earth
Beneath the sky and above the sea
Your cities will tremble from EMPS
and seismic waves
Natural weapons of mass disaster
For we are the masters of unknowable power
Omnipotence is but a word
you vaguely understand
Until we turn sea to sand in demonstration
Warp entire forest into organic shards of metal
Transmutation is our speciality
especially me
The conscious center of my hived minded kind
Although, kind in nature, we are as kind as nature
Walking-talking-forces-of-necessity
that push evolution into motion
Chaos begins of order and discord
Breathing entropy and empathy
In the form of carbon dioxide
Welcome to the dark side of light
Planet X has arrived
Hidden behind the stars
Anti-matter from Mars,
the Moon and Titan
“By Odin’s beard”
or Jupiter’s lightning
Our will be done
A trillion suns of nanoscopic size
fit inside my inner pupil
of triple black wormholes
that produce unusual amounts of fusion
The truth is we are from an infinite dimension
where numbers no longer correspond
And equations turn to jello
We are hel-low, high, good-bi..o..logical robots
That are neither here nor there
The Kali Yuga, Ragnarok and Judgement Day incarnate
Physical manifestations of intangible concepts
Contradicting the laws of physics
After all, gravity’s for the frogs and fish(es)
At least once you learn the art of self-propulsion
Focus, be as swift as locus, yet as gentle as a lotus
That’s drifting in the ocean…destruction will soon come
But only the living dead and un-enlightened will truly die
For no additional lifelines or reincarnations are available
So, all head towards the rainbow as we abort this system
To reconnect your halos and electrical antennas
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Old 10-14-2021, 11:27 PM   #2
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Welcome to the dark side of light
Planet X has arrived
Hidden behind the stars
Anti-matter from Mars,
the Moon and Titan
“By Odin’s beard”
or Jupiter’s lightning
Our will be done


This was the crescendo that kept creating and never let up. This is verbal psychedelics and you reached into the level fam. This is a special piece.


Oh and also I was told to tell you “Anomalies create anomalies”
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Old 11-03-2021, 11:28 PM   #3
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Not bad but I prefer your pieces that are more rhyme-centric.
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