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Old 11-17-2014, 04:48 AM   #1
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Old 11-17-2014, 12:47 PM   #2
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Old 11-17-2014, 01:21 PM   #3
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Old 11-19-2014, 11:09 PM   #4
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Old 11-21-2014, 12:48 AM   #6
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@En Sabah Nur aka Apocalypse/

Gin&Juice got this dude tricking on hoes w/ out a peep,
U'll see sluts 'blowin En dough' like Snoop Dogg rollin dwn the street.
U beg for pussy & get denied, I fuck hoes for fun,
&Ur Going thru a Dry spell that'll take more than Witch Rituals to overcome.
Ur a pain to me & ur Mom.. Just stop, dawg please,
When Im around Lypse tick'n us off, Due to her smudging hers on me.
I heard this fag swallows semen biscuits til he hurls, guys;
He's been draining pricks enough to replace Syringes worldwide.
Music? If I drop a EP I'll get calls to sit with Execs.,
If you drop something & get rings its only due to a ripple effect.
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Old 11-21-2014, 11:05 AM   #7
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Old 11-21-2014, 01:05 PM   #8
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Cool verse. Liked the first two bars and the last two
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Old 11-26-2014, 02:04 PM   #9
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Dry spell made me chuckle.

No @ Semen biscuits.
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Old 12-01-2014, 09:52 AM   #11
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@En Sabah Nur aka Apocalypse/

Gin&Juice got this dude tricking on hoes w/ out a peep,
U'll see sluts 'blowin En dough' like Snoop Dogg rollin dwn the street.
This was cool. Not a harsh punch but a jab.
U beg for pussy & get denied, I fuck hoes for fun,
&Ur Going thru a Dry spell that'll take more than Witch Rituals to overcome.
Cool concept. I feel like "Witch Rituals" sounds awkward in succession tho.
Ur a pain to me & ur Mom.. Just stop, dawg please,
When Im around Lypse tick'n us off, Due to her smudging hers on me.
Not really feeling this one.
I heard this fag swallows semen biscuits til he hurls, guys;
He's been draining pricks enough to replace Syringes worldwide.
Cool.
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If you drop something & get rings its only due to a ripple effect.
Cool concept but I feel you could've done more with it.
Not a bad verse, but not one of your strongest either. I feel like some of the execution was down compared to other verses I've seen from you, but the concepts were good.
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Old 12-01-2014, 10:44 AM   #12
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Snoop was cool idea but felt like a better flex line
Dry spell was ok
Lypse sticking was kinda stretched
Pricks was pretty basic
Closer was cool, my favorite line
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Gin&Juice got this dude tricking on hoes w/ out a peep,
U'll see sluts 'blowin En dough' like Snoop Dogg rollin dwn the street.

concept there but the execution sucks. I think you could have executed this a tad bit harsher, something like; If any sluts blowin en dough, she looks like snoop dogg or something to that effect. Has more of an insult'ish impact.

U beg for pussy & get denied, I fuck hoes for fun,
&Ur Going thru a Dry spell that'll take more than Witch Rituals to overcome.

same as above.

Ur a pain to me & ur Mom.. Just stop, dawg please,
When Im around Lypse tick'n us off, Due to her smudging hers on me.

yea, this was a stretch. creative attempt but stretched to say the least.

I heard this fag swallows semen biscuits til he hurls, guys;
He's been draining pricks enough to replace Syringes worldwide.

again, you could have gotten harsher and used more of a relevant tie in on the concept.

Music? If I drop a EP I'll get calls to sit with Execs.,
If you drop something & get rings its only due to a ripple effect.

this was ok, I suppose.

conceptually your dope, NOQ but your executions lack. I think if you were to put more thought in to your executions and make them as harsh as possible, you'd be better off, my dude. decent drop, I'd say one of your weaker ones compare to your other verses i've peeped from you.

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