Week 1: Vividlyvague vs. Verb \\ Vividlyvague wins via no-show

Certain · 02-22-2014, 03:19 PM

Season 3

The Basics | Read the full rules here.

Verses are due Thursday at 11:59 p.m. PT.

Deadline extensions of 24 hours are available on request and cannot be denied.

Votes are due Sunday at 11:59 p.m. PT.

Verses may not exceed 48 lines (or 650 words if formatted in a paragraph style) unless agreed upon by the opponent.

Voting on three battles is required. If you win and don't vote, you will receive a loss instead. If you lose and don't vote, you will receive a one-week suspension. Please post links to your three votes in this thread.

Topic

"The Sound and the Fury"

Good luck, @Vividlyvague and @Verb.

e11even · 02-22-2014, 07:33 PM

Down with the niggers and nigger-lovers!
Or at least that's what I was taught...

At the precinct we congratulate each other,
So proud the darkies never fought.
We never lost...

Gunshots and anger ousted the wicked pacifists.
We coach each other at crippling these asses. Sick,
But this was how I was raised.

That was 'in'.

They danced around in technicolor tint,
So we made them slip n slide with a hose's drench.
The Captain said, "I bet their thirst was quenched!"
This disturbed. I knew no creature deserved this shit.

I just do as I'm told. A tool on the cogs in the fold.
Catalyzing perpetuality... endless retreats to reliving the old.

They know there's a revolution brewing.
I play the bystander out of uniformed viewings.

I saw the bitch on the bus; the preacher's doings.
The baseball cards with the tar face; the disgraced students.
My superiors read the papers... misinterpretating these misusings...

At work, I was a decorated oppressor.
At home I anticipated a vibrant forever.

A rainbow of life rising out of this pot of woes.

In hell I spotted snow.
Right around the time the force retired me, "He's gotten old..."

By then, the system was in review.
Awards were withdrawn and due process was 'new'.

At my retirement we did a blind raid...
I think we dragged that poor man too.
But when you're an enslaved aid,

What's a dog to do?

Certain · 02-28-2014, 03:07 AM

@Verb

Verb · 02-28-2014, 11:36 PM

check sorry lol I've been in the hospital

Certain · 02-28-2014, 11:40 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Verb

check sorry lol I've been in the hospital

Verses are due in 3 hours, 20 minutes.

02-22-2014, 03:19 PM	#1
Certain Mad fucking dangerous. Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 12,072 Battle Record: 40-19 Champed - AOWL Season 3 - Art of Writing League (2x) Rep Power: 85899402	Week 1: Vividlyvague vs. Verb \\ Vividlyvague wins via no-show Season 3 The Basics \| Read the full rules here. Verses are due Thursday at 11:59 p.m. PT. Deadline extensions of 24 hours are available on request and cannot be denied. Votes are due Sunday at 11:59 p.m. PT. Verses may not exceed 48 lines (or 650 words if formatted in a paragraph style) unless agreed upon by the opponent. Voting on three battles is required. If you win and don't vote, you will receive a loss instead. If you lose and don't vote, you will receive a one-week suspension. Please post links to your three votes in this thread. Topic "The Sound and the Fury" Good luck, @Vividlyvague and @Verb. __________________ I'm just swinging swords strictly based on keyboards, unbalanced like elephants and ants on seesaws.

02-22-2014, 07:33 PM	#2
e11even V.V Join Date: Sep 2013 Location: . Posts: 2,076 Battle Record: 31-20 Rep Power: 6247256	Down with the niggers and nigger-lovers! Or at least that's what I was taught... At the precinct we congratulate each other, So proud the darkies never fought. We never lost... Gunshots and anger ousted the wicked pacifists. We coach each other at crippling these asses. Sick, But this was how I was raised. That was 'in'. They danced around in technicolor tint, So we made them slip n slide with a hose's drench. The Captain said, "I bet their thirst was quenched!" This disturbed. I knew no creature deserved this shit. I just do as I'm told. A tool on the cogs in the fold. Catalyzing perpetuality... endless retreats to reliving the old. They know there's a revolution brewing. I play the bystander out of uniformed viewings. I saw the bitch on the bus; the preacher's doings. The baseball cards with the tar face; the disgraced students. My superiors read the papers... misinterpretating these misusings... At work, I was a decorated oppressor. At home I anticipated a vibrant forever. A rainbow of life rising out of this pot of woes. In hell I spotted snow. Right around the time the force retired me, "He's gotten old..." By then, the system was in review. Awards were withdrawn and due process was 'new'. At my retirement we did a blind raid... I think we dragged that poor man too. But when you're an enslaved aid, What's a dog to do? __________________ Ahem.

02-28-2014, 03:07 AM	#3
Certain Mad fucking dangerous. Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 12,072 Battle Record: 40-19 Champed - AOWL Season 3 - Art of Writing League (2x) Rep Power: 85899402	@Verb __________________ I'm just swinging swords strictly based on keyboards, unbalanced like elephants and ants on seesaws.

02-28-2014, 11:36 PM	#4
Verb Junior Member Join Date: Jan 2014 Posts: 8 Battle Record: 0-1 Rep Power: 0	check sorry lol I've been in the hospital