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Old 10-09-2020, 01:56 PM   #1
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Old 10-09-2020, 06:06 PM   #2
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Idfc what we doing
I'd be down for the first ever pic vs. reg battle at this point

Let's just fucking goo

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Hush aka Victor

I'ma shank this goof. 5 foot 2, the boy is nothing
Assume my toys are rusty..they'll go thru his Toys R Us tee
He isn't a catch. He's the only single one at his potlucks
Always gets 'you're Too Short'...fitting, his rap is washed up
Petrified of road rage, dodgy whips and the violence ..
Victor Cruz is around 'cept he's the opposite of a giant
So obv. a drop-top is outta the picture, only basic shit
If he ever buys a convertible, it's a male stripper going atheist
Faggot bitch. Happily spending nights w/ ANY fellow
Irony 101; resembling a Goomba & hitting pipe on every level
Any paycheck you've earned is spent gas, technically
You work for Petrovic and you're the size of his left calf, RIP.
Another small insult. Solid stuff, I'm not close to done ..
Can't counter them if you aren't tall enough to look over one
Might say it's redundant, preschool and approve it never
Might say "I get it, I'm short Bar"...me too, and I do it better
1 quote from ya verse last week? Courteous pal, it stank
Everyone here is ON to you.. you weren't even power ranked
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Old 10-12-2020, 06:39 PM   #5
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u don’t bust guns .. u pretended to be black online to get poppin
Only ammunition u had was n bombs & u had to make an alias to drop em
From Cronus to Hollywood.. convincing urself ur the man at this shit
with all the mental gymnastics it’s no wonder your personalities split
It’s sad u had to pretend to be someone else for a dose of respect
Wanted to be black so bad .. guess playing my shadow was the closest you’d get
Is it landscaping or manscaping?? Bro u gay and friendly
Kobra Kai wasn’t the only ones bringing wax on wax off back for 2020
U out here letting ya queer flag fly for weeks- shotgun leave 100 leaks
Shouldn’t have to tell u to cover up ur chest .. good thing the coroner brung a sheet
That whole style u got is shit ... bitch none of its clever
If I tore u to ribbons each one would be 1st place for worst wordplay ever
“3 ingredients curry” That’s the dumbest shit ever ... it gots to be
Ur bar hangs above a crib yet constantly u the one getting rocked to sleep
& this nigga got tits .. u ain’t a shooter . U never had a 30 palmed
If u let the strap pop on the low u removing ya bra while ya shirt is on
The way u been sucking the upn niggas dicks is a disgrace to ur city
When ppl say they feel your bars the emotion there thinking of is pity
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I'ma shank this goof. 5 foot 2, the boy is nothing
Assume my toys are rusty..they'll go thru his Toys R Us tee
ok i like the opener
He isn't a catch. He's the only single one at his potlucks
Always gets 'you're Too Short'...fitting, his rap is washed up
nice but a too short ref in 2020
Petrified of road rage, dodgy whips and the violence ..
Victor Cruz is around 'cept he's the opposite of a giant
bars
So obv. a drop-top is outta the picture, only basic shit
If he ever buys a convertible, it's a male stripper going atheist
not feelin it
Faggot bitch. Happily spending nights w/ ANY fellow
Irony 101; resembling a Goomba & hitting pipe on every level
lolllll
Any paycheck you've earned is spent gas, technically
You work for Petrovic and you're the size of his left calf, RIP.
idk if this was a personal or nah
Another small insult. Solid stuff, I'm not close to done ..
Can't counter them if you aren't tall enough to look over one
nice
Might say it's redundant, preschool and approve it never
Might say "I get it, I'm short Bar"...me too, and I do it better
cool
1 quote from ya verse last week? Courteous pal, it stank
Everyone here is ON to you.. you weren't even power ranked
again I'm new, not sure of the history

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u don’t bust guns .. u pretended to be black online to get poppin
Only ammunition u had was n bombs & u had to make an alias to drop em
cool
From Cronus to Hollywood.. convincing urself ur the man at this shit
with all the mental gymnastics it’s no wonder your personalities split
I'm assumin these are aliases, nice
It’s sad u had to pretend to be someone else for a dose of respect
Wanted to be black so bad .. guess playing my shadow was the closest you’d get
is hush black?
Is it landscaping or manscaping?? Bro u gay and friendly
Kobra Kai wasn’t the only ones bringing wax on wax off back for 2020
lolzzz
U out here letting ya queer flag fly for weeks- shotgun leave 100 leaks
Shouldn’t have to tell u to cover up ur chest .. good thing the coroner brung a sheet
hard
That whole style u got is shit ... bitch none of its clever
If I tore u to ribbons each one would be 1st place for worst wordplay ever
cool
“3 ingredients curry” That’s the dumbest shit ever ... it gots to be
Ur bar hangs above a crib yet constantly u the one getting rocked to sleep
cool
& this nigga got tits .. u ain’t a shooter . U never had a 30 palmed
If u let the strap pop on the low u removing ya bra while ya shirt is on
dead
The way u been sucking the upn niggas dicks is a disgrace to ur city
When ppl say they feel your bars the emotion there thinking of is pity
feel like it coulda been harder

Fire battle. With my knowledge ima V/Hush.
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Old 10-13-2020, 08:15 AM   #7
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Barcotic:

I'ma shank this goof. 5 foot 2, the boy is nothing
Assume my toys are rusty..they'll go thru his Toys R Us tee

- haha cool wordplay

He isn't a catch. He's the only single one at his potlucks
Always gets 'you're Too Short'...fitting, his rap is washed up

- Ehh

Petrified of road rage, dodgy whips and the violence ..
Victor Cruz is around 'cept he's the opposite of a giant


- cool

So obv. a drop-top is outta the picture, only basic shit
If he ever buys a convertible, it's a male stripper going atheist


- lol, like it. Kind of a general hit though, not too stinging.

Faggot bitch. Happily spending nights w/ ANY fellow
Irony 101; resembling a Goomba & hitting pipe on every level


- Dig the reference.

Any paycheck you've earned is spent gas, technically
You work for Petrovic and you're the size of his left calf, RIP.


- Petro Vic... Damn.

Another small insult. Solid stuff, I'm not close to done ..
Can't counter them if you aren't tall enough to look over one


- Filler, for you.

Might say it's redundant, preschool and approve it never
Might say "I get it, I'm short Bar"...me too, and I do it better

- Nice multi's, clever.

1 quote from ya verse last week? Courteous pal, it stank
Everyone here is ON to you.. you weren't even power ranked


- Loved this closer.


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u don’t bust guns .. u pretended to be black online to get poppin
Only ammunition u had was n bombs & u had to make an alias to drop em

- personal hit, okay.

From Cronus to Hollywood.. convincing urself ur the man at this shit
with all the mental gymnastics it’s no wonder your personalities split

- Very nice.

It’s sad u had to pretend to be someone else for a dose of respect
Wanted to be black so bad .. guess playing my shadow was the closest you’d get


- This was cool, nothing crazy though.

Is it landscaping or manscaping?? Bro u gay and friendly
Kobra Kai wasn’t the only ones bringing wax on wax off back for 2020


- Nah.

U out here letting ya queer flag fly for weeks- shotgun leave 100 leaks
Shouldn’t have to tell u to cover up ur chest .. good thing the coroner brung a sheet


- Meh... too gun bar-ish for my taste.

That whole style u got is shit ... bitch none of its clever
If I tore u to ribbons each one would be 1st place for worst wordplay eve
r

- lol.

“3 ingredients curry” That’s the dumbest shit ever ... it gots to be
Ur bar hangs above a crib yet constantly u the one getting rocked to sleep


- Haha... good flip.

& this nigga got tits .. u ain’t a shooter . U never had a 30 palmed
If u let the strap pop on the low u removing ya bra while ya shirt is on

- Oh man... I hate gun bars but that was creative af.

The way u been sucking the upn niggas dicks is a disgrace to ur city
When ppl say they feel your bars the emotion there thinking of is pity


- Not feeling this closer.

GREAT battle between two of the best going right now. Both of you are witty and got punchlines for days... Hush had the better personal attacks and considering what he dropped in the never-to-be pic battle, this was super impressive... But I think Barc's flow really won it for me here. Everything was crafted to perfection and couple that with his wordplay/punchlines... It was JUST enough for the W, imo.

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Barcotic:
Toys R Us Tee was cool
Too Short was way too on the nose imo
Victor Cruz feels kind of old, but it was decent
Goomba was a fun reference
Petrovic was nice
Tall enough is bleh
Short bar is cool
Closer fell a little flat imo

Hush:
N bombs was cool
Mental gymnastics was nice
Playing shadow was good
Coroner bar was so-so
Kobe’s Kai was okay
Tear to ribbons was dope
Crib was a banger
Strap on the low was dope
Closer was meh

Hush got this with a more consistent verse and harder punches Barc was dope but some of his lines fell super flat short jokes got over killed

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Is it landscaping or manscaping?? Bro u gay and friendly
Kobra Kai wasn’t the only ones bringing wax on wax off back for 2020

bahahaha... people thst don't like that can fuck right off... honestly... couldn't get into Barcotic's verse was too choppy to read...

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Old 10-14-2020, 01:11 AM   #10
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Barcotic was solid all the way through, with a couple of woofs and a couple of really clever and dope lines. My favorite line is prob the goomba one, which had a pretty corny setup but it still worked cuz it's funny. The short bar line also towed that line of being corny and funny but still fell mostly on dope.

Hush killed this though. The being black/my shadow line was dope, wax on/off was dope, rocked to sleep line was really clever, and tore you to ribbons line is vintage shit, so good.

Not sure why I decided to stop by NC and vote on a battle, but I'm glad I did. This was good on both sides, but Hush was on another level.
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This was really close and a solid little battle. Barcotic focused more on multi-syllable end rhymes, which is something I think Hush could improve on. I think the wit level was about even. IMO, Hush had the slight edge in funny/damaging disses. Each had their modestly high points and fairly high floors. Nothing super exceptional, but definitely entertaining.

Hush takes this by a nose.
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I'ma shank this goof. 5 foot 2, the boy is nothing
Assume my toys are rusty..they'll go thru his Toys R Us tee
Lol it works I guess. Most random concept I’ve heard in a while tho
He isn't a catch. He's the only single one at his potlucks
Always gets 'you're Too Short'...fitting, his rap is washed up
Cool
Petrified of road rage, dodgy whips and the violence ..
Victor Cruz is around 'cept he's the opposite of a giant
Dope
So obv. a drop-top is outta the picture, only basic shit
If he ever buys a convertible, it's a male stripper going atheist
Nice
Faggot bitch. Happily spending nights w/ ANY fellow
Irony 101; resembling a Goomba & hitting pipe on every level
Lmao
Any paycheck you've earned is spent gas, technically
You work for Petrovic and you're the size of his left calf, RIP.
is the work for petrovic a personal? I get the concept
Another small insult. Solid stuff, I'm not close to done ..
Can't counter them if you aren't tall enough to look over one
Light but cool
Might say it's redundant, preschool and approve it never
Might say "I get it, I'm short Bar"...me too, and I do it better
Nice
1 quote from ya verse last week? Courteous pal, it stank
Everyone here is ON to you.. you weren't even power ranked
Ehh

u don’t bust guns .. u pretended to be black online to get poppin
Only ammunition u had was n bombs & u had to make an alias to drop em
Cool personal
From Cronus to Hollywood.. convincing urself ur the man at this shit
with all the mental gymnastics it’s no wonder your personalities split
Nice
It’s sad u had to pretend to be someone else for a dose of respect
Wanted to be black so bad .. guess playing my shadow was the closest you’d get
Cool
Is it landscaping or manscaping?? Bro u gay and friendly
Kobra Kai wasn’t the only ones bringing wax on wax off back for 2020
Lol
U out here letting ya queer flag fly for weeks- shotgun leave 100 leaks
Shouldn’t have to tell u to cover up ur chest .. good thing the coroner brung a sheet
Ok
That whole style u got is shit ... bitch none of its clever
If I tore u to ribbons each one would be 1st place for worst wordplay ever
Lmao nice
“3 ingredients curry” That’s the dumbest shit ever ... it gots to be
Ur bar hangs above a crib yet constantly u the one getting rocked to sleep
Nice
& this nigga got tits .. u ain’t a shooter . U never had a 30 palmed
If u let the strap pop on the low u removing ya bra while ya shirt is on
Lmao nice
The way u been sucking the upn niggas dicks is a disgrace to ur city
When ppl say they feel your bars the emotion there thinking of is pity
Decent

I got highlights being victor cruz, short bar and goomba vs mental gymnastics, ribbons, bra

I’d call it a tie but that’s weak so going lotb which was ribbons for me

Vote - Hush. Good showing by both though.
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Hush aka Victor

I'ma shank this goof. 5 foot 2, the boy is nothing
Assume my toys are rusty..they'll go thru his Toys R Us tee
Ok, the wordplay is clever. I don’t love the rhyme with “boy is nothing” and I think the wording could be better.
He isn't a catch. He's the only single one at his potlucks
Always gets 'you're Too Short'...fitting, his rap is washed up
Ok, first “you’re short” punch. Don’t love it.
Petrified of road rage, dodgy whips and the violence ..
Victor Cruz is around 'cept he's the opposite of a giant
This is just ok, pretty simple to me
So obv. a drop-top is outta the picture, only basic shit
If he ever buys a convertible, it's a male stripper going atheist
Is this supposed to be “convert a bull?” If so, it’s terrible. If not, I don’t get it
Faggot bitch. Happily spending nights w/ ANY fellow
Irony 101; resembling a Goomba & hitting pipe on every level
A super Mario punch? Gomba is Italian. I’m not seeing the connection
Any paycheck you've earned is spent gas, technically
You work for Petrovic and you're the size of his left calf, RIP.
Petrol? Nah. You work for petrol? This is a punch in a battle rap?
Another small insult. Solid stuff, I'm not close to done ..
Can't counter them if you aren't tall enough to look over one
Simple, light
Might say it's redundant, preschool and approve it never
Might say "I get it, I'm short Bar"...me too, and I do it better
No
1 quote from ya verse last week? Courteous pal, it stank
Everyone here is ON to you.. you weren't even power ranked
On because like power and on/off switches? This is remedial, barc.
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u don’t bust guns .. u pretended to be black online to get poppin
Only ammunition u had was n bombs & u had to make an alias to drop em
ok
From Cronus to Hollywood.. convincing urself ur the man at this shit
with all the mental gymnastics it’s no wonder your personalities split
Again, ok
It’s sad u had to pretend to be someone else for a dose of respect
Wanted to be black so bad .. guess playing my shadow was the closest you’d get
Light jab
Is it landscaping or manscaping?? Bro u gay and friendly
Kobra Kai wasn’t the only ones bringing wax on wax off back for 2020
Lmao. Brutal
U out here letting ya queer flag fly for weeks- shotgun leave 100 leaks
Shouldn’t have to tell u to cover up ur chest .. good thing the coroner brung a sheet
Hits
That whole style u got is shit ... bitch none of its clever
If I tore u to ribbons each one would be 1st place for worst wordplay ever
Lol. Accurate
“3 ingredients curry” That’s the dumbest shit ever ... it gots to be
Ur bar hangs above a crib yet constantly u the one getting rocked to sleep
Ouch lotb
& this nigga got tits .. u ain’t a shooter . U never had a 30 palmed
If u let the strap pop on the low u removing ya bra while ya shirt is on
Nah
The way u been sucking the upn niggas dicks is a disgrace to ur city
When ppl say they feel your bars the emotion there thinking of is pity
Not feeling
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Goomba LOTB

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Rocked to sleep

Great battle guys. Hush barely got this with one more quotable. Goomba was stupiddddd.


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Barc:

He isn't a catch. He's the only single one at his potlucks
Always gets 'you're Too Short'...fitting, his rap is washed up
Petrified of road rage, dodgy whips and the violence ..
Victor Cruz is around 'cept he's the opposite of a giant
Faggot bitch. Happily spending nights w/ ANY fellow
Irony 101; resembling a Goomba & hitting pipe on every level
Another small insult. Solid stuff, I'm not close to done ..
Can't counter them if you aren't tall enough to look over one

Cool verse, liked Goomba and the counter line. I'm just stating this here to be objective, but Barc, I honestly like your lines more when you drift away from the wordplay. That's just me though, I'm not a wordplay guy. You can write and you have some dope ideas in there and the execution on some is great...i usually wind up just reading the wordplay stuff as complete whiff's though. I say that, and then sometimes you wind up throwing out a crazy WP line i actually fuck with, so, it's whatever I guess lol

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u don’t bust guns .. u pretended to be black online to get poppin
Only ammunition u had was n bombs & u had to make an alias to drop em
It’s sad u had to pretend to be someone else for a dose of respect
Wanted to be black so bad .. guess playing my shadow was the closest you’d get
Is it landscaping or manscaping?? Bro u gay and friendly
Kobra Kai wasn’t the only ones bringing wax on wax off back for 2020
That whole style u got is shit ... bitch none of its clever
If I tore u to ribbons each one would be 1st place for worst wordplay ever

Hush kinda tapered off in the end for me, but went on a soliddddd run up until that point. the rocked to sleep line was hilarious, and a genuine laugh for me. Makes it about even in the quotes, but I think there was just a level of disrespect in hush's verse that made those lines pop more. It's a close battle, really glad this was a spotlight this week. Good show fellas.

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Old 10-15-2020, 03:36 PM   #16
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This is tough choice for me because I enjoyed reading both


I felt like Hush bars more polished compare to Barc

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I'ma shank this goof. 5 foot 2, the boy is nothing
Assume my toys are rusty..they'll go thru his Toys R Us tee
i know there's been a lot of debate over this bar this week... personally i thinks its smooth and cool...i guess 'toys' can be knives
He isn't a catch. He's the only single one at his potlucks
Always gets 'you're Too Short'...fitting, his rap is washed up
pretty cool short punch
Petrified of road rage, dodgy whips and the violence ..
Victor Cruz is around 'cept he's the opposite of a giant
ncie wording on this, it was delivered smoothly, personal touch, dig it
So obv. a drop-top is outta the picture, only basic shit
If he ever buys a convertible, it's a male stripper going atheist
ehh not a fan conceptually
Faggot bitch. Happily spending nights w/ ANY fellow
Irony 101; resembling a Goomba & hitting pipe on every level
lolol this was dope
Any paycheck you've earned is spent gas, technically
You work for Petrovic and you're the size of his left calf, RIP.
ehhh, creative sure but im not a fan of this nameplay
Another small insult. Solid stuff, I'm not close to done ..
Can't counter them if you aren't tall enough to look over one
lol this is jokes
Might say it's redundant, preschool and approve it never
Might say "I get it, I'm short Bar"...me too, and I do it better
i dunno defining yourself as "i'm shortbar" seems weird to me... this was okay
1 quote from ya verse last week? Courteous pal, it stank
Everyone here is ON to you.. you weren't even power ranked
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u don’t bust guns .. u pretended to be black online to get poppin
Only ammunition u had was n bombs & u had to make an alias to drop em
cool personal
From Cronus to Hollywood.. convincing urself ur the man at this shit
with all the mental gymnastics it’s no wonder your personalities split
lol not an overly wowing concept but this hits and was impactful imo
It’s sad u had to pretend to be someone else for a dose of respect
Wanted to be black so bad .. guess playing my shadow was the closest you’d get
i think a more personal setup about you beating him before or something along those lines wouldve made this hit harder... its alright
Is it landscaping or manscaping?? Bro u gay and friendly
Kobra Kai wasn’t the only ones bringing wax on wax off back for 2020
lmao , setup was great to... dope personal this hits
U out here letting ya queer flag fly for weeks- shotgun leave 100 leaks
Shouldn’t have to tell u to cover up ur chest .. good thing the coroner brung a sheet
solid, wording was great
That whole style u got is shit ... bitch none of its clever
If I tore u to ribbons each one would be 1st place for worst wordplay ever
haha funny
“3 ingredients curry” That’s the dumbest shit ever ... it gots to be
Ur bar hangs above a crib yet constantly u the one getting rocked to sleep
fire personal, lotb
& this nigga got tits .. u ain’t a shooter . U never had a 30 palmed
If u let the strap pop on the low u removing ya bra while ya shirt is on
ehh strap/bra plays are ancient af... this is well worded but nah for me
The way u been sucking the upn niggas dicks is a disgrace to ur city
When ppl say they feel your bars the emotion there thinking of is pity
solid bar on the 'feel' angle but only decent



Nice battle guys. I think this is pretty close as both were pretty consistent throughout with just a couple misses or so-so bars throughout.. On the whole i'm giving the edge to hush tho for more sting on the personals and standout bars for both... props to both , best hush verse ive seen in a while

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Old 10-15-2020, 08:24 PM   #18
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wow.. good battle.. when I read barcotic verse I thought he was going to win but hush did his thing and came all the way in here.. I dig his style a lot.. honestly I could break this but it's par on par and almost everything hits on both verses, with equal amount of misses.. for all we know hush had a bunch of personals on barcotic.. that wax on wax off line was pure gold.. on the other hand there is the goomba line from barcotic which was a standout

no hate barcotic but v/ hush..
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Barc: Victor Cruz, Goomba, Counter
Toys r us for idea, some others missed to me bc i didn't like the concept or wordplay (power, petrovic)
The originality was there tho

Hush: rocked to sleep, cobra Kai were my top two faves of the battle + the Hollywood personals plus had some solid jabs in there w/ coroner n ribbons

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Barc

Your last 3 and the opener were highlights for me
Counter
Short bar
Power ranked
These were all cool
Toys r us tee gets a nod as well

Hush

Mental gymnastics
Shadow
Both cool
Rocked to sleep ok
Kobra Kai dope

Based on consistency the edge here goes to hush

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