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WEEK IX: Sammy vs Pinot Grij[PINOT WINS]
Season 8 Verses are due FRIDAY at 11:59 PM EST Voting ends SUNDAY at 11:59 PM EST Verses may not exceed 48 lines or 650 words Voting on 3 battles is required. Topic: http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=126253 @Sammy vs @Pinot Grij Goodluck! Last edited by Inno; 03-12-2018 at 08:27 AM. |
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I can post tonight, but I'm guessing you want an extension
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“Promise”
It lessens the blow by making sense of Confusion Daily entanglements become riddles expressed by Confucius What was nuisance slowly unraveled; I welcome loose end Let me breathe, please...a dream before this story begin Like all story, it begins with dark clouds within view There were efforts to mine silver but I'd choke on the fume Lost with no sails; this world swells; I'm lost in the blues Lost in my thoughts. lost it all; completely lost without you Every Moment, a step closer to the edge of a bridge; Making my long story short, Still i long for a hit Lining up white promises and the promise are kept Promise of bliss; plotting the script: “are u proud of me yet?” Except in this story, she promised me that pops would say “yes” Birds would chirp in ecstasy. Fox plays with fish Thanks to my sweet Snow White...alway promising kisses |
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03-11-2018, 07:36 PM | #9 |
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the confusion dump was nice, slightly grasped it and carried the line.. nuisance slowly unraveled; carried in and dragged through very subtly highly enjoyed it.. a dream before this story begin very impressed "mine silver" deffinetly had color in it white promises and the promise are kept much more past that and it is all the way out of here Thanks to my sweet Snow White...alway promising kisses nice ending.. xoxo good show keep it up
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@Innovator yea sorry, guy basically confirmed he wanted an ext at 5 pm the day AFTER verses were due. I went out and didn't have time to finish my verse. Don't really care anymore now tbh.
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