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Old 05-22-2018, 03:17 AM   #1
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Old 05-22-2018, 06:07 AM   #2
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First things first, fuck the hook off...This whole fortnight kinda night is ehhh to me...I don't feel like text pieces need a chorus, sometimes yeah...shit's great, not here though.

Do your thang tho man, just 'cause I wasn't feelin' this submission doesn't mean I won't like your next bro.

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Thought it was ok. Real cheesy at times. Seen way better from you. That cheesy shit killed it for me. Chester cheetoh ass lookin nikka
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Did this dude just write a text verse about Fortnite?
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Did this dude just write a text verse about Fortnite?
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Thank god my life is better than his
It's notba text verse u stupid it's a fucking song something u probably can't even make.
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It's notba text verse u stupid it's a fucking song something u probably can't even make.
Please post fortnight song plz
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When it's done I will I play pub G too
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Thought it was ok. Real cheesy at times. Seen way better from you. That cheesy shit killed it for me. Chester cheetoh ass lookin nikka
Lmao good looks I switched some shit up
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As soon as I saw there was a hook my sides hurt...I cant scroll back up...
Ill return to this on better terms
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Lmaooo it's a song dick.

U gotta hear it. I'll drop it once it's recorded
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The song actually came out really good guys lol
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Recorded it a long time ago though. Haven't been rapping or writing at all. Life's been hard lately. Just trying to survive this life right now. Just lost my pops shit sucked was the worst thing that's ever happened to me. Made me more mature though and a different type of person.
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