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Old 02-12-2018, 11:35 PM   #1
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Old 02-12-2018, 11:45 PM   #2
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Ima go 12
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Old 02-12-2018, 11:53 PM   #3
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Ok.
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Old 02-17-2018, 02:02 AM   #4
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What are the chances he’ll survive if I get the weapon?
Well the odds will be against you, after I press Nick with the .357
You got a nonviolent swag, man I’m destroying this goof
I don’t care if you’re a saint, nick.. im still bringing the toys to your roof
Throw hands or gunplay? I’ll pass a fist then blast a clip
So you’ll get nailed.. then the nose get sent like a scratch n sniff
I’ll do NBL a favor & take him out. Imma fuckin bag this queen
Cuz duckin u hurts the league, ill make it wayyy better & show up with a Magazine

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Old 02-17-2018, 02:15 AM   #5
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dont drive urself crazy homie watever u droppin u might wanna switch
i know u pullin ur hair out.. its a pretty common move when u fight like a bitch
bro ur rappin is a tragedy but u stay at it which is sorta cool
u still got that textbook flow.. with more holes in it then a florida school
sumone give this cripple the crutches, i mite break my fist sixty ways
u could throw triple the punches.. no ones gonna quote yalls shit anyways
liein bout wat u gon do to me, totin guns like okay thats coo to see
I culd make a movie starrin this chopper n' turn ur body into part 2 & 3
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Old 02-17-2018, 12:05 PM   #6
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What are the chances he’ll survive if I get the weapon?
Well the odds will be against you, after I press Nick with the .357
ok at least that worked sortve
You got a nonviolent swag, man I’m destroying this goof
I don’t care if you’re a saint, nick.. im still bringing the toys to your roof
ok nameplay I guess
Throw hands or gunplay? I’ll pass a fist then blast a clip
So you’ll get nailed.. then the nose get sent like a scratch n sniff
ehh this was played as fuck
I’ll do NBL a favor & take him out. Imma fuckin bag this queen
Cuz duckin u hurts the league, ill make it wayyy better & show up with a Magazine
ok I like this sort've coulda been better though in all honesty

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dont drive urself crazy homie watever u droppin u might wanna switch
i know u pullin ur hair out.. its a pretty common move when u fight like a bitch
ok I liked this
bro ur rappin is a tragedy but u stay at it which is sorta cool
u still got that textbook flow.. with more holes in it then a florida school
ehh didn't enjoy the concept but yeah it worked
sumone give this cripple the crutches, i mite break my fist sixty ways
u could throw triple the punches.. no ones gonna quote yalls shit anyways
nah
liein bout wat u gon do to me, totin guns like okay thats coo to see
I culd make a movie starrin this chopper n' turn ur body into part 2 & 3
ok this wasn't bad

overall: not bad battle coulda been better really... but yeah I think I'm going go with nick james on this one... just my opinion not heavy into all the gunplay bars... just don't think its cool... anyways yeah...

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Old 02-17-2018, 02:41 PM   #7
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Saint Nick was decent. Was t feeling the rest of your verse tho. Plus the overkill on gun bars takes away from the verse imo

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Pulling hair was nice I actually loled
Florida school was decent

I've got nick James taking this one

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Old 02-17-2018, 05:16 PM   #8
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Good read here. Thought the odds line was clever. Saint nick was clever too but the name play itself has been done a million times. The angle was relevant in today's style though. The others were a bit lacklustre. Probably because you haven't battled for a while consistently. Stick around and put some effort in.
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Letterman:

Opener -- seen it, think you used a 357 line better before.
Saint Nick -- Liked the toys to roof tie-in
Didnt like the rest.

Nick James -- hair pull was a good flip
2trip & florida were ok

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Old 02-18-2018, 11:37 AM   #10
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What are the chances he’ll survive if I get the weapon?
Well the odds will be against you, after I press Nick with the .357

Nice...

You got a nonviolent swag, man I’m destroying this goof
I don’t care if you’re a saint, nick.. im still bringing the toys to your roof

Lol I like this..

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dont drive urself crazy homie watever u droppin u might wanna switch
i know u pullin ur hair out.. its a pretty common move when u fight like a bitch

Dope here...

bro ur rappin is a tragedy but u stay at it which is sorta cool
u still got that textbook flow.. with more holes in it then a florida school

Ok...

liein bout wat u gon do to me, totin guns like okay thats coo to see
I culd make a movie starrin this chopper n' turn ur body into part 2 & 3

Flowed well and it was nice to me...

Dope read on both end guys, I'm going with Nick on this by a punch...

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Nick had the opener and closer vs lettermans nose and saint nick but as both lettermans are played concepts id give it to nick. Nicks wording was smoother as well an just came across as if he wasnt goinf as hard as he could, sort of gave off confidence. Letterman isnt bad but just lacked originality for me.

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