WK7: Contenders: Blue Bayou 4-2 vs. Twodrop 4-2 - Blue Bayou WINS!!

[Incredible]

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@Blue Bayou @Twodrop

[Blue Bayou]

in it to win it

14-16

[Twodrop]

in

[Twodrop]

16@Blue Bayou

YO,

Knife tucked when I stroll ya block. License to carry if it gets loud
If u feeling froggy take half off a vet nigga - that's a military discount
In the gym since ur proposal. Still fat now wifey can't take the shit
Ur bride said she'd need MOAB's...& that bomb ended the relationship
No1 cares bout' ya mid-life crisis. Ask 'my little friend' for advice..
Couple shots'll put ur mind to rest it's Ballistic therapy for a price
Bitch a freak n give the best head. Got pics but why this jerk wanna test it
One message could put Blue back on the market like Heisenberg resurrected
Chris Kyle w/ the rifle or grab the pump to make this nerd fly
Give a fuck what he's tripping on...the BANG will open up his third eye
Just got married to the only girl that would put up w/ ur laziness
If she's feeling a little Blue - it's becuase she has to deal with ur baby dick
Zero contribution to any league. I'd rather have Joe Boston back
So I don't want to hear anyy 'lip faggot'... When u just lost to that
Not above politics. I'll take an ez win while ya'll stroke this geek
BET I won't @Incredible for the DQ.. If I don't see 3 Blue votes this week

[Blue Bayou]

didn't know who you were so i went back & woooow..


strapped like a backpack? a buoyancy bar? shit is haunting me yo..
mother'fucker u were a De-feat line away from me not even wanting to show
weak drop after weak drop proves that u suck w/ the flows..
been such a Rough Dispatch for you lately ur about to drive a truck off the road
it's sad really, w/ every drop the stock of this bitch it just plummets..
tries Asbestos he can but any exposure to'em only leaves us sick to our stomachs
who have u beaten?! names prove i'll take this win to the bank..
shit Lenses prolly the biggest & i need hi-tech Glasses to even see him in the ranks
filmed me fuckin ya bitch so hard a pull in my hammy was felt..
& now we're scared of prosecution, cuz we 'Shot XXX' in a Car in Miami as well
she BEGGED for the dick so i beat that pussy up for four days..
no BA but you can still be an Ice Cream Champ.. u got one hell of a Sore-Bae
hasta la vista if he decides he wanna cop gats n brawl..
i got Shotgun Offense, buck shots at his Spine til there's no DropBack at all
wet em up while he’s on a date with a pump in his hood..
the Long-Nose’ll send his Bird Flyin.. then Tucan get dumped in the Woods

[Cereal]

two:
military discount - aite
Ballistic therapy for a price - dope as well but the same thing..

Just got married to the only girl that would put up w/ ur laziness
If she's feeling a little Blue - it's becuase she has to deal with ur baby dick

i actually dug that couplet..

blue:
about to drive a truck off the road - nice but still just aite..
no DropBack at all - tight

most verse meh - but the history references all nice..

vote = twodrop

better smoothed out verse imo - goodluck

[Bongo Bear]

Originally Posted by Twodrop

16@Blue Bayou

YO,

Knife tucked when I stroll ya block. License to carry if it gets loud
If u feeling froggy take half off a vet nigga - that's a military discount

Starting off great. Nice punch. Wording is iffy but that could just be me nitpicking. I still don't think it took that much away from the actual punch though.

In the gym since ur proposal. Still fat now wifey can't take the shit
Ur bride said she'd need MOAB's...& that bomb ended the relationship

Pretty funny.

No1 cares bout' ya mid-life crisis. Ask 'my little friend' for advice..
Couple shots'll put ur mind to rest it's Ballistic therapy for a price

This was light to me. Although it was cohesive I felt like it broke the momentum of the verse.

Bitch a freak n give the best head. Got pics but why this jerk wanna test it
One message could put Blue back on the market like Heisenberg resurrected

I like the concept, I wouldn't call it a reach but, I guess I don't understand what you mean but putting Blue back on the market. I still felt like it was a nice punch regardless.

Chris Kyle w/ the rifle or grab the pump to make this nerd fly
Give a fuck what he's tripping on...the BANG will open up his third eye

Felt like referencing Chris Kyle was just for the sake of multi's which is fine; I think that part could've been improved on. I do like the third eye part though. It was light to me.

Just got married to the only girl that would put up w/ ur laziness
If she's feeling a little Blue - it's becuase she has to deal with ur baby dick

Personally, this was my favorite personal I've read on the site since I've been here. I like this.

Zero contribution to any league. I'd rather have Joe Boston back
So I don't want to hear anyy 'lip faggot'... When u just lost to that
Not above politics. I'll take an ez win while ya'll stroke this geek
BET I won't @Incredible for the DQ.. If I don't see 3 Blue votes this week

This is ok.

didn't know who you were so i went back & woooow..


strapped like a backpack? a buoyancy bar? shit is haunting me yo..
mother'fucker u were a De-feat line away from me not even wanting to show

Good.

weak drop after weak drop proves that u suck w/ the flows..
been such a Rough Dispatch for you lately ur about to drive a truck off the road

I'm not really feeling this. It was light at best.

it's sad really, w/ every drop the stock of this bitch it just plummets..
tries Asbestos he can but any exposure to'em only leaves us sick to our stomachs

This is ok, felt like wording would've went a long way for making this hit harder.

who have u beaten?! names prove i'll take this win to the bank..
shit Lenses prolly the biggest & i need hi-tech Glasses to even see him in the ranks

Like I said, wording would've helped this alot. That being said I felt from here you started to pick up the pace. This line was good.

filmed me fuckin ya bitch so hard a pull in my hammy was felt..
& now we're scared of prosecution, cuz we 'Shot XXX' in a Car in Miami as well

I like this, Only thing I would nitpick on is the wording. Specifically on the multi's

she BEGGED for the dick so i beat that pussy up for four days..
no BA but you can still be an Ice Cream Champ.. u got one hell of a Sore-Bae

Solid

hasta la vista if he decides he wanna cop gats n brawl..
i got Shotgun Offense, buck shots at his Spine til there's no DropBack at all

Didn't like this part that much. It was decent but, the reference and the punch was too far apart for it to really connect.

wet em up while he’s on a date with a pump in his hood..
the Long-Nose’ll send his Bird Flyin.. then Tucan get dumped in the Woods

A decent way to wrap it up, nice punch

My vote had a more consistent verse. Funny, creative, and overall was able to take it because of that. Both battlers did a decent job. This was a interesting read. Thanks.
v/TwoDrop

[DMS]

V/ Blue,
Honestly thought most lines on both sides were at least decent, but the XXX and Tucan lines were def my favorites.

[GUDELJ]

Knife tucked when I stroll ya block. License to carry if it gets loud
If u feeling froggy take half off a vet nigga - that's a military discount
this was cool
In the gym since ur proposal. Still fat now wifey can't take the shit
Ur bride said she'd need MOAB's...& that bomb ended the relationship
decent at best
No1 cares bout' ya mid-life crisis. Ask 'my little friend' for advice..
Couple shots'll put ur mind to rest it's Ballistic therapy for a price
i read this a few times and it got better after each line. Nice line
Bitch a freak n give the best head. Got pics but why this jerk wanna test it
One message could put Blue back on the market like Heisenberg resurrected
wtf good again lol I’m impressed at this point
Chris Kyle w/ the rifle or grab the pump to make this nerd fly
Give a fuck what he's tripping on...the BANG will open up his third eye
alright cool
Just got married to the only girl that would put up w/ ur laziness
If she's feeling a little Blue - it's becuase she has to deal with ur baby dick
setup could have been different to make the bar better. Decent here
Zero contribution to any league. I'd rather have Joe Boston back
So I don't want to hear anyy 'lip faggot'... When u just lost to that
lol wasn’t feelin this
Not above politics. I'll take an ez win while ya'll stroke this geek
BET I won't @Incredible for the DQ.. If I don't see 3 Blue votes this week
nooo

Vs


strapped like a backpack? a buoyancy bar? shit is haunting me yo..
mother'fucker u were a De-feat line away from me not even wanting to show
tbh I really don’t get this
weak drop after weak drop proves that u suck w/ the flows..
been such a Rough Dispatch for you lately ur about to drive a truck off the road
ok
it's sad really, w/ every drop the stock of this bitch it just plummets..
tries Asbestos he can but any exposure to'em only leaves us sick to our stomachs
this was solid
who have u beaten?! names prove i'll take this win to the bank..
shit Lenses prolly the biggest & i need hi-tech Glasses to even see him in the ranks
lol dope
filmed me fuckin ya bitch so hard a pull in my hammy was felt..
& now we're scared of prosecution, cuz we 'Shot XXX' in a Car in Miami as well
dope again
she BEGGED for the dick so i beat that pussy up for four days..
no BA but you can still be an Ice Cream Champ.. u got one hell of a Sore-Bae
ehh decent at best
hasta la vista if he decides he wanna cop gats n brawl..
i got Shotgun Offense, buck shots at his Spine til there's no DropBack at all
pretty cool
wet em up while he’s on a date with a pump in his hood..
the Long-Nose’ll send his Bird Flyin.. then Tucan get dumped in the Woods
played bro


Twodrop:
4 good
2 Decent
2 misses


Blue:
4 good
1 ok
1 Decent
2 misses



This was a good ass battle and A LOT closer than I expected. I expected a blow out from blue tbh and I’m surprised at how good twodrop posted. This is by far the best verse from Twodrop I’ve seen yet, good shit. Blue came with some good wordplays and connected well. Shit lenses was probably LOTB for me. Extremely close but I have blue edging it out.

Vote Blue Bayou

[DynamiCz]

Knife tucked when I stroll ya block. License to carry if it gets loud
If u feeling froggy take half off a vet nigga - that's a military discount

Nice opener!

In the gym since ur proposal. Still fat now wifey can't take the shit
Ur bride said she'd need MOAB's...& that bomb ended the relationship

Coo here

No1 cares bout' ya mid-life crisis. Ask 'my little friend' for advice..
Couple shots'll put ur mind to rest it's Ballistic therapy for a price

Nice

Bitch a freak n give the best head. Got pics but why this jerk wanna test it
One message could put Blue back on the market like Heisenberg resurrected

I like this

Chris Kyle w/ the rifle or grab the pump to make this nerd fly
Give a fuck what he's tripping on...the BANG will open up his third eye

Nahhh

Just got married to the only girl that would put up w/ ur laziness
If she's feeling a little Blue - it's becuase she has to deal with ur baby dick

Lol funny

Zero contribution to any league. I'd rather have Joe Boston back
So I don't want to hear anyy 'lip faggot'... When u just lost to that

Ok jab here

Not above politics. I'll take an ez win while ya'll stroke this geek
BET I won't @Incredible for the DQ.. If I don't see 3 Blue votes this week

Lol coo closer

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strapped like a backpack? a buoyancy bar? shit is haunting me yo..
mother'fucker u were a De-feat line away from me not even wanting to show

Cant really get with this one

weak drop after weak drop proves that u suck w/ the flows..
been such a Rough Dispatch for you lately ur about to drive a truck off the road

This was cool here

it's sad really, w/ every drop the stock of this bitch it just plummets..
tries Asbestos he can but any exposure to'em only leaves us sick to our stomachs

Ok

who have u beaten?! names prove i'll take this win to the bank..
shit Lenses prolly the biggest & i need hi-tech Glasses to even see him in the ranks


Coo jab here

filmed me fuckin ya bitch so hard a pull in my hammy was felt..
& now we're scared of prosecution, cuz we 'Shot XXX' in a Car in Miami as well

Nasty punch right here

she BEGGED for the dick so i beat that pussy up for four days..
no BA but you can still be an Ice Cream Champ.. u got one hell of a Sore-Bae

Nahhh

hasta la vista if he decides he wanna cop gats n brawl..
i got Shotgun Offense, buck shots at his Spine til there's no DropBack at all

Niceee

wet em up while he’s on a date with a pump in his hood..
the Long-Nose’ll send his Bird Flyin.. then Tucan get dumped in the Woods

Seen this used, but wording was ok still here

Damn, props to both this was a good read on both ends. Twodrop def stepped it up this week for blue. Read this battle 3 times...

Crucial jabs--

Knife tucked when I stroll ya block. License to carry if it gets loud
If u feeling froggy take half off a vet nigga - that's a military discount
Bitch a freak n give the best head. Got pics but why this jerk wanna test it
One message could put Blue back on the market like Heisenberg resurrected

vs

who have u beaten?! names prove i'll take this win to the bank..
shit Lenses prolly the biggest & i need hi-tech Glasses to even see him in the ranks
filmed me fuckin ya bitch so hard a pull in my hammy was felt..
& now we're scared of prosecution, cuz we 'Shot XXX' in a Car in Miami as well
hasta la vista if he decides he wanna cop gats n brawl..
i got Shotgun Offense, buck shots at his Spine til there's no DropBack at all


I got Blue by a sting here! Good battle fellas

V-Blue

[Jabari Black]

Knife tucked when I stroll ya block. License to carry if it gets loud
If u feeling froggy take half off a vet nigga - that's a military discount

(This would have been dope but this has been done before. Gotta count this as a miss)

In the gym since ur proposal. Still fat now wifey can't take the shit
Ur bride said she'd need MOAB's...& that bomb ended the relationship

(Hmmm this was okay. The personal touch was good. The ‘she said she’d need more abs’ is awkward to me. I’m kinda nitpicky when it comes to uses phrases that don’t sound natural. Concept just seemed a bit odd. The wp checks out though so it wasn’t a miss - just okay)

No1 cares bout' ya mid-life crisis. Ask 'my little friend' for advice..
Couple shots'll put ur mind to rest it's Ballistic therapy for a price

(I like where you’re going but I don’t think there was enough to ‘ballistic therapy’ into the punch. Might have been different if ballistic therapy was like a form of therapy but it isn’t to my understanding. Also, idk if it was intentional or not, but I do like that ‘ballistic’ loosely ties back to the last punch. Little subtleties like that are dope. Overall, miss to okay though)

Bitch a freak n give the best head. Got pics but why this jerk wanna test it
One message could put Blue back on the market like Heisenberg resurrected

(Ha! This is dope! ‘Blue back on the market’ is a clever concept. Only critique is the idk if ‘Heisenberg resurrected’ was the best way to end the punch - specifically the “resurrected” part. Dope line though)

Chris Kyle w/ the rifle or grab the pump to make this nerd fly
Give a fuck what he's tripping on...the BANG will open up his third eye

(This was okay. I like the concept. There needs to be a stronger tie in to ‘open up third eye’. It’s one of those things where you won’t typically associate third eye with a drug trip, but then you’re like “ehh I guess it works”. Imo needed a bit more to push it over as a dope bar. Okay)

Just got married to the only girl that would put up w/ ur laziness
If she's feeling a little Blue - it's becuase she has to deal with ur baby dick

(Feeling Blue is a really played concept so you’re going to have to say something crazy for a feeling blue line to hit. Unfortunately, this one wasn’t crazy enough for it to get a pass imo)

Zero contribution to any league. I'd rather have Joe Boston back
So I don't want to hear anyy 'lip faggot'... When u just lost to that

(Lol this is funny but the execution to the punch was off. Rather have joe Boston back is funny to me too)

Not above politics. I'll take an ez win while ya'll stroke this geek
BET I won't @Incredible for the DQ.. If I don't see 3 Blue votes this week

(LMAOOOO this is funny af! You prob threw people off by wording it “Bet I won’t...” but that’s how niggas talk where I’m from so I heard you loud and clear. But yeah wording coulda been cleaner but this so funny)




strapped like a backpack? a buoyancy bar? shit is haunting me yo..
mother'fucker u were a De-feat line away from me not even wanting to show

(Ha! I’m feeling this as a opener - this was funny and true)

weak drop after weak drop proves that u suck w/ the flows..
been such a Rough Dispatch for you lately ur about to drive a truck off the road

(Didn’t care for this. The wp works fine but it seemed forced because you wouldn’t typically say someone has a “rough diss patch”.)

it's sad really, w/ every drop the stock of this bitch it just plummets..
tries Asbestos he can but any exposure to'em only leaves us sick to our stomachs

(This was cool. Wp checks out. Wasn’t off the wall crazy but I think it’s a punch landed. Your wording is very crisp and I think it can elevate what would otherwise not be a great concept)

who have u beaten?! names prove i'll take this win to the bank..
shit Lenses prolly the biggest & i need hi-tech Glasses to even see him in the ranks

(This was good. The concept is clever - the word play was good, and everything tied in together well)

filmed me fuckin ya bitch so hard a pull in my hammy was felt..
& now we're scared of prosecution, cuz we 'Shot XXX' in a Car in Miami as well

(This was pretty dope. This is a good current event flip)

she BEGGED for the dick so i beat that pussy up for four days..
no BA but you can still be an Ice Cream Champ.. u got one hell of a Sore-Bae

(This was okay. The Sorbet wp came off smooth. Unless ice cream champ has some meaning I’m missing, it seems forced in there as a tie in. Once again wording is crisp though)

hasta la vista if he decides he wanna cop gats n brawl..
i got Shotgun Offense, buck shots at his Spine til there's no DropBack at all

(Pretty good. Concept is very nice and I like the name flip. Once again though, you wouldn’t use the phrase “til there’s no (persons name) back” so I think that takes away from the bar. The line was good despite that though)

wet em up while he’s on a date with a pump in his hood..
the Long-Nose’ll send his Bird Flyin.. then Tucan get dumped in the Woods

(Somewhere between ehh and okay. Long nose / Tucan concept wasn’t fresh. Also the wp isn’t that clean when said out loud.)


I think this experience difference showed in this battle. As far as concepts, y’all are where neck and neck, but Blue’s wording was very crisp while I think Two fumbled some of his punches. For that reason, Blue’s verse just came off as more consistent and he was able to take the battle because of it.

Two you almost there bro and bout to start being a problem for niggas. I feel like your flaw has been you’ve been using safe and sometimes played concepts but that wasn’t really the case here. Now you just gotta clean up the wording - but you’ll get there. Good showing.

Mvgt Blue