Defiant vs DMVsToneB - Defiant Wins

[Orc]

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@DMVsToneB @Defiant

[DMVsToneB]

Sup

[Defiant]

Yo 10

[DMVsToneB]

Check my resume fraud, dem savage nights, you aint half as nice
If you n ya bitch on that frank Lucas tip, you can Joyner in the afterlife
^^ Thats grown man shit, s' consequence paired with gluttony
Def' keep actin that agency im liable to office group of company
I smoke kush on a starcraft, quit playin nigga save the games
Cuz yea Im sure you got some heat but we dont micro-wave the same
Face it bro, you've been sheltered, isolated, confined..
If Def' was ever chillin in the cut.. he got butted in lunchline
Defiant, Romo & Cousins.. that trio falls apart like loose blunts
Cuz stats wise he mayb top 5 but manual always lose in the clutch

... 10

[Orc]

@Defiant do not make me ban you

[DMVsToneB]

Originally Posted by Orc

@Defiant do not make me ban you

and don't make me waste a verse =/

[Defiant]

Aka Tony B



back to basics forcefully..... today is the date your behind
punch so many brain cells outta u, u can call it a great weight off your mind
involved in so many bitch fights, no fool will ever quote ya
there's so many tears when the purse split.....hed be a terrible boxing promoter
Ya girls gives head to 10s at a time, when u arrive u hit
Such a line up for a turn a DMVs, it resembles gettin a driver's permit
Ya sexuality is questionable....i can see it in ya fuckin face G
When the only thing a date with Tony awards.....is a night with Kevin Spacey
Checked ya audios out, n there's no money from the start B
even said theyd be 'free for all' n just got muted from a call of duty party

[Inno]

Check my resume fraud, dem savage nights, you aint half as nice
If you n ya bitch on that frank Lucas tip, you can Joyner in the afterlife

Cool opener but Lucas is the only connection to Frank, I mean it falls apart

^^ Thats grown man shit, s' consequence paired with gluttony
Def' keep actin that agency im liable to office group of company

Not feeling the wordplay

I smoke kush on a starcraft, quit playin nigga save the games
Cuz yea Im sure you got some heat but we dont micro-wave the same

Decent

Face it bro, you've been sheltered, isolated, confined..
If Def' was ever chillin in the cut.. he got butted in lunchline

Ok
Defiant, Romo & Cousins.. that trio falls apart like loose blunts
Cuz stats wise he mayb top 5 but manual always lose in the clutch

Not feeling this closer

Aka Tony B



back to basics forcefully..... today is the date your behind
punch so many brain cells outta u, u can call it a great weight off your mind

Clever opener

involved in so many bitch fights, no fool will ever quote ya
there's so many tears when the purse split.....hed be a terrible boxing promoter

This was a stretch, quote yah, promoter nah

Ya girls gives head to 10s at a time, when u arrive u hit
Such a line up for a turn a DMVs, it resembles gettin a driver's permit

Honestly I didn’t get this

Ya sexuality is questionable....i can see it in ya fuckin face G
When the only thing a date with Tony awards.....is a night with Kevin Spacey

Lol this was cool

Checked ya audios out, n there's no money from the start B
even said theyd be 'free for all' n just got muted from a call of duty party

Nice closer

Yeah I don’t wtf DMS was talking bout. All of his punches where on the cusp but honestly most was just corny. WE DONT MIROWAVE THE SAME? Nah defiant was a little more constistant with the punches and overall wrote a better verse. I got DEFIANT

[Ghost1]

Originally Posted by DMVsToneB

Check my resume fraud, dem savage nights, you aint half as nice
If you n ya bitch on that frank Lucas tip, you can Joyner in the afterlife

why did u muddle this concept by adding frank lucas ? should've just stuck to ur joyner lucas flip here....minus that this was okish

^^ Thats grown man shit, s' consequence paired with gluttony
Def' keep actin that agency im liable to office group of company

hm...borderline trying to do too much with the double wordplay but I think u made this actually work...this was pretty good

I smoke kush on a starcraft, quit playin nigga save the games
Cuz yea Im sure you got some heat but we dont micro-wave the same

nah

Face it bro, you've been sheltered, isolated, confined..
If Def' was ever chillin in the cut.. he got butted in lunchline

wack

Defiant, Romo & Cousins.. that trio falls apart like loose blunts
Cuz stats wise he mayb top 5 but manual always lose in the clutch

when was kirk cousins rated top 5 anything LOL....also I get bored of seeing word plays repeatedly in verses...this bar was dece mechanically but ultimately boring


... 10

Originally Posted by Defiant

Aka Tony B



back to basics forcefully..... today is the date your behind
punch so many brain cells outta u, u can call it a great weight off your mind

lol I like this

involved in so many bitch fights, no fool will ever quote ya
there's so many tears when the purse split.....hed be a terrible boxing promoter

this is a cool concept but execution was off for me

Ya girls gives head to 10s at a time, when u arrive u hit
Such a line up for a turn a DMVs, it resembles gettin a driver's permit

wording off ... concept ok if not obvious

Ya sexuality is questionable....i can see it in ya fuckin face G
When the only thing a date with Tony awards.....is a night with Kevin Spacey

lmao ok

Checked ya audios out, n there's no money from the start B
even said theyd be 'free for all' n just got muted from a call of duty party

jesus the laziness on the end rhyme of this is infuriating lol. punch wasn't anything crazy regardless.

lot of misses in this one for me, dmv had the better heavy hitters and his misses seemed better....I could see myself voting the other way on a different day but right now Im leaning towards dmv

v dmv

[Habitat]

Check my resume fraud, dem savage nights, you aint half as nice
If you n ya bitch on that frank Lucas tip, you can Joyner in the afterlife
-maybe if frank and lucas were related this would work better.
^^ Thats grown man shit, s' consequence paired with gluttony
Def' keep actin that agency im liable to office group of company
-i get what ur goin for.. but how are u tying this in? what age should he "def" be actin? u didn't mention an age other than saying killing bitches is grown man shit. and what is his group of company? you just threw a bunch of shit together and ruined some decent wordplay. you gotta work on execution of ur wordplay homie
I smoke kush on a starcraft, quit playin nigga save the games
Cuz yea Im sure you got some heat but we dont micro-wave the same
-not feelin this
Face it bro, you've been sheltered, isolated, confined..
If Def' was ever chillin in the cut.. he got butted in lunchline
-nah fam
Defiant, Romo & Cousins.. that trio falls apart like loose blunts
Cuz stats wise he mayb top 5 but manual always lose in the clutch
ill give a jab here. i dont like how ur executing ur wordplay tho

vs

back to basics forcefully..... today is the date your behind
punch so many brain cells outta u, u can call it a great weight off your mind
-this is pretty basic
involved in so many bitch fights, no fool will ever quote ya
there's so many tears when the purse split.....hed be a terrible boxing promoter
-not feelin this
Ya girls gives head to 10s at a time, when u arrive u hit
Such a line up for a turn a DMVs, it resembles gettin a driver's permit
-ill give jab. coulda been worded better
Ya sexuality is questionable....i can see it in ya fuckin face G
When the only thing a date with Tony awards.....is a night with Kevin Spacey
this is decent
Checked ya audios out, n there's no money from the start B
even said theyd be 'free for all' n just got muted from a call of duty party
not feelin this

I've got defiant by a cunt hair. The tony awards punch was the turning point for me.

v-Defiant

[BROKE LESNAR]

Originally Posted by Defiant

Aka Tony B



back to basics forcefully..... today is the date your behind
punch so many brain cells outta u, u can call it a great weight off your mind

nah

involved in so many bitch fights, no fool will ever quote ya
there's so many tears when the purse split.....hed be a terrible boxing promoter

nah

Ya girls gives head to 10s at a time, when u arrive u hit
Such a line up for a turn a DMVs, it resembles gettin a driver's permit

cool

Ya sexuality is questionable....i can see it in ya fuckin face G
When the only thing a date with Tony awards.....is a night with Kevin Spacey

nah

Checked ya audios out, n there's no money from the start B
even said theyd be 'free for all' n just got muted from a call of duty party

cool

Originally Posted by DMVsToneB

Check my resume fraud, dem savage nights, you aint half as nice
If you n ya bitch on that frank Lucas tip, you can Joyner in the afterlife

nah

^^ Thats grown man shit, s' consequence paired with gluttony
Def' keep actin that agency im liable to office group of company

agency cool, office played

I smoke kush on a starcraft, quit playin nigga save the games
Cuz yea Im sure you got some heat but we dont micro-wave the same

nah

Face it bro, you've been sheltered, isolated, confined..
If Def' was ever chillin in the cut.. he got butted in lunchline

nah

Defiant, Romo & Cousins.. that trio falls apart like loose blunts
Cuz stats wise he mayb top 5 but manual always lose in the clutch

nah

... 10

Defiant barely took this. But DMV was bad.

v-Defiant

[Allen Knight]

Check my resume fraud, dem savage nights, you aint half as nice
If you n ya bitch on that frank Lucas tip, you can Joyner in the afterlife
^^^dope opener
^^ Thats grown man shit, s' consequence paired with gluttony
Def' keep actin that agency im liable to office group of company
^^^ ok
I smoke kush on a starcraft, quit playin nigga save the games
Cuz yea Im sure you got some heat but we dont micro-wave the same
^^^nahh
Face it bro, you've been sheltered, isolated, confined..
If Def' was ever chillin in the cut.. he got butted in lunchline
^^^nah
Defiant, Romo & Cousins.. that trio falls apart like loose blunts
Cuz stats wise he mayb top 5 but manual always lose in the clutch
^^^i liked this

Vs

back to basics forcefully..... today is the date your behind
punch so many brain cells outta u, u can call it a great weight off your mind
^^^Ehh
involved in so many bitch fights, no fool will ever quote ya
there's so many tears when the purse split.....hed be a terrible boxing promoter
^^^LOL
Ya girls gives head to 10s at a time, when u arrive u hit
Such a line up for a turn a DMVs, it resembles gettin a driver's permit
^^^decent
Ya sexuality is questionable....i can see it in ya fuckin face G
When the only thing a date with Tony awards.....is a night with Kevin Spacey
^^^lol funny
Checked ya audios out, n there's no money from the start B
even said theyd be 'free for all' n just got muted from a call of duty party
^^^good personal

V/def, i thought this was a solid lil battle tbh, both had some cool shit
i thought def was a lil more consistent. props to both.

[For Battling]

Check my resume fraud, dem savage nights, you aint half as nice
If you n ya bitch on that frank Lucas tip, you can Joyner in the afterlife
alright, the problem here is that you’re relying solely on the Joyner (Lucas) wordplay to make this bar whole, because the whole frank Lucas thing takes away from the outcome here. For what it is though, the line isn’t bad at all
^^ Thats grown man shit, s' consequence paired with gluttony
Def' keep actin that agency im liable to office group of company
office wp is played, decent punch at best
I smoke kush on a starcraft, quit playin nigga save the games
Cuz yea Im sure you got some heat but we dont micro-wave the same
this is a no
Face it bro, you've been sheltered, isolated, confined..
If Def' was ever chillin in the cut.. he got butted in lunch line
nah
Defiant, Romo & Cousins.. that trio falls apart like loose blunts
Cuz stats wise he mayb top 5 but manual always lose in the clutch
manual is another wp that’s basic & played sir, just think about it, any wp that is even remotely basic such as manual has for sure been done & flipped a ton of times.

Tony: You have the right idea, your wording is pretty good and you aren’t throwing complete misses or anything, just gotta work on being more creative with your concepts & if wordplay is your thing then you have to think of more original shit.


Vs



back to basics forcefully..... today is the date your behind
punch so many brain cells outta u, u can call it a great weight off your mind
decent
involved in so many bitch fights, no fool will ever quote ya
there's so many tears when the purse split.....hed be a terrible boxing promoter
lol I liked this
Ya girls gives head to 10s at a time, when u arrive u hit
Such a line up for a turn a DMVs, it resembles gettin a driver's permit
could have been better, execution was poor
Ya sexuality is questionable....i can see it in ya fuckin face G
When the only thing a date with Tony awards.....is a night with Kevin Spacey
decent
Checked ya audios out, n there's no money from the start B
even said theyd be 'free for all' n just got muted from a call of duty party
this is a no

Defiant: Your verse was better in the sense that you had more creativeness and your hits were better than Tony’s. Your misses were pretty bad and you could work on consistency but you had a decent showing

VOTE: Defiant

[ill nik-A]

DMV was horrible. Def was more consistent on the attack

I got def

[Alvin Karpis]

Cracks me up how people can critique so strongly and not be very good, Defiant got this with some good concepts, clear winner

[Victor.]

Originally Posted by DMVsToneB

Check my resume fraud, dem savage nights, you aint half as nice
If you n ya bitch on that frank Lucas tip, you can Joyner in the afterlife
...makes no sense
^^ Thats grown man shit, s' consequence paired with gluttony
Def' keep actin that agency im liable to office group of company
...what?
I smoke kush on a starcraft, quit playin nigga save the games
Cuz yea Im sure you got some heat but we dont micro-wave the same
...what ?
Face it bro, you've been sheltered, isolated, confined..
If Def' was ever chillin in the cut.. he got butted in lunch-line
....wtf
Defiant, Romo & Cousins.. that trio falls apart like loose blunts
Cuz stats wise he mayb top 5 but manual always lose in the clutch
...eh u tried

... 10

Originally Posted by Defiant

Aka Tony B



back to basics forcefully..... today is the date your behind
punch so many brain cells outta u, u can call it a great weight off your mind
...nah
involved in so many bitch fights, no fool will ever quote ya
there's so many tears when the purse split.....hed be a terrible boxing promoter
...ehhh almost
Ya girls gives head to 10s at a time, when u arrive u hit
Such a line up for a turn a DMVs, it resembles gettin a driver's permit
....bad wording
Ya sexuality is questionable....i can see it in ya fuckin face G
When the only thing a date with Tony awards.....is a night with Kevin Spacey
...:ok
Checked ya audios out, n there's no money from the start B
even said theyd be 'free for all' n just got muted from a call of duty party

Def got it

[Kill Spree]

Only felt tones opener tho it was all over the place.. bunch of wordplay with weak connections

Def had dmv line.. Tony award and closer was decent

Vote def

[Mr. J]

I dont know why microwave the same is killing me right now but that verse was mad gibberish..
and I should know
...


I got Defiant winning this based off of the Kevin Spacey drop.
that closer though....ugh