04-09-2019, 10:27 AM | #1 |
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LR WK 4 {C}: BodySnatcher Vs Infiltrate - Inf wins
LIGHTNING ROUND Bars due ASAP THIS CLOSES IN 24HRS VOTING WILL GO A FEW HRS LONGER @BodySnatcher @infiltrate |
04-09-2019, 12:47 PM | #2 |
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This man acts like a child. He’ll say I came ‘n fired w/ tha can
Nope! Rifle loaded & after I put a ‘bolt to his chest’...I’ll say his outfit was inspired by Shazam
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04-10-2019, 01:19 AM | #3 |
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this dudes gettin stretched, put holes in body & natures doin the rest..
I'll bring that Kayan then let it 'ring at his neck'.. in Burma that's a beautiful death |
04-10-2019, 05:01 AM | #4 |
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Body- decent current event joint. I liked the bolt/shazam reference but the bar as a whole underwhelmed me.
Dregs- this was good. Fresh wp for me. The burma angle was slick too. Vote- dregs |
04-10-2019, 01:43 PM | #5 |
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Body bar was a body bar. Sometimes I feel he can play it real safe w.the wording & how he comes across. Bar was decent & he def can give you a full verse full of decent bars w.out any duds.
Personally I would've found a way to tell out shazam to tie it 8n w.the bar, but some mfers might find it corny w.that approach. So do you. Infiltrate bar was cool. His creativity usually carries him for me as the hit doesn't seem as aggressive w.that. but it works for me imo. I like the bar. The tie in was cool. Edit: read again, I missed the tie in on body. Mvgt Body Cool battle Last edited by Suthaveli; 04-10-2019 at 03:55 PM. |
04-11-2019, 01:51 AM | #6 |
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It's not aggressive enough Body, I get the image is implied but in a 1-2 battle you gotta use all the room you have to work with. The wording is literally you'll say his outfit is inspired by shazam and that's not really a diss. That's not a big a problem as I'm making it out to be but it's my problem here. Decent bar regardless.
Inf it's somewhat similar in your case but you did more to tie everything together imo ring at his neck was cool and the setup was effective which is more important in these 2 line battles. Inf |
04-11-2019, 01:00 PM | #7 |
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V/Inf... both had good bars but I liked Infs concept alil more. Felt fresh
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04-11-2019, 02:20 PM | #8 |
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I got Dregs here... I just felt it was more creative... the Shazam take almost felt like a foregone conclusion.
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04-11-2019, 03:25 PM | #9 |
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Dregs got this with the freshness.. liked both punches tho tbh
v/Dregs |
04-12-2019, 10:17 AM | #10 |
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5-1 inf wins
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