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Old 04-01-2019, 05:37 PM   #1
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Old 04-01-2019, 06:46 PM   #2
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Old 04-02-2019, 07:53 PM   #4
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have so much shit streamin from u, I'll get charged for murder and exceeding my bandwidth
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Old 04-04-2019, 09:52 PM   #5
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Get medivac'd fast. I'll WIN in a slaughter.. this nerd is a goner
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Old 04-07-2019, 10:54 AM   #6
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stream/bandwidth is old af, ok flip
wp was ehh but also using stat as a double meaning gave it another layer for me

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Old 04-07-2019, 11:09 AM   #7
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This battle dope af to me.

Chyeahhh this punch is fire. So the “shit streaming” flip is dope to me. You set it up very well with the blood piss and spit part. What really elevated this though is that the “I’ll get charged with” has a double meaning and plays in to murder and bandwidth part of the punch. No real critique man, that’s very clean writing.

Inf, bar was dope too. Helipad stats wordplay was slick af to me. Flow/rhyme pattern was good to me too. Only critique I have is you probably should have set up the stat pad part of the punch better. I know you have emphasis on “WIN” but I think you maybe shoulda alluded to a record or something a little bit more.

Overall dope battle. I rarely say this, but this one comes down to preference. Inf’s punch had that heavy punch feel cus it had be standout wordplay. Chyeahhh’s punch had slightly less of a haymaker feel but the writing was damn near perfect. I got this one razor tight but I got Chyeahhh edging this one.

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Old 04-07-2019, 11:16 AM   #8
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i'm feeling Infs bar more here. streaming was a cool flip but helipad connected and was fresh to me.

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Old 04-07-2019, 12:12 PM   #9
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chyeah pretty simple but cool tie ins
inf ok wp but not as hard hitting tbh

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Old 04-07-2019, 12:55 PM   #10
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Yeah helipad was a fresh one here, and the wording made it land rather effectively.

Streaming was played wit clean wording

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Chyeahs isn’t a super fresh concept but worded better imo. Inf was cool just was choppy to read since helipad stats aren’t really a thing. Like maybe someone would tell someone helipad dimensions? Or neither because they’re just made to house helicopters?

Toss up but I got chyeahh just struggling justifying the wording on infs but it was a dope concept. Irks me in a way hens bar against me when he robbed me used tampon stats as a tie on which was fucking retarded.
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Old 04-07-2019, 04:18 PM   #12
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This is nice, wording a bit stretched in places, but this still hit just right for me. The bandwidth concept is kinda played, but u executed nice


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Wooo, this shit was fiya once u really understood the breakdowns of the wordplay. Good shit Inf


No real critiques to any of you, both came with fiya here, but if I have to pick I'm going with Inf. It was fresh and the wordplay was flawless imo. Props to both

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Old 04-07-2019, 06:15 PM   #13
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Both these were very solid in my opinion. Both were creative, both were witty....I think I'm going to give the edge to inf just outta personal preference
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Old 04-07-2019, 07:09 PM   #14
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Cool one here I liked how chyeah flipped an older concept, never seen it like that. Inf was cool too just don't think it connected like chyeahs did. Vote = Chyeah
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another dope one here, just down to personal preference and i felt chyeah's more, thought the double entendre was dope
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This is close but got to go inf for at least being original

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Unoriginal wp but good execution
Original wp but lackluster execution

It could really go either way, but I don't think Inf's punch really hit for me, while Chyeahhh had a decent hit, mechanically

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Old 04-08-2019, 07:43 AM   #18
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I liked Chyeahhh bar this week just felt inf had the harder punch. Think he edges it
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Old 04-08-2019, 09:06 AM   #19
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inf broken English an shit wording fucked up what could have been a meh bar. chyeaahh was pretty eh also but it was a little fresher and worded better...though not well lol.

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Vote cheahhh, mostly because it took me a hell of a while to click to Infs an whilst that was cool because of its creativity it took a way from it. It was right regardless. Good shit fellas

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