08-28-2014, 10:45 PM | #1 |
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Dagels goodbye letter to RB. (Poem)
The Leaving
Last Piece By: Ghost Element Leaving no note or a suitable sign of exiting the house. Creeping through the rooms like the sneaking of a modern day mouse. Seizing to say goodbye to my spouse, opening the door slowly to be sure that this is what I want. Thinking to myself like a note to self whether or not I am truly done. Realizing that there is always a time where you just have to run. Turning the handle counterclockwise, tightly closing my heavy eyes. Taking a quick look back at the family that raised me, then wiping away the tears before they stick and dry. This is the start of a new life, and I must be strong and stay loyal to my own decision. For if I stopped to listen, I'd know that I am not one to be the person that would be worth missing. As I take my first step out of the house, the atmosphere falls down on me heavier then ever expected. But this is the new life I’ve selected, so this is the decision that must be respected. Packing my clothes and belongings in two bags, one on my back and another in my free hand. Now I stand here alone, standing as a fourteen year old and a free man. I know for a fact that no body will remember my name, I never made an accomplishment. Causing nothing but trouble so I grant myself a punishment. By leaving the one place where I could speak free and moving on too a world where I have to earn the right too even eat. Maybe I am wrong about this choice ..but this is my leaving. Goodbye Rap battles. |
08-28-2014, 10:46 PM | #2 |
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formatting something like this when it makes no sense to format it like this is stupid.
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08-28-2014, 10:52 PM | #3 |
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To his credit im sure he was an emotional wreck when he wrote this
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08-28-2014, 11:01 PM | #4 |
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I'm pretty sure he still is everytime he writes something tbh. Prolly as a result of the heavy atmosphere hitting him when he steps outside
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08-28-2014, 11:12 PM | #6 |
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fuck he is terrible
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08-28-2014, 11:29 PM | #9 |
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Yeah I heard witty and split nominated it for HOF
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08-28-2014, 11:29 PM | #10 |
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i chortled bags
out loud, irl because i know it is true
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08-28-2014, 11:32 PM | #11 |
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08-29-2014, 02:52 AM | #12 |
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@MKG - you have not earned the right to say my name, don't make me destroy you.
@Certain @Diode - This was written in like 2006, he would have been like 14 or some shit. And yes, I do think he is a good writer.
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08-29-2014, 02:56 AM | #13 |
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I thought you were nice
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08-29-2014, 03:02 AM | #14 |
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I am nice :D
<3
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08-29-2014, 03:06 AM | #15 |
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Plz be my friend plz
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08-29-2014, 03:10 AM | #16 |
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Nope.
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08-29-2014, 03:38 AM | #17 |
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:( why no why
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08-29-2014, 05:16 AM | #18 |
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didnt his best friend fuck his girlfriend behind his back then come online to boast about smashing that snagglepuss? i wouldnt personally, but i can imagine a lesser man catching feels over a sloot
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You're kidding me right
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