11-27-2018, 05:53 PM | #1 |
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Semi-Finals: Firefighters vs. The Police - FIREFIGHTERS WIN
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11-27-2018, 06:19 PM | #2 |
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THE FIREFIGHTERS HAVE CHECKED IN
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11-27-2018, 08:12 PM | #3 |
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THE POLICE SENT 12
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12-01-2018, 09:00 PM | #4 |
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The Police’s Verse:
Ayo, Police vs pussies? At least that was the match we were told Fuck cash, we don't need bills to see bitches slide from a pole Not for play, u can get sprayed, this shit is not a hobby Ironic when the smoke rise we'll be the ones walkin' out w/ bodies Y'all need a call to leave the crib, fk that we clappin' ruthless We don't wait for fire to pop off...lil nigga we do the shootin' Put ya team on life support, yeah our squad is meaner Oxygen tank hooked up to ya face, it ain't standard procedure National tragedy or not, see this team is too legit We leavin' u & ya whole crew under rubble, this some 911 shit Ya shitty uniform sucks, as for us we can't get any flyer Try us & we'll put the axe to ya back like it was proper attire Dispatch we have a 1-8-7... |
12-01-2018, 09:01 PM | #5 |
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The Firefighters Verse:
Fuck 12. They call me and I’ll come spray everything. You on the other hand aren’t harming jack. Far from a killer, only time you shoot people is when they’re unarmed and black. Always harassing the innocent, planting evidence and taking goods. I’ll dispatch you quick like disturbances in white neighborhoods. Dudes stay stealing girls from you. You’re too lame. I’m not talking about my job requirements when I take out your new flame. Chicks like us more than you, there’s no competition. You’re alone every cuffing season yet it’s in your job description. You have no chance of getting past me. You’re going against the best, scrub. My girls look like playboy bunnies, yours look like Hush playing dress up. Your salary’s a joke. I wouldn’t risk my life for the amount you’re making. It’s funny that they call you the pigs yet you can’t bring home the bacon. |
12-01-2018, 09:13 PM | #6 |
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12-02-2018, 05:49 AM | #7 |
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Police vs pussies? At least that was the match we were told
Fuck cash, we don't need bills to see bitches slide from a pole cool I like it Not for play, u can get sprayed, this shit is not a hobby Ironic when the smoke rise we'll be the ones walkin' out w/ bodies nice again Y'all need a call to leave the crib, fk that we clappin' ruthless We don't wait for fire to pop off...lil nigga we do the shootin' alright Put ya team on life support, yeah our squad is meaner Oxygen tank hooked up to ya face, it ain't standard procedure mmm not feelin this one National tragedy or not, see this team is too legit We leavin' u & ya whole crew under rubble, this some 911 shit ok, don’t like how you ended it tbh Ya shitty uniform sucks, as for us we can't get any flyer Try us & we'll put the axe to ya back like it was proper attire lol cool 3 nice 2 ok 1 Miss Vs They call me and I’ll come spray everything. You on the other hand aren’t harming jack. Far from a killer, only time you shoot people is when they’re unarmed and black. nice, good real life personal reference Always harassing the innocent, planting evidence and taking goods. I’ll dispatch you quick like disturbances in white neighborhoods. mmm decent here Dudes stay stealing girls from you. You’re too lame. I’m not talking about my job requirements when I take out your new flame. decent again Chicks like us more than you, there’s no competition. You’re alone every cuffing season yet it’s in your job description. lol alright You have no chance of getting past me. You’re going against the best, scrub. My girls look like playboy bunnies, yours look like Hush playing dress up. lmao Your salary’s a joke. I wouldn’t risk my life for the amount you’re making. It’s funny that they call you the pigs yet you can’t bring home the bacon. this is good 3 nice 1 ok 2 Decent Dope battle here. Very impressed with both verses here and I’m glad you guys made good use of the gimmicks and dissing your opponent. Really tough call for me but I have the Firefighters taking it slightly due to not having any clear misses as opposed to the police having 1, and firefighters used some better personal references I feel. Again, close call and I can see it going either way tbh. Vote Firefighters |
12-02-2018, 10:40 AM | #8 |
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12-02-2018, 01:12 PM | #9 |
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Fuck it. Don't matter now given the amount of voters lol. I got police I personally enjoyed it a bit more.ill be honest though shits so close fire deserve it just as much. Cool showing both
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12-03-2018, 01:04 AM | #11 |
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Police vs pussies? At least that was the match we were told Fuck cash, we don't need bills to see bitches slide from a pole This was cool but couldve been worded so much better... Not for play, u can get sprayed, this shit is not a hobby Ironic when the smoke rise we'll be the ones walkin' out w/ bodies same thing as last line... Y'all need a call to leave the crib, fk that we clappin' ruthless We don't wait for fire to pop off...lil nigga we do the shootin' Wasnt really a punch... Put ya team on life support, yeah our squad is meaner Oxygen tank hooked up to ya face, it ain't standard procedure I liked this... National tragedy or not, see this team is too legit We leavin' u & ya whole crew under rubble, this some 911 shit I didnt like how this was worded... Ya shitty uniform sucks, as for us we can't get any flyer Try us & we'll put the axe to ya back like it was proper attire This was cool... Overall your verse was cool but wording took the sting out of a few of your lines... They call me and I’ll come spray everything. You on the other hand aren’t harming jack. Far from a killer, only time you shoot people is when they’re unarmed and black. This was cool... Always harassing the innocent, planting evidence and taking goods. I’ll dispatch you quick like disturbances in white neighborhoods. I liked this... Dudes stay stealing girls from you. You’re too lame. I’m not talking about my job requirements when I take out your new flame. This was cool but rhyme scheme was somewhat simplistic... Chicks like us more than you, there’s no competition. You’re alone every cuffing season yet it’s in your job description. This was nice... You have no chance of getting past me. You’re going against the best, scrub. My girls look like playboy bunnies, yours look like Hush playing dress up. this was good too... Your salary’s a joke. I wouldn’t risk my life for the amount you’re making. It’s funny that they call you the pigs yet you can’t bring home the bacon. This was ok... I think FF was more consistent here... Vote- FF... Bye... Vote- FF
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12-03-2018, 08:45 PM | #14 |
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Not for play, u can get sprayed, this shit is not a hobby
Ironic when the smoke rise we'll be the ones walkin' out w/ bodies Y'all need a call to leave the crib, fk that we clappin' ruthless We don't wait for fire to pop off...lil nigga we do the shootin' vs They call me and I’ll come spray everything. You on the other hand aren’t harming jack. Far from a killer, only time you shoot people is when they’re unarmed and black. Always harassing the innocent, planting evidence and taking goods. I’ll dispatch you quick like disturbances in white neighborhoods. Dudes stay stealing girls from you. You’re too lame. I’m not talking about my job requirements when I take out your new flame. Chicks like us more than you, there’s no competition. You’re alone every cuffing season yet it’s in your job description. You have no chance of getting past me. You’re going against the best, scrub. My girls look like playboy bunnies, yours look like Hush playing dress up. Your salary’s a joke. I wouldn’t risk my life for the amount you’re making. It’s funny that they call you the pigs yet you can’t bring home the bacon. fuck w/ FF more. More consistent. v. Fire fighter |
12-03-2018, 10:42 PM | #15 |
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Firefighters Win 4-1
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