01-15-2018, 02:14 PM | #1 |
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Krucial Thirteen vs Mr. J - KRUCIAL 13 WINS
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Check ins are encouraged but not mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ FAILURE TO VOTE ON 3 BATTLES IS A DQ. NO MATTER WHO YOU ARE!!! YOU WILL BE DISQUALIFIED. VOTE ON 3 BATTLES OR YOU LOSE. SIMPLE! @Krucial Th1rt3en Last edited by For Battling; 01-17-2018 at 10:22 PM. |
01-17-2018, 07:54 PM | #2 |
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Did the Discussion scare off my opponent or what?
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01-18-2018, 01:08 AM | #3 |
Ill Fuck your Bitch 4Real
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let me get a extension till friday.
i got u Last edited by Krucial Th1rt3en; 01-18-2018 at 04:18 AM. Reason: from sat to fri |
01-19-2018, 08:30 PM | #4 |
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Mr. J - The Clown Prince
__________________________________________________ _____________ wen i kill u, youll dissapear into the night scene, youll come up missing without a trace, Prince getting whiped clean. __________________________________________________ _____________ u get a gun, ill grab a knife, lets see who got the best aim, if Mr. misses, my scalpal give em a sex change. __________________________________________________ _____________ this guy probably cant scrap, and his whole pen game is subpar, so if he say he greasey wit the hands, its bcuz he cant hang wit these bars. __________________________________________________ _____________ 30-38? damn, u shouldnt ever start no rap beefs, u cant erase your terrible record, but u shouldve thrown out your rap sheets. __________________________________________________ _____________ i hate trolls, so he better not ever let me see him around, catch this Joker on a dark night witta Bat, beating this Clown. __________________________________________________ _____________ this boy gone need a doctor to check his heart, Death by Quartering, J will be separated into 4 corners like the Jack in a deck of cards. __________________________________________________ _____________ twitter fingers, wit any beef i aint fuckin around, all that hashtagging will have me out front wit the pound. __________________________________________________ _____________ fire rounds, dome shot, paint his head red, watch this clown die... naw, Heath Ledger, now he can Die A clown. __________________________________________________ _____________ @Mr. J Last edited by Krucial Th1rt3en; 01-19-2018 at 08:31 PM. Reason: @Mr. J |
01-19-2018, 09:54 PM | #5 |
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Boy my style is that Yeah Pie, yours is looking like Bukkake.
I stuff peaches & cherries, while there are layers to you getting frosted fruitcake pussy come get ya tubes laced or play the wall like a dental dam ya whole future is spermicide from the occasional circle jerk sense of fam. ya whole rhyme scheme is fucked & ya lines are wack as shit...we know. truth is only time someone will call you commercial, is to show the benefits of cannabis on chemo. this toy will bring that talk to an end, so stop thinking you acting real. one peep and Ill knock off that top with Ms & crack you open like a Happy Meal. now get outta here kid, or you can see what this style does. you dont have the connection to land lines you always getting tuned out like dial up I could grab the tool & spark & leave this sucker heated like a blacksmith problem is you used to getting led on, ya whole career is basically being catfished
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01-20-2018, 12:26 AM | #6 |
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wen i kill u, youll dissapear into the night scene,
youll come up missing without a trace, Prince getting whiped clean. ___alright prince/prints not bad_______________________________________________ _____________ u get a gun, ill grab a knife, lets see who got the best aim, if Mr. misses, my scalpal give em a sex change. _scalpal is old wp but this is decent_________________________________________________ _____________ this guy probably cant scrap, and his whole pen game is subpar, so if he say he greasey wit the hands, its bcuz he cant hang wit these bars. _____lol I get it but nah_____________________________________________ _____________ 30-38? damn, u shouldnt ever start no rap beefs, u cant erase your terrible record, but u shouldve thrown out your rap sheets. ______thought this was dope tbh____________________________________________ _____________ i hate trolls, so he better not ever let me see him around, catch this Joker on a dark night witta Bat, beating this Clown. _____ehh nah_____________________________________________ _____________ this boy gone need a doctor to check his heart, Death by Quartering, J will be separated into 4 corners like the Jack in a deck of cards. ____i mean...every card has the number or letter in each corner right? Lol that’s takes away a lot of impact from the punch because it doesn’t make the J special at all______________________________________________ _____________ twitter fingers, wit any beef i aint fuckin around, all that hashtagging will have me out front wit the pound. ______alright cool, could have been done better & less simpler but not bad____________________________________________ _____________ fire rounds, dome shot, paint his head red, watch this clown die... naw, Heath Ledger, now he can Die A clown. same as above, cool concept but done in an extremely simplistic way, gotta make the bar more fulfilling Vs Boy my style is that Yeah Pie, yours is looking like Bukkake. I stuff peaches & cherries, while there are layers to you getting frosted fruitcake bukkake and frosted fruitcake rhyme? Gtfo pussy come get ya tubes laced or play the wall like a dental dam ya whole future is spermicide from the occasional circle jerk sense of fam. nah ya whole rhyme scheme is fucked & ya lines are wack as shit...we know. truth is only time someone will call you commercial, is to show the benefits of cannabis on chemo. nah this toy will bring that talk to an end, so stop thinking you acting real. one peep and Ill knock off that top with Ms & crack you open like a Happy Meal. this was better but barely decent now get outta here kid, or you can see what this style does. you dont have the connection to land lines you always getting tuned out like dial up better than the last, now we’re getting somewhere. I could grab the tool & spark & leave this sucker heated like a blacksmith problem is you used to getting led on, ya whole career is basically being cat-fished cool MR J is getting better still, he’s managed to form actual punches but the concept need to improve. Krucial please never use that structure in ur verse ever again lol. You had good concepts and a good number of your lines hit but you have to do a better job at making a punch “whole” Vote Krucial |
01-20-2018, 06:24 AM | #7 | |
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Boy my style is that Yeah Pie, yours is looking like Bukkake. I stuff peaches & cherries, while there are layers to you getting frosted fruitcake Eh pussy come get ya tubes laced or play the wall like a dental dam ya whole future is spermicide from the occasional circle jerk sense of fam. Sense of fam finish ruined something great ya whole rhyme scheme is fucked & ya lines are wack as shit...we know. truth is only time someone will call you commercial, is to show the benefits of cannabis on chemo. Whats the connection? this toy will bring that talk to an end, so stop thinking you acting real. one peep and Ill knock off that top with Ms & crack you open like a Happy Meal. M's? now get outta here kid, or you can see what this style does. you dont have the connection to land lines you always getting tuned out like dial up I like this I could grab the tool & spark & leave this sucker heated like a blacksmith problem is you used to getting led on, ya whole career is basically being catfished Nice For a cold start that wasn't the worst verse ive ever seen @krucial V mr J |
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01-20-2018, 04:05 PM | #9 |
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Swear I just voted on this an then ended up on another battle wtf.
Anyway - Mr J your closer was LOTb 5 more of them you be taking many W. However 13 won this one for more quotes. Although wasnt a fan of the constant clown avatar reference but your new so guess you didnt have much to work from. VOTE 13 |
01-20-2018, 07:43 PM | #10 | |
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01-21-2018, 08:29 AM | #11 |
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Krucial was trash all the way through I don't fuck with his style.
Vs I could grab the tool & spark & leave this sucker heated like a blacksmith problem is you used to getting led on, ya whole career is basically being catfished This is actually decent Pretty close. Lucky for mr jay krucial is trash
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01-21-2018, 11:08 AM | #12 |
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Uhhh ok nothing hit on either side
MrJ, had you dropped the fruitcake from the line it would have actually been better the other guy, drop the spacing and the lines, but the style is there. Just up the concepts Joker bars been done to DEATH on dude, so come a little cleverer than hit u with a “bat” type shit if you want to use them. Still, Js concepts are so hard to even pick out I guess I got 13 |
01-21-2018, 03:52 PM | #13 |
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Mr j. had the catfish line.. that was actually kinda dope. Prolly won the battle tbh.
Krucial u just gotta read some more battles man.. itll help you form a structure cuz at this point thats the first step. Ull get it bro just stick wit it.. V/ mr j |
01-21-2018, 06:15 PM | #14 |
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I got krucial fav bars : Prince get wiped clean , death by quartering , hash tag
Didn’t like much from mr j V-krucial |
01-21-2018, 11:05 PM | #15 |
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Krucial Thirteen Wins 6-3
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i give up -fb, just as retarded has he looks |
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