01-15-2018, 02:12 PM | #1 |
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01-16-2018, 09:06 PM | #2 |
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01-16-2018, 09:12 PM | #3 |
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Realistically 10 but we can match 1st
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01-18-2018, 04:38 AM | #4 |
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01-18-2018, 06:31 PM | #5 |
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Ext for 10?? lol
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01-19-2018, 08:08 PM | #6 |
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Lol I can’t imagine the hoes you pull, bet ya last ex was somethin dirty
I should be handing out For XLs and I don’t mean my fuckin jersey That FBI line made Cronus ghost but no pitty though for dude We watched C left, and it’s still haunting us in every video you do That lip makes me cringe, I bet you get depressed when you bite Stop wonderin Wyclef isn’t gone till November, it’s with you the rest of your life & you’re that soft, ya face make me laugh dawg so hats off No one will EVER share a drink with you.... quit blaming it on backwash The fact is. it’s that’s sick, mr half lip aint jack shit I bet your idea of a winter classic is savin a ton on chapstick Your NBL run consisted of retards bangin toys that send slugs From now on For season’s more like a super 8 w/ bed bugs.... |
01-19-2018, 09:20 PM | #7 |
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For yrs u were a ghost around the net. They told me Al was a soldier w/ the tec
Bout time that we met, but these extended arms at ur door aren’t to welcome home a vet I’m a pro w/ the tools. Real quiet. He’ll swear that no1’s around Operation game, I’m removing every bone from this mans body w/o making a sound Al’s past his prime, even started the league on a losing streak So why blast the 9? We’re already left w/ a shell of what you used to be Told ur wife I have 1 rule. Do what I say or I’ll bust tools Either she hides it in her ass, or I’ll force rounds down her throat like a drug mule Had a short run as a legend, now ur straight trash to me Bro...that sick spell only lasted about 3 months like a Bags disease ur mad cuz ur girl dipped. She finally realized u weren’t worth shit Now there’s a Nina on ur dirt lips.. ready to make sparks fly like a first kiss! Last edited by For Battling; 01-19-2018 at 10:00 PM. |
01-20-2018, 12:37 AM | #8 |
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Lol I can’t imagine the hoes you pull, bet ya last ex was somethin dirty I should be handing out For XLs and I don’t mean my fuckin jersey ---not really feeling this--- That FBI line made Cronus ghost but no pitty though for dude We watched C left, and it’s still haunting us in every video you do That lip makes me cringe, I bet you get depressed when you bite Stop wonderin Wyclef isn’t gone till November, it’s with you the rest of your life ---this could be better--- & you’re that soft, ya face make me laugh dawg so hats off No one will EVER share a drink with you.... quit blaming it on backwash ---LOL--- The fact is. it’s that’s sick, mr half lip aint jack shit I bet your idea of a winter classic is savin a ton on chapstick ---lol, not really feelin this though, exept for as a joke--- Your NBL run consisted of retards bangin toys that send slugs From now on For season’s more like a super 8 w/ bed bugs.... ---i have no clue what this guy is talking about, some in-house bars im not catching seems like all personals too, exept the wyclef bar--- __________________________________________________ ______________________________________ for battling For yrs u were a ghost around the net. They told me Al was a soldier w/ the tec Bout time that we met, but these extended arms at ur door aren’t to welcome home a vet ---this shit fire, my kinda style--- I’m a pro w/ the tools. Real quiet. He’ll swear that no1’s around Operation game, I’m removing every bone from this mans body w/o making a sound ---FIREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE WHATTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT this boy crazy--- Al’s past his prime, even started the league on a losing streak So why blast the 9? We’re already left w/ a shell of what you used to be ---dope--- Told ur wife I have 1 rule. Do what I say or I’ll bust tools Either she hides it in her ass, or I’ll force rounds down her throat like a drug mule ---lmao this shit made me laugh--- Had a short run as a legend, now ur straight trash to me Bro...that sick spell only lasted about 3 months like a Bags disease ---i dont really get this one--- ur mad cuz ur girl dipped. She finally realized u weren’t worth shit Now there’s a Nina on ur dirt lips.. ready to make sparks fly like a first kiss! ---this shit is fire bro--- __________________________________________________ ________________ v/FOR BATTLING, this boy pen is fireeeeeeee alvins shit seems like all personals, even if i did know of the personals he is doing, he isnt punching enuff for my liking, i f w bars like FB is doing his pen is really the shit i like. but i see he's talking bout FB's lip lol |
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For yrs u were a ghost around the net. They told me Al was a soldier w/ the tec Bout time that we met, but these extended arms at ur door aren’t to welcome home a vet Nice I’m a pro w/ the tools. Real quiet. He’ll swear that no1’s aroundfat wife Operation game, I’m removing every bone from this mans body w/o making a sound Nice Al’s past his prime, even started the league on a losing streak So why blast the 9? We’re already left w/ a shell of what you used to be Cool Told ur wife I have 1 rule. Do what I say or I’ll bust tools Either she hides it in her ass, or I’ll force rounds down her throat like a drug mule Okay Had a short run as a legend, now ur straight trash to me Bro...that sick spell only lasted about 3 months like a Bags disease Loool ur mad cuz ur girl dipped. She finally realized u weren’t worth shit Now there’s a Nina on ur dirt lips.. ready to make sparks fly like a first kiss! Light V karp This was dope. |
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01-20-2018, 03:40 AM | #12 |
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Zelph took this with a consistant verse, pretty much ever bar hit and hit well. Multiple use of gun bars may have gone against him but then AK brought too many lip jokes an they have gotten old now. AK had 3 decent bars but alot of it was light jabs an it makes me wonder if he underestimated his opponant a bit.
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01-20-2018, 06:56 AM | #13 |
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winter classic 4 seasons vs drug mule iunno how its been a blowout for fb, he had a lot of 'like' bars n bad multis for concepts that needed more. IMO v/karpis |
01-20-2018, 10:03 AM | #14 |
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That lip makes me cringe, I bet you get depressed when you bite Stop wonderin Wyclef isn’t gone till November, it’s with you the rest of your life lmaoaoao. oaoaoaoaoaoa. & you’re that soft, ya face make me laugh dawg so hats off No one will EVER share a drink with you.... quit blaming it on backwash great set up -- simple rhyming adds to a comical punch. dope. The fact is. it’s that’s sick, mr half lip aint jack shit I bet your idea of a winter classic is savin a ton on chapstick Rhyming was dope, but I think the 'winter classic' holding it together lessened the impact. vs. For Battling For yrs u were a ghost around the net. They told me Al was a soldier w/ the tec Bout time that we met, but these extended arms at ur door aren’t to welcome home a vet I'm getting sick of "arms" bars -- every battle got "arms" bars these days. Like how many scenarios can we dream up where ordinary folks are holding their arms out and we can relate it to a life-threatening GUN situation. Anyways, cool set-up tho. I’m a pro w/ the tools. Real quiet. He’ll swear that no1’s around Operation game, I’m removing every bone from this mans body w/o making a sound Operation is dope. Al’s past his prime, even started the league on a losing streak So why blast the 9? We’re already left w/ a shell of what you used to be Shell is ok. Told ur wife I have 1 rule. Do what I say or I’ll bust tools Either she hides it in her ass, or I’ll force rounds down her throat like a drug mule I'm feeling the same way about ROUNDS as I do about ARMS. Like, how many round things have we talked about in general. It's a very common shape for everyday items. I thought with Karp's slow start that FB could really capitalize, but I just don't respond to some of the wordplay, although the construction around it was tight. For me, Karpis had some of the funnier/hard lines that stuck out when all was said and done. Vote -- Alvin Karpis
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01-20-2018, 09:03 PM | #15 |
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That FBI line made Cronus ghost but no pitty though for dude
We watched C left, and it’s still haunting us in every video you do & you’re that soft, ya face make me laugh dawg so hats off No one will EVER share a drink with you.... quit blaming it on backwash LMAO Vs For yrs u were a ghost around the net. They told me Al was a soldier w/ the tec Bout time that we met, but these extended arms at ur door aren’t to welcome home a vet Al’s past his prime, even started the league on a losing streak So why blast the 9? We’re already left w/ a shell of what you used to be Had a short run as a legend, now ur straight trash to me Bro...that sick spell only lasted about 3 months like a Bags disease ur mad cuz ur girl dipped. She finally realized u weren’t worth shit Now there’s a Nina on ur dirt lips.. ready to make sparks fly like a first kiss! Mann...Zelph took this easy. Karp over did the lip joints. Zelph in his prime right now i think since i'm 4-0 Vs him I've never seen him write well. THought this was pretty one sided tho. V/FB |
01-21-2018, 06:15 AM | #16 |
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Lol I can’t imagine the hoes you pull, bet ya last ex was somethin dirty
I should be handing out For XLs and I don’t mean my fuckin jersey Ok That FBI line made Cronus ghost but no pitty though for dude We watched C left, and it’s still haunting us in every video you do Cool That lip makes me cringe, I bet you get depressed when you bite Stop wonderin Wyclef isn’t gone till November, it’s with you the rest of your life Fire! & you’re that soft, ya face make me laugh dawg so hats off No one will EVER share a drink with you.... quit blaming it on backwash Lmao dope! The fact is. it’s that’s sick, mr half lip aint jack shit I bet your idea of a winter classic is savin a ton on chapstick Ok Your NBL run consisted of retards bangin toys that send slugs From now on For season’s more like a super 8 w/ bed bugs.... Dope! or yrs u were a ghost around the net. They told me Al was a soldier w/ the tec Bout time that we met, but these extended arms at ur door aren’t to welcome home a vet Fire! I’m a pro w/ the tools. Real quiet. He’ll swear that no1’s around Operation game, I’m removing every bone from this mans body w/o making a sound Ehh, seen this concept used a few times Al’s past his prime, even started the league on a losing streak So why blast the 9? We’re already left w/ a shell of what you used to be Nice Told ur wife I have 1 rule. Do what I say or I’ll bust tools Either she hides it in her ass, or I’ll force rounds down her throat like a drug mule Ok Had a short run as a legend, now ur straight trash to me Bro...that sick spell only lasted about 3 months like a Bags disease Nice ur mad cuz ur girl dipped. She finally realized u weren’t worth shit Now there’s a Nina on ur dirt lips.. ready to make sparks fly like a first kiss! Cool.. Dope battle, props gents.. AK had a verse w/no misses n couple couple light jabs while For had one miss but other than that dropped some good shit. This is tuff man I feel it's rather even regardless of the miss cos for still had some heavy shit but the consistency of AK was solid n even added some humor in there. Ion know i feel AK barely edges this in what I feel was botw. Good job guys.. vote AK |
01-21-2018, 05:56 PM | #17 |
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That FBI line made Cronus ghost but no pitty though for dude
We watched C left, and it’s still haunting us in every video you do That lip makes me cringe, I bet you get depressed when you bite Stop wonderin Wyclef isn’t gone till November, it’s with you the rest of your life & you’re that soft, ya face make me laugh dawg so hats off No one will EVER share a drink with you.... quit blaming it on backwash The fact is. it’s that’s sick, mr half lip aint jack shit I bet your idea of a winter classic is savin a ton on chapstick Your NBL run consisted of retards bangin toys that send slugs From now on For season’s more like a super 8 w/ bed bugs.... Vs Al’s past his prime, even started the league on a losing streak So why blast the 9? We’re already left w/ a shell of what you used to be V. Ak. Most of zelphs verse read like a url wannabe |
01-21-2018, 08:22 PM | #18 |
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That lip makes me cringe, I bet you get depressed when you bite
Stop wonderin Wyclef isn’t gone till November, it’s with you the rest of your life & you’re that soft, ya face make me laugh dawg so hats off No one will EVER share a drink with you.... quit blaming it on backwash vs For yrs u were a ghost around the net. They told me Al was a soldier w/ the tec Bout time that we met, but these extended arms at ur door aren’t to welcome home a vet I’m a pro w/ the tools. Real quiet. He’ll swear that no1’s around Operation game, I’m removing every bone from this mans body w/o making a sound Al’s past his prime, even started the league on a losing streak So why blast the 9? We’re already left w/ a shell of what you used to be I got zelph here. Karp you had an okay verse i liked the bars i quoted but i wasn't feeling that c left shit. You ran with the lip thing and it paid off at times but only so much you can do with angle. Its got comedy value but it runs out. Zelph prob the best verse ive seen from you tbh. The gun shit again like with karp with your lip gets a little repetitive but everything worked. Gotta say i enjoyed it more so like yeh vote zelph |
01-22-2018, 01:59 AM | #19 |
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This seems to be all according to voters' taste
For me, the lip jokes wore thin. While they were executed well, by the 3rd one I was burnt out. Also, Z dropped heavy for this battle. I know I haven't read many verses from him but this is up there w/ the best. AK still did a good job w/ the ammo he loaded but should have thrown a curveball which would have won it. Blast the 9 was nice, simple but effective. It's really close, on first read I wanted to lean AK. Probably the repetition of reading these battles wore me out on the lip shit. Good battle tho Z |
01-22-2018, 02:09 AM | #20 |
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Closer Vs Operation Shell of what u used to be First kiss Felt one had better angles here... i thought something else was gonna happen here honestly... v/ For Battling
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