03-18-2019, 10:50 AM | #1 |
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Week 1: Superboy Estar Legend vs JEM Super Wins
Week One You all know the rules, but if you need reminding go look at the thread.
DUE THURSDAY @JEM @superboy estar legend *The 1-2 league and it's mini LR league are one bar Vs one bar.*
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03-18-2019, 03:49 PM | #2 |
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Two.
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03-21-2019, 06:33 PM | #3 |
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i'll lay your ass to waste and leave you buried in the grave
make a headstone outta jems so u can have "RIP" engraved |
03-21-2019, 10:39 PM | #4 |
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Sure.
Don’t care if you Super, boy.. I got clips to feed ya for a long time Cuz you catching bullet, after bullet, like receivers at the combine |
03-22-2019, 12:04 AM | #5 |
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superboy had a cool double meaning and i haven't seen the engraved flip on gems so i thought it was nice, JEM this was ok i think its a bit straight forward though for my liking, it was just too simple although obviously it isn't bad.
v/ superboy, think his was more complex and i liked the name flip/wp |
03-22-2019, 05:46 AM | #6 |
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superboy for me here
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03-22-2019, 06:47 PM | #7 |
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I got Jem here sue me...both were short sweet and simple. I like both but Jems hit home for me
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03-22-2019, 07:17 PM | #8 |
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I liked jem in a close one
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03-22-2019, 08:00 PM | #9 |
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liked superboy's wordplay a little more than jem's
v/ superboy |
03-22-2019, 08:45 PM | #10 |
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Feeling JEM more, lil more direct. Superstar coulda done more with the gem nameplay
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03-22-2019, 11:12 PM | #11 |
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make a headstone outta jems so u can have "RIP" engraved This was nice.. wording was there along with execution as well. Creativity was there as well with the name play ------- Don’t care if you Super, boy.. I got clips to feed ya for a long time Cuz you catching bullet, after bullet, like receivers at the combine This was coo, I just seen this concept done a lot. Not taking away from you here wording was there along with nice execution. Good shit from both, I'm going to edge Superboy on this one. Just a little more creative as I seen the combine flip a couple times. Props to both tho V- Superboy
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03-24-2019, 08:39 AM | #12 |
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Vote Superboy. It was a tight one but think he edges it here. @superboy estar legend @JEM make sure your votes are going in please
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03-24-2019, 01:05 PM | #13 |
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This is close for me both weren’t crazy but by bad... I liked Jess bar but I gotta give it to star for having the n/p personal vs a generic
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03-24-2019, 02:39 PM | #14 |
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5 3 need more votes ideally
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03-24-2019, 04:26 PM | #15 |
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JEM was ok, seen variations of combine concepts..
I liked engrave better tho, cool wording too V- SUPERBOY |
03-24-2019, 06:07 PM | #16 |
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super's concept was a reach
j was simple but made sense v/jem
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03-24-2019, 06:15 PM | #17 |
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6 4 super wins
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