Bonus Battle: 1-2 Adonis vs. 2-1 Vulgar (Vulgar wins 2-1)

[Adonis]

Topic:

Let me know if you want a different one, I can change it

due tomorrow, Thursday

@Vulgar

The records are from what I remeber, though I feel like we might be 1-1 or 2-1 in favor of you? No matter, horrible luck to you my friend

EDIT: Fixed You are 2-1 against me here. Not counting PR cause I was learning



Voting on this will count towards voting for participants

*obviously more important to vote on the actual battles but hey, I'm vein*

[Vulgar]

Let the games begin...

[Adonis]

I'm in love



@Vulgar

fell in love @20:50 - 24:00 Hard mix right there

entire thing is dope tho
peace in death sir

@asylum @Nigma might like these beats?

[Adonis]

Belly of the beast, no, belly so serene
See, Mother bore her beliefs
Knowing she could only teach what she sees
Could never live for the seeds she conceived
So if they learn love but recede
Her teachings would become unjust with replete
After all, angel dust is a fucking receipt
The path to failure is abrupt for the weak
And the tailored suits are tied to a tree
Dangling ankles won't survive if they're free
Darkened pigment lights once deceased
Just a hue, but it's alright, we despise their disease
After all, who doesn't love a swing in a breeze?
Who doesn't love a Jew on it's knees?
Pleading is a character loved by the king
King David, King Yeshua, King little horn blowing decree
It's all for the hope of gold manifesting in beings
As a people we've infested her dreams
Her love of free will, well, she's confessed it's empty
Left dry rotting with the corpse's we freed
From hand written letters to iPhones copying our speech
The rabbit hole is one she dug and regrets having so
She created
We segregated
So forget what you know

[Vulgar]

Itinerary for the Indigo Children


Venus fly trap time-lapse,
deepened pockets swallow cress
No river at end - sleep along the water crests
Feel the songs of bonding flesh
Plea a Tonkin dollar fetish
caught in Unigod's remembrance...
too bad the unibrow is gone - I'm headless

A cuneiform of severed cords and Semtex
bound to fires of dusk: a feudal lord's descendants
Ode to rustled Jimi's - the true immortal Hendrix
Life was born from more than metrics
Dark matter nursery -
mystery of formless gender
Farming sulfur, borrowed from a foreign lender
conception Gaelic, but abortion's Celtic
and Saturnalia's a 1/4th pretentious
Pour a quarter of this endorphin mixture
it's more than pensive
(this terra firma liquor ain't endless)
Parent company of the Mars Rover, paying child support
and Earth is our single home
We live in an asylum of sorts
Live. Adore. Barbed culture
Moonchild's sonogram starts over

[e11even]

adonis- racism on mother earth. you tackled this from a cool angle. I think some of these ideas could have been expanded on with a little more complexity, but I like what I read also. Good job bro.

vulgar- i'm glad this is a bonus round. Some ideas were accesible for me, but I'm not so sure I got the main idea. To be fair I won't vote. This seems to ba a metaphor-laden piece about the coming about of the cosmos? Earth? Either way, I need to read more of you so I can get a grasp of you, as I barely scratched the surface on your pieces before my absence. Good job, I guess?

As I said, I elect not to vote on this battle. Good job, you two.

[asylum]

Mvgt adonis here.. from what i understood, his piece was the more well rounded of the two. I understood his approach and he stuck with it. To be fair im not really sure what vulgar was talking about.... but it sounded fresh as fuuck. I read through it a couple times and was a dope verse but it was over my head if it was fully cohesive,

[Mr. J]

Adonis, I thought that opening line was written pretty smoothly
I like shit like that its like saying peter piper picked a peck of pickled peppers
but what really stood out to me was the whole flow of your piece
the transitioning is nice, the overall topic was cool for the topic at hand
you two seem evenly matched as far as styles go though. this seemed straightforward to me
nice work.

Vulgar, its nice to see you take a break from the whole poetry sensation going on lately
your verse seems more loosely based on the topic but not to the point you dont understand what you are saying.
at first the opener felt kind of weird but then I felt like you were complimenting Adonis verse as well


v/I feel like both verses were great they reflected their opponents in style & line length
which makes this an easy read to say the least, of course Vulgar came with a more complicated approach, more metaphorical.
Adonis came more mechanical and came with a pretty cool flow.....well so did Vulgar
either way I feel like this battle all comes down to entertainment value.
Adonis shined and its been awhile since I read anything from him, as for Vulgar his approach is reminiscent of his older verses
really enjoyable reading both works.
next time both of you can come catch this L from me though....




v/





Vulgar...for having the more entertaining verse

[Adonis]

3 more votes and a winner is crowned.

You're dealing with pros here, feelings can't be affected if you vote like a man.... Or women @dyedinthewool

[Razah]

vVulgar

Just felt like a better verse. Better concept, too.

Adonis verse was pretty dope too. But, c'mon- indigo children??

dope idea. Any of ya'll actually into that shit??

Gotta thank the reefers for getting me into stuff like that.. Lol