Swerve vs Barcotic - BAR WINS

[Swerve]

I'm not you Barc, not pulling up shit archived and stored,
But you went 16?!?!? Great...now how many of those lines are yours?
You got your old ass beat, there's not much to do son,
Last week, Credenza antique...this week I smash you through one.
You'll call the voters dumb, yea dude you're quite the charmer,
Think about it.......
The wordplay is over their heads, but understood by Cot the gardener?
Look fraud, I run with blades, you aint busting tops,
Step wrong and one uppercut'll turn that chin strap into mutton chops.
The teeth tatt? Lame as fuck, cant get it reversed bitch,
If you wanted to carve bites into your skin...you had plenty of verses.
Got all the flavors of led, I'll pull up on you solo,
And squeeze 31 between the numbers like the baskin robbins logo.
You're a plebian Cro, I'm above you...I aint sorry,
I'll leave you pushing up daiseys...that your coworkers can maintain for me.
I'm in the summer of my youth, you'll get hacked and slashed,
So only way I'm seeing Cro's feet...is with a toe tag attached.

[Saint]

Originally Posted by Swerve

I'm not you Barc, not pulling up shit archived and stored,
But you went 16?!?!? Great...now how many of those lines are yours?
-eh I mean its a statement, even as a personal its bland imo
You got your old ass beat, there's not much to do son,
Last week, Credenza antique...this week I smash you through one.
-this cool....decent hit.
You'll call the voters dumb, yea dude you're quite the charmer,
Think about it.......
The wordplay is over their heads, but understood by Cot the gardener?
-same as first....its a cool angle though.
Look fraud, I run with blades, you aint busting tops,
Step wrong and one uppercut'll turn that chin strap into mutton chops.
-this aight.
The teeth tatt? Lame as fuck, cant get it reversed bitch,
If you wanted to carve bites into your skin...you had plenty of verses.
-biting personal, and wording was a bit off here imo
Got all the flavors of led, I'll pull up on you solo,
And squeeze 31 between the numbers like the baskin robbins logo.
-like the concept, but didn't connect.
You're a plebian Cro, I'm above you...I aint sorry,
I'll leave you pushing up daiseys...that your coworkers can maintain for me.
-hmm, eh k
I'm in the summer of my youth, you'll get hacked and slashed,
So only way I'm seeing Cro's feet...is with a toe tag attached.
alright ender.

ur verses annoy. no one's ever asked Swerve for a pointer
I spit lines that ppl go 'ohh' for.. while U go 0-4 since '04 vs Destroyer
-seen these, ok flip.....feels old
ur mom says ur obvi' a clown. proly the town jesta
even ur own Sicily View to die, and ima toss ya body in Mount Etna
-lol I hate these wps I mean they're clever but it sacrifices a coherent line, this is RB shit. Its creative tho.
it'll be a bumpy ride as i switch vans. im a sick man/hostage driver ..
bitches like u leave claw marks all over my Trunks -Chris Benoit's attire
-this cool.
if the trigger move, there aint a single dude the metal fears
ima put that Long Nose to ur head & Finish u. Geppetto's here
-decent pinnochio flip.
then put a Clearcoat on ya coffin to brighten the paint up...
U'll put a Clearcoat on too, and roc it all night at a gay club
- kinda funny.
wanna go 10, pat? naaa. even 12 is for softy fags
im goin Max, Pacioretty? u'll get carried out in a hockey bag
-eh wording here softened it.
go off urself. i want the belt n tbh, well im a guy feared
diss for Dispatcher gonna have to call ALL the help to survive here
-lazy execution, cool concept.
ur a novice guy. even ur hottest line isn't felt, kid
plus i could Wing this verse knowing ur too occupied w. the zelph vid
-blah to me

I have barcotic here a few more landed..

vote- barcotic.

[Captain Neckbeard]

Originally Posted by Barcotic

aka Patrick

ur verses annoy. no one's ever asked Swerve for a pointer
I spit lines that ppl go 'ohh' for.. while U go 0-4 since '04 vs Destroyer

light

ur mom says ur obvi' a clown. proly the town jesta
even ur own Sicily View to die, and ima toss ya body in Mount Etna

u fuckin suck at wordplay im sick of this an wtf at the set up

it'll be a bumpy ride as i switch vans. im a sick man/hostage driver ..
bitches like u leave claw marks all over my Trunks -Chris Benoit's attire

concept dope wording sucked (was good overall)

if the trigger move, there aint a single dude the metal fears
ima put that Long Nose to ur head & Finish u. Geppetto's here

played

then put a Clearcoat on ya coffin to brighten the paint up...
U'll put a Clearcoat on too, and roc it all night at a gay club

corny/not funny

wanna go 10, pat? naaa. even 12 is for softy fags
im goin Max, Pacioretty? u'll get carried out in a hockey bag

smh (I got it...pat u ready but cmon)

go off urself. i want the belt n tbh, well im a guy feared
diss for Dispatcher gonna have to call ALL the help to survive here

why do u do this enuff wordplays like im literally annoyed and was gonna vote on all the battles and legit don't even feel like reading swerves verse at this point (this was good tho)

ur a novice guy. even ur hottest line isn't felt, kid
plus i could Wing this verse knowing ur too occupied w. the zelph vid

they were ribs, this isn't clever and its too simple even if they were

NO ext

Originally Posted by Swerve

I'm not you Barc, not pulling up shit archived and stored,
But you went 16?!?!? Great...now how many of those lines are yours?

eh Im damn positive no1 else writing them awful wordplays aboot obscure Canadian hockey players (this is an ok bar tho)

You got your old ass beat, there's not much to do son,
Last week, Credenza antique...this week I smash you through one.

going to not vote on battles with wordplay anymore I swear.

You'll call the voters dumb, yea dude you're quite the charmer,
Think about it.......
The wordplay is over their heads, but understood by Cot the gardener?

wat>!? why did I think this was a good afternoon to read text battles

Look fraud, I run with blades, you aint busting tops,
Step wrong and one uppercut'll turn that chin strap into mutton chops.

finally. this was cool.

The teeth tatt? Lame as fuck, cant get it reversed bitch,
If you wanted to carve bites into your skin...you had plenty of verses.

dope

Got all the flavors of led, I'll pull up on you solo,
And squeeze 31 between the numbers like the baskin robbins logo.

light

You're a plebian Cro, I'm above you...I aint sorry,
I'll leave you pushing up daiseys...that your coworkers can maintain for me.

fire

I'm in the summer of my youth, you'll get hacked and slashed,
So only way I'm seeing Cro's feet...is with a toe tag attached.

got to be played. wording and flip were cool tho./

I got dispatcher & benoit vs daisies, mutton chops & maybe bite marks

honestly I hated this battle and I feel tired now but ill give it to swerve with less shit that made me hate him as human in life.

v swerve

[Hawk]

Originally Posted by Barcotic

aka Patrick

ur verses annoy. no one's ever asked Swerve for a pointer
I spit lines that ppl go 'ohh' for.. while U go 0-4 since '04 vs Destroyer

^^^ I like this. No outstanding creativity or haymaker punch but it's a nice jab with a lot of sauce on the flow.

ur mom says ur obvi' a clown. proly the town jesta
even ur own Sicily View to die, and ima toss ya body in Mount Etna

^^^ I liked this but I think the wording got in the way. To me wordplay has to work both ways you read it and the Sicily version doesn't read that smooth "your own Sicily view to die" what does that mean? I think it still has impact and connected, would have just liked to see it worded to work both ways better.

it'll be a bumpy ride as i switch vans. im a sick man/hostage driver ..
bitches like u leave claw marks all over my Trunks -Chris Benoit's attire

^^^ I like this

if the trigger move, there aint a single dude the metal fears
ima put that Long Nose to ur head & Finish u. Geppetto's here

^^^ Fire.

then put a Clearcoat on ya coffin to brighten the paint up...
U'll put a Clearcoat on too, and roc it all night at a gay club

^^^ Typically I don't rock with bars that just call people gay but this killed me

wanna go 10, pat? naaa. even 12 is for softy fags
im goin Max, Pacioretty? u'll get carried out in a hockey bag

^^^ Pretty good

go off urself. i want the belt n tbh, well im a guy feared
diss for Dispatcher gonna have to call ALL the help to survive here

^^^ I fuck with this. Solid.

ur a novice guy. even ur hottest line isn't felt, kid
plus i could Wing this verse knowing ur too occupied w. the zelph vid

^^^ Between the lenox face tat and the video I figured it would create a lot of content. But I think this is the last battle for me to vote on so it's almost kind of tired at this point. Not your fault, it was a funny bar and good closer.

NO ext

You have a good flow to your verse. Allows you to read it all the way through and not just couplet by couplet. Had a couple super dope bars and a couple that were very creative but fell a hair short on execution. Overall a solid verse that I enjoyed.

Originally Posted by Swerve

I'm not you Barc, not pulling up shit archived and stored,
But you went 16?!?!? Great...now how many of those lines are yours?

^^^ Pretty simple biting bar. Nothing too hard or creative

You got your old ass beat, there's not much to do son,
Last week, Credenza antique...this week I smash you through one.

^^^ Fire

You'll call the voters dumb, yea dude you're quite the charmer,
Think about it.......
The wordplay is over their heads, but understood by Cot the gardener?

^^^ Cot/quite doesn't really work, not that you're forced to have a 4 syllable scheme but I think that was the intent. Punch was cool, although I'd have liked to see something else to tie in the gardener angle, otherwise it's just a job title that you're implying makes them dumb.

Look fraud, I run with blades, you aint busting tops,
Step wrong and one uppercut'll turn that chin strap into mutton chops.

^^^ Clean. I like it

The teeth tatt? Lame as fuck, cant get it reversed bitch,
If you wanted to carve bites into your skin...you had plenty of verses.

^^^ Reversed bitch/plenty of verses I'm not catching the rhyme. Kind of ruined the bar for me which would have been cool assuming the tattoo is a real personal.

Got all the flavors of led, I'll pull up on you solo,
And squeeze 31 between the numbers like the baskin robbins logo.

^^^ I get the point, but the 31 is squeezed between letters, not numbers.

You're a plebian Cro, I'm above you...I aint sorry,
I'll leave you pushing up daiseys...that your coworkers can maintain for me.

^^^ Aint sorry/maintain fah me... that's a big stretch as far as my "accent" goes. Not sure where you're from so maybe it rhymes well for you. Punch didn't have much sting on it.

I'm in the summer of my youth, you'll get hacked and slashed,
So only way I'm seeing Cro's feet...is with a toe tag attached.

^^^ This was pretty fire. Dope closer

You had two bars that I loved, but you also had a few that didn't even rhyme imo. And a couple misses



Overall I think Swerve had my favorite bar of the battle, but they didn't make up for the rest of the bars that missed or didn't rhyme. Barcotic was pretty well on point the entire time.


Vote - Barcotic.

[Cool]

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Originally Posted by Barcotic

aka Patrick

ur verses annoy. no one's ever asked Swerve for a pointer
I spit lines that ppl go 'ohh' for.. while U go 0-4 since '04 vs Destroyer

dope

ur mom says ur obvi' a clown. proly the town jesta
even ur own Sicily View to die, and ima toss ya body in Mount Etna

fire

it'll be a bumpy ride as i switch vans. im a sick man/hostage driver ..
bitches like u leave claw marks all over my Trunks -Chris Benoit's attire

played

if the trigger move, there aint a single dude the metal fears
ima put that Long Nose to ur head & Finish u. Geppetto's here

nah

then put a Clearcoat on ya coffin to brighten the paint up...
U'll put a Clearcoat on too, and roc it all night at a gay club

nah

wanna go 10, pat? naaa. even 12 is for softy fags
im goin Max, Pacioretty? u'll get carried out in a hockey bag

nice

go off urself. i want the belt n tbh, well im a guy feared
diss for Dispatcher gonna have to call ALL the help to survive here

tight

ur a novice guy. even ur hottest line isn't felt, kid
plus i could Wing this verse knowing ur too occupied w. the zelph vid

nah

NO ext

Originally Posted by Swerve

I'm not you Barc, not pulling up shit archived and stored,
But you went 16?!?!? Great...now how many of those lines are yours?

nah

You got your old ass beat, there's not much to do son,
Last week, Credenza antique...this week I smash you through one.

cool

You'll call the voters dumb, yea dude you're quite the charmer,
Think about it.......
The wordplay is over their heads, but understood by Cot the gardener?

nah

Look fraud, I run with blades, you aint busting tops,
Step wrong and one uppercut'll turn that chin strap into mutton chops

okay

The teeth tatt? Lame as fuck, cant get it reversed bitch,
If you wanted to carve bites into your skin...you had plenty of verses.

nah

Got all the flavors of led, I'll pull up on you solo,
And squeeze 31 between the numbers like the baskin robbins logo.

okay

You're a plebian Cro, I'm above you...I aint sorry,
I'll leave you pushing up daiseys...that your coworkers can maintain for me.

nah

I'm in the summer of my youth, you'll get hacked and slashed,
So only way I'm seeing Cro's feet...is with a toe tag attached.

nah

barcotic had some fire wordplay

swerve was way below his typical stuff

not good which is wierd

barcotic wins easily

v-barcotic