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Old 08-28-2016, 09:21 PM   #1
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Old 08-29-2016, 05:58 AM   #2
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Old 08-29-2016, 11:47 AM   #3
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This topical head aint get invited to Lars tourney? that's some clear ether
You're a punchline, but that doesn't necessarily mean we want you here..either

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Old 08-29-2016, 06:35 PM   #4
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Plus Ama bullseye...but no aero when I put a chink to your chin
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Old 08-29-2016, 09:57 PM   #5
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Innovator's delivery was a lot better and I think his punch was cleaner. Also, the ether/either bar is so old.. so that was a little disappointing. Chyeahhh.. I also think your bar would have benefited a lot if you cleaned up the first line some. Seems like you had a good idea but just couldn't word it cleaner.


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Old 08-31-2016, 09:52 AM   #6
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chyeahhhh got this

better idea, better execution of the concept
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Old 08-31-2016, 04:07 PM   #7
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Didn't really like either that much tbh but idk what chyeah was saying. Surprised he dropped weak like that. Innovator had a better punch here

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Old 09-01-2016, 04:10 AM   #8
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Chyeah had a dope pwrsonal


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Old 09-01-2016, 12:11 PM   #9
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Didnt like either tbh. Both came pretty bland but chyeah was a bit better

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Old 09-01-2016, 01:48 PM   #10
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Inno's delivery felt weird.. Chyeah's delivery was good, and a good personal.

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Old 09-01-2016, 03:23 PM   #11
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CHYEAHHH Inno's wording had no sting to it, while C had a simple personal, but it was still more effective.
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Old 09-01-2016, 06:05 PM   #12
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V/Chyeah ... Nice personal
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Old 09-01-2016, 10:05 PM   #13
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I'm always a fan of seeing racial slurs in punchlines but I think ole chyin Duncan did enuff here to take it

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Old 09-01-2016, 11:28 PM   #14
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Chyeah - seems basic but is a lil smarter of a punch than it comes off.

Innovator - ooooo I get it arro Asian harhar. Lol this was pretty cool conceptually but it didn't come off how you wanted it to I think.


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Old 09-02-2016, 03:03 PM   #15
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Chys bar grew on me.
Inns delivery didn't sound fluid to me but iliked the concept.
Enjoyed chys better tho.


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Chyeahhh!!! had a great line. I'm not sure how he's not winning this by shutout. Innovator, the Aero part seemed forced and the chink to your chin concept has been used a million times over the years.

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