Killing Spree vs bleak - Killing Spree Wins

[Orc]

Rules

Due Dates:

• Verses are due Thursday Jan 4th and will be open until Sunday.
• Battles that lack votes may close later.
• One sided battles may get closed early.
• Extensions are 24 hours

Line Limit:

• Minimum of 8, maximum of 16
• If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first.

Check ins are encouraged but not mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ

FAILURE TO VOTE ON 3 BATTLES IS A DQ. NO MATTER WHO YOU ARE!!! YOU WILL BE DISQUALIFIED. VOTE ON 3 BATTLES OR YOU LOSE. SIMPLE!

[Kill Spree]

Pics or reg

[bleak]

Pics are fun @Orc this cool?

You gotta post a good pic tho my pic is loaded w/ content. Been saving it lol

[Kill Spree]

Originally Posted by bleak

Pics are fun @Orc this cool?

You gotta post a good pic tho my pic is loaded w/ content. Been saving it lol

Word I’ll post two either tonight or tomorrow. You can pick one?

[bleak]

Fisticuffs?
Clean my rings on your jeans, my swings land stiffer
I ain't just burning bridges if I wash my hands w/ ya
Think of killing sprees, see: Capone in a styled tux.
Your style is more like 3 deaths +you in a 12 car pile up.

Lyrics?
on that Battlefield too, I'll Maul in these rap battles.
All you'll see is blades spinning, glowing red when I dash at ya.
It's only suicide prevention; rain fire till he couldn't blow back.
When his feet dangle, it's so grisly Logan Paul wouldn't show that.
Spazzing out on viral vids, raging with dark features.
When it comes to KS, I will flip his shit further than Barc reaches
(Something something shark teeth)
Grissom's on the case, but I'll leave it to the new guys
the fresh Tek will stop this killing spree within the viewtime.

[Kill Spree]

His mother is dead....


not sorry...

Originally Posted by bleak

Rams till the end but this week I got the same picks as you. Expected KC to won tho

Listen....
Vs Spree U'll get burried! Rock'll expose U all fake
I'll have ur head stoned to death & placed next to Ur moms grave
Yuh jaw'll get hit W/Rings on my fist! This kids fucked
I'll Die if Ram's Succeed, till then I'll punch ur chest till u spit blood
The girl U loved? Got in ur head. Giver Bum the hate
A Mucinex my game..I'll Pop this joke till'he bleed to death from his face
Ur bars lack witt! Choke hold do this kid in
Before I add vise Gripps to ur life so U can ask ur Mom for her Opinion
This Man'll never grow! We all know this kid wack tho
Ur death a Must ash! Funeral'll trump Zelph lip Shadow!
Rope round ur throat! Show this joke tha deal
NC was worried if u could hang ur head..Do it & let us know ur real

[Ender]

Originally Posted by bleak

Fisticuffs?
Clean my rings on your jeans, my swings land stiffer
I ain't just burning bridges if I wash my hands w/ ya
The saying is wash my hands of you, not with you, so the set-up didn't connect properly with the punch.
Think of killing sprees, see: Capone in a styled tux.
Your style is more like 3 deaths +you in a 12 car pile up.
Alrightish

Lyrics?
on that Battlefield too, I'll Maul in these rap battles.
All you'll see is blades spinning, glowing red when I dash at ya.
Wasn't feeling this
It's only suicide prevention; rain fire till he couldn't blow back.
When his feet dangle, it's so grisly Logan Paul wouldn't show that.
OK
Spazzing out on viral vids, raging with dark features.
When it comes to KS, I will flip his shit further than Barc reaches
(Something something shark teeth)
Didn't like it
Grissom's on the case, but I'll leave it to the new guys
the fresh Tek will stop this killing spree within the viewtime.
Not feeling it

Originally Posted by Killing Spree

His mother is dead....


not sorry...




Listen....
Vs Spree U'll get burried! Rock'll expose U all fake
I'll have ur head stoned to death & placed next to Ur moms grave
This wasn't a clever line, just a threat
Yuh jaw'll get hit W/Rings on my fist! This kids fucked
I'll Die if Ram's Succeed, till then I'll punch ur chest till u spit blood
Same as the last line
The girl U loved? Got in ur head. Giver Bum the hate
A Mucinex my game..I'll Pop this joke till'he bleed to death from his face
Wasn't feeling this
Ur bars lack witt! Choke hold do this kid in
Before I add vise Gripps to ur life so U can ask ur Mom for her Opinion
There was a decent concept here, but the wording needed more work
This Man'll never grow! We all know this kid wack tho
Ur death a Must ash! Funeral'll trump Zelph lip Shadow!
Just seemed like a random diss on Zelph, with it not really hitting your opponent that hard
Rope round ur throat! Show this joke tha deal
NC was worried if u could hang ur head..Do it & let us know ur real
Again, a decent idea in here somewhere, but poorly executed.

I wasn't feeling that much here, but I still have a pretty clear win for Bleak, as he had a couple of alright lines, while Killing Spree didn't have any.

Vote - Bleak

[Alvin Karpis]

I actually got KS here
Just wasn’t feelin Bleaks formatting of the verse, couple decent lines but nothing crazy
KS had some concepts but needs to improve on wording but like the verse better
Overall KS wins

[classickERBL]

bleak got this , weak lines , and poor rhyme pattern but better den spree filler verse
v-bleak

[Orc]

Needs more votes

[WRATH]

Originally Posted by bleak

Fisticuffs?
Clean my rings on your jeans, my swings land stiffer
I ain't just burning bridges if I wash my hands w/ ya
Think of killing sprees, see: Capone in a styled tux.
Your style is more like 3 deaths +you in a 12 car pile up.

Tame open

Lyrics?
on that Battlefield too, I'll Maul in these rap battles.
All you'll see is blades spinning, glowing red when I dash at ya.

Weak connection

It's only suicide prevention; rain fire till he couldn't blow back.
When his feet dangle, it's so grisly Logan Paul wouldn't show that.

Lol okay

Spazzing out on viral vids, raging with dark features.
When it comes to KS, I will flip his shit further than Barc reaches

Okay

(Something something shark teeth)
Grissom's on the case, but I'll leave it to the new guys
the fresh Tek will stop this killing spree within the viewtime.

Eh

Listen....
Vs Spree U'll get burried! Rock'll expose U all fake
I'll have ur head stoned to death & placed next to Ur moms grave

Okay

Yuh jaw'll get hit W/Rings on my fist! This kids fucked
I'll Die if Ram's Succeed, till then I'll punch ur chest till u spit blood

Eh

The girl U loved? Got in ur head. Giver Bum the hate
A Mucinex my game..I'll Pop this joke till'he bleed to death from his face

Amusin ex, it's okay wish it hit harder

Ur bars lack witt! Choke hold do this kid in
Before I add vise Gripps to ur life so U can ask ur Mom for her Opinion

Okay

This Man'll never grow! We all know this kid wack tho
Ur death a Must ash! Funeral'll trump Zelph lip Shadow!

Eh reaching

Rope round ur throat! Show this joke tha deal
NC was worried if u could hang ur head..Do it & let us know ur real

Pretty good


V spree

[Profit]

Fisticuffs?
Clean my rings on your jeans, my swings land stiffer
I ain't just burning bridges if I wash my hands w/ ya

Ooook

Think of killing sprees, see: Capone in a styled tux.
Your style is more like 3 deaths +you in a 12 car pile up.

Ooook

Lyrics?
on that Battlefield too, I'll Maul in these rap battles.
All you'll see is blades spinning, glowing red when I dash at ya.

Ehh

It's only suicide prevention; rain fire till he couldn't blow back.
When his feet dangle, it's so grisly Logan Paul wouldn't show that.

Ok

Spazzing out on viral vids, raging with dark features.
When it comes to KS, I will flip his shit further than Barc reaches

Nah

(Something something shark teeth)
Grissom's on the case, but I'll leave it to the new guys
the fresh Tek will stop this killing spree within the viewtime.

Nah





Listen....
Vs Spree U'll get burried! Rock'll expose U all fake
I'll have ur head stoned to death & placed next to Ur moms grave

Ooook

Yuh jaw'll get hit W/Rings on my fist! This kids fucked
I'll Die if Ram's Succeed, till then I'll punch ur chest till u spit blood

Nah

The girl U loved? Got in ur head. Giver Bum the hate
A Mucinex my game..I'll Pop this joke till'he bleed to death from his face

Cool


Ur bars lack witt! Choke hold do this kid in
Before I add vise Gripps to ur life so U can ask ur Mom for her Opinion

Oooook

This Man'll never grow! We all know this kid wack tho
Ur death a Must ash! Funeral'll trump Zelph lip Shadow!

Ehhh

Rope round ur throat! Show this joke tha deal
NC was worried if u could hang ur head..Do it & let us know ur real

Ooook

Ion know this kinda weak battle, nothing stood out or landed extremely hard but overall I got spree edging this with a kinda nice line n a few light jabs vs a few light jabs.. close n really could go either way just felt spree was more aggressive here, while bleak left me with a few bars I felt needed more.. vote spree

[Diablo]

Bleak: I think the format hurt you here, couple decent jabs but yeah the formatting did you no favours and lead to a lot lacking impact for me. You had the twelve car pile up maybe but fizzled out towards the end.

KS: I think a few people slept on the Diaphragm/Die if ram thing but I got it. I see you're quite wordplay focused in your verse, which is good, but maybe throw a few diff attacks rather than just relying on that one thing as a crutch. I noticed Broke does similar, so maybe thats an RB thing now? I dunno. I don't peep there too heavy. Regardless, Killing Spree got this with both consistency and more creativity for me.

[BROKE LESNAR]

Spree wins 4-2