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Old 03-31-2014, 12:29 AM   #1
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foster step child,
.....right now I'm just watching x-files
taking me back to when I used to throw rocks at reptiles
bitches used me for lots of sex- wild? Nah, just zoo shit
mol's the new shit. I ain't even think y'all do thizz?
the monster's brutal. It's just constant clueless
sleep walking on waves where your noggin's useless
Ever been trapped in ecstasy? Disasters destined
Shit I still do that dance that Mac perfected
Imagine endless possiblities. Life? That's the legend
Casket steppin'. One foot in ..another tragic lesson
Life's just a haunted fucking house w/o the Casper friendship
Lets do dabs with Freddy's fingers- lets
Lets just stab you to confetti, Bieber
Isn't this just a jagged & messy femur..?
& where's Em? I'll kill that faggot on jerry springer
Make his little murder an orgasm
Artsy fucking pervert, bloody sherbet & porn magic
like this is really scary like there's a burglar at your address
Night-stalker to fucking pipe-droppers
Bet your pretty little wife would whore out for the right offer
Some nice Prada? A tight Mazda?
the eyes, whoa just, you're quite gorgeous
I'd like to dice your ribs! Private I-spy cadavers in the closet
Fuck material women, use their assholes as an object
Just glad I wasn't born in a black hole like the projects
Don't mean I ain't down'ta make a'couple castles outta dogshit
lol stupid fucking idiots, you're killing me
ever squeezed Molly out your pores? Silly string
Dumb ass, this is some serious fucking bull shit
It's weird. It appears we're furious judging pulses
LIKE ARE YOU EVEN LIVING? that's a tough little question
Sweet talk? Lol, I prefer the suck nipple method

Eat shit? :"/ ;)
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Old 03-31-2014, 01:51 AM   #2
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I don't know what to do.. or say

But w/e i post will contain drugs bitches and killing

Beleee dat
bleed bath.
a blood bath
exactly what i was hoping for
vintage wise as usual


foster step child,
.....right now I'm just watching x-files
taking me back to when I used to throw rocks at reptiles

the monster's brutal. It's just constant clueless
sleep walking on waves where your noggin's useless

sick opener

casper friendship was good too, among others.
this was dripping with originality and blood and semen
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Old 03-31-2014, 09:39 AM   #3
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This was awkward, actually.
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Old 04-02-2014, 08:34 AM   #4
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Old 04-02-2014, 10:22 AM   #5
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nice feed @Sicc youre real good.

thought this was more of your vintage stuff but improved. You bring up slight references and pronouns that enhance small snippets of rhyming. This exercise was nice.
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Old 04-02-2014, 12:54 PM   #6
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Your style lately screams 'I WANT YOU TO EAT SHIT AND DIE'


but in reality, it's Aesop Rock mixed with punk and drug culture. Nothing impressive but not exactly boring either. There's plenty of needles to grip hold of, so to speak.

Imagine endless possiblities. Life? That's the legend
Casket steppin'. One foot in ..another tragic lesson
^Yeah. Thiz waz dope.

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Old 04-02-2014, 03:54 PM   #7
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Old 04-02-2014, 06:41 PM   #8
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The cum dribble message

Dope stuff
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Old 04-02-2014, 09:36 PM   #9
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foster step child,
.....right now I'm just watching x-files
taking me back to when I used to throw rocks at reptiles

^^Nice.

Imagine endless possiblities. Life? That's the legend
Casket steppin'. One foot in ..another tragic lesson
Life's just a haunted fucking house w/o the Casper friendship
Lets do dabs with Freddy's fingers- lets
Lets just stab you to confetti,

^^Sick with it.

I'd like to dice your ribs! Private I-spy cadavers in the closet
Fuck material women, use their assholes as an object
Just glad I wasn't born in a black hole like the projects
Don't mean I ain't down'ta make a'couple castles outta dogshit

^^Lol.

Good shit Wise...enjoyed the read from top to bottom so kudos.

Stay uppity.
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Old 04-02-2014, 09:42 PM   #10
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opening was very music. much nice, super like.

good writing from you when you wrote this, wise ways.
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The flow in this piece was perfect, that's the first thing I have to say...it didn't fall off once, genuinely impressed at how smooth this was. It was complex shit too, the short and to-the-point lines hide the deceptive complexity of the piece, the schemes going on in this were crazy, You are right, it is kind of goofy but it is also kind of probably my favourite piece I've read in this forum for a while, it's my kind of humour and my kind of style of writing so it was all pretty perfect to me. Nothing I can even criticize...I feel bad for not saying something could be better but I don't see anything that I thought wasn't good enough. It's like you were talking to nobody and everybody at the same time, and that's how I feel when I write. Dope piece man, not much more I can say other than that, props.
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My favourite part.
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I'd like to dice your ribs! Private I-spy cadavers in the closet
Fuck material women, use their assholes as an object
Just glad I wasn't born in a black hole like the projects
Don't mean I ain't down'ta make a'couple castles outta dogs hit

i don think I'm the first one to quote this but yeah. this was your major highlight for me although its always entertaining all the way through the read something you leak out of your chemical river.

you seem to make good use of your drugs and i like that.

very natural inclination towards unique turn of phrase and macabre rape porn. somehow this delicate combination works for you well.

thanks for listening!
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I need to quit. I want to move to Salem so I can be with my big sister and my nieces and grand nephew but it's hard . It really is so hard. It's the most terrible feeling I ever felt because destroying everyone around me
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